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| 11 Mar 2014 11:33 AM |
| Alright but I hate the bit when he jumps out qq |
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| 11 Mar 2014 12:14 PM |
| I loved it all!, but the jumping out part was a bit of a cliche if you ask me. also, if i were him, i wouldn't have thrown all my food and stuff into a dark area. but its lik 8/10! |
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| 11 Mar 2014 12:16 PM |
| also a suggestion. I would make a background sounds, on for inside, one for out, and maybe ad zombie sounds. |
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| 11 Mar 2014 12:22 PM |
| Also did you script this or use stop motion? |
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| 11 Mar 2014 12:23 PM |
| ok. I usualy script mine, as it is a little easeir and smoother. |
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| 11 Mar 2014 12:29 PM |
In the begining https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lz5eHWeNo-E&list=UUWXeZHY2GWhET2VQ1xTbVdQ
I was a little rushed and it was glitching, so I didnt fine toon the head to mooth slowly, and forgo tthe hair, but it took two mins to script that. |
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| 11 Mar 2014 02:01 PM |
| I tried to stop motion before, but i always fail... So now i'm using the animation plugin, once i start recording, i run the animation using some command... And it goes perfect. |
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| 12 Mar 2014 03:17 PM |
Looks really nice! I personally don't have the patience to make something like this frame-by-frame.
A few things you might want to improve on:
- The black bars on the side (If you're just cropping out the leaderboard and the guis, try moving the camera angle out and zooming in on your editing program. It should stay high(ish) quality if you record it properly.
If you dont know why the bars are there, it's because you aren't recording at the right resolution. Make sure your monitor/program is set to something 16:9 (i.e 1920x1080)
- That jumping out scene It really had some potential, but you needed to keep it moving. If you try it again, i'd record the stop motion normally for the jump and then reduce the speed about halfway during the editing process. Although for this to work you'd ideally want to increase the amount of frames that you use
- The camera is always shaking Its painful to see the camera moving about while the other stuff is moving around. This might be good during something like an earthquake or intense running scene, but even then it would need to be short. If in studio, you should have a camera in workspace that has a set position of where your camera is. Choose a spot that you like, and once you're done setting up the frame, paste the old position back into the camera.
Other than those, it's a really nice concept that utilizes dynamic lighting. Good job :) |
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| 12 Mar 2014 04:08 PM |
As a apocalypse rising fan, This is pretty good and accurate. You did pretty well, I didn't mind the jumping out bit but the zombies could have been improved. 8.5/10
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| 12 Mar 2014 04:11 PM |
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D8ZleHAxJ-Q The face movement could've worked better but I did pretty good, amirite?
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