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| 09 Mar 2014 04:17 PM |
...what if there was an anti-torivor that was, instead of pure black, pure white?
What if it worked with guns instead of swords, and its king wore a red hat, red sunglasses, and a red tie instead of blue like me?
What if that was the entity in the torivor corruption story? The king of the anti-torivors?
What would the species of the anti-torivors be called, though? Rovirots?
Or are these ideas terrible and we shouldn't use them in the continuation of the OT Torivor Corruption Story which I'm not even sure I'm completing but I'll suggest (terrible) ideas for so that I don't feel like a completely useless person? |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:19 PM |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:20 PM |
"http://www.roblox.com/My/NewMessage.aspx?RecipientID=36450983"
I was just thinking about how somebody would tell me to PM her... |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:21 PM |
why not the unknown one be an exiled torivor which was too powerful
he also needs a name and len needs his ability to eat back
and did you know like in my[dzu]'s hyperbike game's thumbnail, the model that is yours (the blue android-style model for you) has a red recolor
but I probably will never use it because I made Curzon's (the other one) red |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:23 PM |
"why not the unknown one be an exiled torivor which was too powerful
he also needs a name and len needs his ability to eat back
and did you know like in my[dzu]'s hyperbike game's thumbnail, the model that is yours (the blue android-style model for you) has a red recolor
but I probably will never use it because I made Curzon's (the other one) red"
Maybe the anti-torivors were once a part of the torivor kingdom but were then banished?
What if the anti-torivor king once ruled aside Song(me)?
Yah...like...uh...Sound? Good point, maybe we'll have another misadventure of Song's Edomic. |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:26 PM |
1. make his name sound somewhat evil 2. I should make some stupid vocaloid song called edomic which uses references from books for the "words" to use the magic (like the familiars series) 3. I've rewritten many chapters of the second story we started writing but we can borrow ideas from each one |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:29 PM |
"1. make his name sound somewhat evil 2. I should make some stupid vocaloid song called edomic which uses references from books for the "words" to use the magic (like the familiars series) 3. I've rewritten many chapters of the second story we started writing but we can borrow ideas from each one"
Well, my username is "SongofSwords," and I'd assume that if this guy were to be my "opposite," his username would be SoundofGuns, so then I'd abbreviate it into Sound.
Hmm...that's actually a pretty cool idea.
Okay, but still, this is just a small idea, and I'm not 100% that I'll even help you continue the story, so we may wind up with this being pointless. |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:33 PM |
| I would think the torivor exile/unknown one would be someone so expert in magic he had no need for weapons, and he had a dark name (I can't remember what I put it as) and he would be the reason that the king is serving longer than usual, because he was refused as the heir..? |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:34 PM |
DUN DUN DUN
(I'm clerkpuppy34, namechanged) ๑۞๑,¸¸,ø¤º°`°๑۩ oт ғorυмer ๑۩ ,¸¸,ø¤º°`°๑۞๑
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:35 PM |
"I would think the torivor exile/unknown one would be someone so expert in magic he had no need for weapons, and he had a dark name (I can't remember what I put it as) and he would be the reason that the king is serving longer than usual, because he was refused as the heir..?"
I've always imagined that the torivor realms "monarchy" wasn't really a monarchy, it was more of a...power level...
Like, Song, as the Torivor King, is as that position because the King because her thought she was talented enough to rule...
...so, as my thoughts say, that'd probably work... |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:38 PM |
since when did the Song in the story have a gender I thought we just called him a he because that's normal, and also a king.
I was also thinking that if we were to start writing, we skip ahead a few months, but there's a prologue that just states when len comes there in the first place, and I'm also thinking he gets really angry at first because he wants to go home |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:39 PM |
I also spent 20 robux making something very useless with a meme which is dead.
I was very bored and it was made in 5 minutes with powerpoint
http://www.roblox.com/ok-place?id=126710361 |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:40 PM |
"since when did the Song in the story have a gender I thought we just called him a he because that's normal, and also a king.
I was also thinking that if we were to start writing, we skip ahead a few months, but there's a prologue that just states when len comes there in the first place, and I'm also thinking he gets really angry at first because he wants to go home"
I was thinking about that, too, and you're right.
Okay, well, I think that'd work well, but what if we involve other OT'ers in the story?
What if at the end, Song creates a portal that links the OT village and the Torivor Kingdom permanently, and with the torivors' help, OT goes from a "medieval" village to a bustling, futuristic city?
What if the Torivor Kingdom still stays the same, but OT'ers and torivors get along together in harmony in both worlds?
Maybe we could call each "section" of the story a season...would season 3 be that? |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:41 PM |
"I also spent 20 robux making something very useless with a meme which is dead.
I was very bored and it was made in 5 minutes with powerpoint
http://www.roblox.com/ok-place?id=126710361"
That's...interesting, to say the least... |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:44 PM |
I'd always imagined there was always a portal in some portal room in the castle and the wagon in the village
and the villagers mostly fear them
your helping to make it a city is good idea and then they could become in harmony or whatever
and I don't understand the season part
I was always thinking that the story after len arrived would be that he gets angry right when he first arrives, he's given a room and he gets upset or whatever, and then over time he opens up to talking again and whatever and then later song starts teaching him things like handling swords and magic and whatever else
and also gymnastics I don't know why |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:48 PM |
"I'd always imagined there was always a portal in some portal room in the castle and the wagon in the village
and the villagers mostly fear them
your helping to make it a city is good idea and then they could become in harmony or whatever
and I don't understand the season part
I was always thinking that the story after len arrived would be that he gets angry right when he first arrives, he's given a room and he gets upset or whatever, and then over time he opens up to talking again and whatever and then later song starts teaching him things like handling swords and magic and whatever else
and also gymnastics I don't know why"
Oh...I always thought that the wagon was Edomically enchanted by Song to take him to/from the torivor kingdom, and that whenever Song returned to the torivor castle with it, it would automatically return to a garage kind of thing where Song could use it at any time...
Yah, so that's why I thought that opening the portal up and allowing OT'ers and torivors to communicate would help.
Yah.
Like, we had a huge pause between the original chapters and the new ones that we might make, so what if we divided it into seasons to make our lives easier, where between the pauses we take a break from typing them to brainstorm/relax?
Yah, that'd probably work. Maybe Song could take him on as an "apprentice..." |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:50 PM |
so each season is pretty much a story?
and the reason for that training thing is because i wouldn't see Song leaving Len being lazy and sleeping all day with nothing else to do |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:54 PM |
"so each season is pretty much a story?
and the reason for that training thing is because i wouldn't see Song leaving Len being lazy and sleeping all day with nothing else to do"
Yah.
Exactly! The training would help a lot with fighting the villain. |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:55 PM |
and also so len does not lazy ok
but he still gets frustrated when he can't do something |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:56 PM |
"and also so len does not lazy ok
but he still gets frustrated when he can't do something"
Yep, because in the story we made him w-a-y too overemotional... ;) |
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| 09 Mar 2014 04:57 PM |
| I always think that was one of the things that the unknown one added to his corruption and nobody noticed. |
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| 09 Mar 2014 05:08 PM |
| so was this just randomized thinking or are we actually writing this |
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| 09 Mar 2014 05:10 PM |
I'm not sure, but since it's Sunday, I, unfortunately, don't have time to start it without having to wait until next weekend to finish it...
Can we wait until Easter and beyond? Usually at that time school slows down tremendously (There's the NJ Ask, too, which means I'm gonna have a whole week of no homework) and I get the opportunity to go on the computer after school.
Y'know how like in September -- November I was allowed on all the time? That was because I had few tests and not much homework, either. :') |
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| 09 Mar 2014 05:11 PM |
we still could start now
i earned my two story house on pizza place and added tons of varknox stuff in it so i am leaving game so |
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