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Re: Vaktovian Short Story, (Roleplay) created for fun.

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Aizlynne is not online. Aizlynne
Joined: 15 Jul 2011
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09 Mar 2014 02:33 PM
VAKTOVIAN Short Story PT. 1 (Roleplay)

Looking up at the freshly bruised sky, I grimaced. It looked like a storm was on its way. It would not really matter though; none of us are affected by it anyways. I felt the wind slightly blow through my short black hair; it felt quite nice on my neck.
As I looked around the clearing, I spotted Vaktovians and VACCINES busy training or standing in hushed groups with their friends. A couple generals stood silently watching, intensely like a hawk. I watched a general with interest for a bit, until he looked me in the eyes and I felt my stomach drop. I dropped my gaze quickly.
Standing next to my friends helped calm my irrational anxieties though, FailLogic and Candiigal had my back and it sure helped an anxious stage one VAC. I squinted my eyes and looked around the shrouded clearing for my other friends. I saw LeonVX sword dueling a young VACCINE, while Xerland2 was busy discussing battle plans with Vaktovians. They all looked so confident, and I wished I could be like that too.
I was so busy staring at everyone that I hadn’t noticed Candi and Fail had seemingly disappeared. I must have been really zoned out or something. I made my way through the crowd of Vak’s when I stopped mid stride. I felt precipitation gather on my forehead, and I clutched my gun tighter. Three high ranks brushed against my side. Karol, Cod and Azura.
I turned my head to watch all three of them. Codruler turned his head as well, and we made quick eye contact before he turned forward. I stood there frigid, watching Azura elegantly stride behind them, holding her head high. My hands felt clammy while holding my gun. High ranks intimidated me, and they sure did a good job of it.
I walked over to a tree outside of where everyone was, and I sat down by myself quietly. I wish I wasn’t so nervous while I was with my fellow comrades. I mean, it’s completely unnecessary. Stage one VACCINES are prone to messing up anyways. I knew I shouldn’t be afraid of everyone who crossed my path. I had to show confidence and intelligence if I wanted to be successful. Concentrating on my arm with its glowing purple lights helped calm me. I daydreamed for a while, wondering what others in my group thought of me.
Maybe they think I’m stupid. On the other hand, maybe they don’t even notice me. That would actually be the best, when you aren’t getting noticed you aren’t showing people you’re flaws. When you aren’t noticed, then people won’t take notice in your mistakes. I promised myself now that I would be as silent as possible with my comrades and high ranks.
After for what seemed to be awhile of lollygagging, I noticed it was entirely too quiet. I ran back to the clearing to find no one was there. I was out of breath, and I was extremely confused. Something is wrong, why did everyone just leave? I held my gun close to my chest, looking on the ground for any weapons left behind. There was a glowing red sword peeking out from under the bushes and I marched over to pick it up.
Hooking the sword on my back, I realized that I had to find my comrades. There’s no way I’m going to wonder around SMO alone. I made my way through a cave, searching for any sign of life.
Suddenly, I felt the wind knocked out of me. I was thrown against a tree and the back of my skull hit hard. I couldn’t breathe- the force was too hard against me. I struggled with all my might to throw the masculine stranger off of me, full adrenaline kicking in. He sure wasn’t a Vak, he looked too human and he smelled of burning bodies.
I took my gun and smashed it onto the man’s foot, hearing his savaged cry. I escaped from his grasp, and tried running away. It was a raider. For sure. He must have been camping there, waiting for a weak VACCINE to helplessly walk by. As I tried to run, I could hear him behind me, his putrid breath hot against my ear. He then leaped on me, smashing my face into the dirt.
My nose felt like it was broken, and my lungs felt like they would collapse. The raider was so much incredibly stronger than me, and I was trying to simply breathe. He then took out his sword, and held it too my neck. I closed my eyes, not wanting to see his blackened eyes and witness my own death.
“You filthy, weak VACCINE. I’m going to finish you slowly, so you can feel the pain I went through when you guys killed my brother. You’re going to taste death creeping into your veins, polluting your body and making you numb. I hope you feel every last heartbeat drain from your feeble body, I hope it burns as much as it will when they burn your worthless body themselves.” The man spat into my ear, his voice as sharp as my blade.
“No, she’s not. She is going to live. You on the other hand, my friend, won’t even be burned. You’ll rot here, and maggots will feast upon your body.” A familiar, warming but sharp voice said. It was Karol.
I kept my eyes closed as I felt the raider die on me, and easily dragged off me. I knew he was dead, but I still didn’t want to open my eyes. I was mortified. I was almost killed, and if it wasn’t for my comrades saving me, I would have been long gone and forgotten. I opened my eyes to see Karol wiping his blade off, and shaking his head irritably.
On my right, Cod stood there and looked down at me. He reached out his hand to help me up, and I took it willingly. It was cold and smooth like the back of a summer leaf, and I needed the support to even get up. On my left, Azura carefully pulled out a weird looking gun. She pointed it towards me, and sparks of green shot out. Immediately, I felt my body start to recover.
I felt the throbbing in my neck seem to vanish, and the cuts seemed to mend together within a matter of seconds without leaving a trace. My icy blue eyes widened, I was completely floored at the odd gun she healed me with. I felt as good as new!
“It’s a medi-gun. You’ll be using these guns a lot on the field.” Azura said softly, her words were as soothing and silky as honey. She handed it to me, and I strapped it on my back.
“You should be more careful Aizlynne, do not wonder alone. You could have taken quite the toll.” Karol nodded gruffly, while watching the distance.
“Yes sir.” I said, but I kept to myself that I had no idea what just happened.
“I want you to find your friend, Fail. He’ll keep his eye on you. He’s just north of us, if he’s in trouble heal him with the medi-gun Azura gave you.” Karol said, and Cod nodded.
“Yes sir.” I said while trying to figure out where north even was.
“Cod, Azura and I need to attend to a group of VACCINES struggling east of us. Don’t waste time, VACCINE. Get there immediately.” Karol instructed, while the three of them ran off in the other direction.
I paused looking down at the silent raider, his eyes rolled back into head. Disgusting, I thought. I ran north as fast as I could, desperate to reach Fail and others.
When I reached Fail, I took notice in my surroundings. Tons of raiders were getting slaughtered. I watched Yeller decapitate a couple men, while Sindorr and Xerland worked together to kill off the raiders, endlessly pouring into the field. I ran alongside Fail, taking out my gun and shooting any raider I spotted. I cursed at myself, because I kept missing and wasting bullets.
Instead when a raider ran past me, I would stab the hell out of them. As I improved on field, I watched and looked out for my comrades. Candi was perched on a cliff, with Buff and a couple others. They sniped up there, and I couldn’t help but grin when Candi got a perfect headshot. She would get the slyest look on her face, and it looked like she got even more excited when she did well.
I made eye contact with her, then I felt pressure on my chest and I was on the ground. I couldn’t see anything, but I could smell and feel a dead raider’s body next to mine. Why was I on the ground..What the heck just happened..? I couldn’t get up.
I felt strong arms carry me away from all the noise, but I still couldn’t figure out what was happening. I was carefully set in a bed of moss, and I felt sleepy and weak. My chest felt weird, and it even stung a little.
“Get a medi-gun now!” I heard Fail yell, desperately.
“I’m all out of charge!” Candi shrieked, and I felt her sit down next to me. Her soft hands stroked my spiky short hair, and I was confused as to why they were freaking out.
“It’s okay Aizlynne, we’ll get you a medi-gun. You’ll be okay, I promise.” Candi said.
I wanted to inform her that I was beyond okay; I just couldn’t seem to open my eyes, speak or get up for some reason. Candi was the one who needed the comforting, not me!
“I have a medi-gun. Use it on her. I need to help these VACCINES out.” I heard Xerland say, and I felt the healing take over my body, as I started to be able to function more properly.
I opened my eyes to see the three of them around me. Fail held the gun to my chest, and Candi continued petting my hair. Xerland was just about to leave when two raiders ran toward us. I was about to shout a warning to Xer, when he quickly took out his gun and shot them both with one bullet. I felt my jaw drop open as both of the raiders collapsed like falling trees. Xerland nodded, and ran off to aid others.
“Well, that’s pretty much disgusting.” Candi retorted, clearly not affected by witnessing the death of either of them. “Aiz, you sure are prone to-” I cut her off.
“I ALMOST DIED. TWICE. IN ONE DAY.” I shouted.
“Calm down! You’re not going to DIE, we have your back! Plus, we have these handy-dandy medi-guns.” She grinned, while watching Fail continue to mend me.
“We never lose.” Fail commented, while putting the healing gun away.
“Yeah, and if I find the person who decided to go psycho bullets on you, I’m going to rip their throat out and feed it to the rats.” Candi said.
“Thanks…” I said, getting up.
Suddenly I felt the overwhelming need to hug both of them, even though VACCINES and Vaktovians aren’t suppose to feel. I hugged Fail and then Candi tightly, even though it was so lame. I was so happy they had my back. Candi laughed awkwardly, and Fail’s eyes widened.
I didn’t mind though. This was the start of my Vaktovian career. I looked over to the sound of Sindorr clearing his throat, and I quickly stopped hugging them.
“The raid hasn’t been won yet, comrades.” Sindorr said, while nodding for Fail to come with him.
I nodded with a blank expression, but in the inside, I was smiling. This was only the start. I had so much to learn, and with the help of my comrades, I knew I would succeed. Candi and I shared a look, before she headed off back to her position. I had a lot ahead of me, and I was excited. This was only the beginning, and I was just blossoming.
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888min3 is online. 888min3
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09 Mar 2014 02:34 PM
I liked the end.
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Limitex is not online. Limitex
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09 Mar 2014 02:34 PM
wowcool
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FailLogic is not online. FailLogic
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09 Mar 2014 02:46 PM
cant wait for part 2

good job!
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MrPwncaik is not online. MrPwncaik
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09 Mar 2014 02:48 PM
Interesting
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Yeller is not online. Yeller
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09 Mar 2014 03:12 PM
I skimmed a bit since it was long, but yeah, it is very good. Nice work on it.
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Vaxire is not online. Vaxire
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09 Mar 2014 03:14 PM
interesting

~V
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SolitaryDefined is not online. SolitaryDefined
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09 Mar 2014 03:20 PM
Indent the paragraphs tho

-SolitaryDefined
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Dhammapada is online. Dhammapada
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09 Mar 2014 03:22 PM
Let me make some edits.

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uncoverloser is not online. uncoverloser
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09 Mar 2014 03:24 PM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dhamapa
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lucky108 is not online. lucky108
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09 Mar 2014 03:25 PM
nice.

-ideas are bulletproof-
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Dhammapada is online. Dhammapada
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09 Mar 2014 03:54 PM
pastebin.com/Fw4S3CT4

yay. Also, keep in mind, and I am sure most Vaktovians know; I am being merciful.
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Aizlynne is not online. Aizlynne
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09 Mar 2014 04:08 PM
Sorry for the spelling and grammar mistakes guys, and originally the paragraphs were indented. The set up of the page got a little messed up, due to copy and paste from Microsoft word. Spelling and grammar isn't what I shine in, to say the least. Thank you all for your nice and respectful comments. It means a lot.
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Dhammapada is online. Dhammapada
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09 Mar 2014 04:58 PM
I think my edit was better.
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Nikui is not online. Nikui
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09 Mar 2014 07:47 PM
Ha, that was awesome.
“Yeah, and if I find the person who decided to go psycho bullets on you, I’m going to rip their throat out and feed it to the rats.”
How nice, haahaa.
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PooBrainz is not online. PooBrainz
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09 Mar 2014 07:50 PM
That was great. I'm tracking this thread.
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TriedanDawn is not online. TriedanDawn
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09 Mar 2014 08:00 PM
Can't wait for Part 2! This was amazing to read.
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JACKSONTYLERHALL is not online. JACKSONTYLERHALL
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09 Mar 2014 08:18 PM
Marvelous. I enjoyed, keep it up.

-Stage 4 Aqarus Myani Jupiter
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TenebrarumFrenos is not online. TenebrarumFrenos
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09 Mar 2014 08:22 PM
Liked it!
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Rebelation is not online. Rebelation
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09 Mar 2014 08:33 PM
Amazing. It'd be cool if you narrated in places such as the VTG and Ascendancy. Can't wait for the next, if there is one.
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