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| 05 Mar 2014 04:26 PM |
Scroll=Chapter
So let's begin!
Prologue Scroll: The Attack at Night
It was a night in the land of Robloxia, not a beast was stirring during this mystic night. The flute player was playing a mystic song as Sir Randus had looked over the mystic night to see a dragon appear in the shadows. The dragon was named Scorchius. It howled, waking up the mystic land of Robloxia.
It screeched, as after the screech it had taken down a tower. The Elf horde had walked over the mountain, seeking the dragon’s wrath. “Go forth, Scorchius,” The emperor of Elves said “Go forth.”
Catapults fired as Scorchius burned houses, killing an innocent, but wealthy family. The child in there, Syrus stood there, watching the house die. He had walked out and cried. The dragon walked up to him. “MONSTER, YOU’RE A MONSTER!” Syrus yelled. He had backed up until a catapult hit his head; a red, swollen spot appeared on his head as the dragon sat down.
The sunlight had shunned among the mystic land, Syrus had sat down, crying.
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JunJoe
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:28 PM |
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:29 PM |
@Britan Who cares about RPing? |
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:29 PM |
You do obviously if you make crappy fanfics
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowForum.aspx?ForumID=23 |
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randy295
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:30 PM |
I pretty much am sure this is the first Story with Elves as bad guys Maybe some Elves may betray their own kind and maybe some Humans will betray their own kind to... Yeah |
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chicka123
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:32 PM |
"10/10" -- IGN Article on IGN: We were paid to give this a 10/10. |
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randy295
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:33 PM |
@Chicka So you really like it?
My feedback on my character,Sir Randus: Wow nice nightgazing! I hope you spotted a Dragon That destroyed most of the Town! |
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:33 PM |
@Chicka
I try my hardest to make this story better and better, okay? |
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:34 PM |
| You say that every time and every time it's false |
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randy295
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:35 PM |
@Britians Hold on,HOld on,Whats with you and Shadowfan being Angry at Eachother? |
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:36 PM |
@Randy Also, the Elf-Human war will be one whole arc. |
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randy295
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:36 PM |
@Shadow I see Already Tracked this thread |
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:36 PM |
@randy
Its not just me, it's more than 3/4 of OT
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:38 PM |
First, how the hell did the elves befriend a dragon, let alone make him do what they want Second, HOW THE HELL DID NO ONE SEE OR HEAR THIS HUGE FIRE-BREATHING DRAGON
ɪғ ᴛʜᴇ ᴍᴀɴ/ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴛʜᴇ ᴘᴏᴡᴇʀ/ᴄᴀɴ'ᴛ ᴋᴇᴇᴘ ɪᴛ ᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ᴄᴏɴᴛʀᴏʟ/sᴏᴍᴇ ʜᴇᴀᴅs ᴀʀᴇ ɢᴏɴɴᴀ ʀᴏʟʟ |
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randy295
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:40 PM |
@Mikey Wow that sprouted me thinking a new Topic! Well either People were to Terrified Or That They are Simply Deaf
About Elves befriending a Dragon........ I dont really know...ASk the creator? |
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:40 PM |
@Mikey Sir Randus was the first, but he should've warned everyone. But he is still a good addition to the story. |
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randy295
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:41 PM |
Now my Letter(Sometimes as commentary) So i can send it to the past: Dear Sir Randus, As you can see,I am your descedant and ive been dissapointed because you could have warned everyone but noooo,Alot of Injuries and Casuallities have been caused,Seriously,Just next time Warn Everyone From,Randy
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:42 PM |
What about hearing? I doubt Sir Randus was the ONLY one to hear it. It's a huge damn dragon! It isn't going to silently and effortlessly glide across the night sky! It's like trying to quietly sail a boat at night!
ɪғ ᴛʜᴇ ᴍᴀɴ/ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴛʜᴇ ᴘᴏᴡᴇʀ/ᴄᴀɴ'ᴛ ᴋᴇᴇᴘ ɪᴛ ᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ᴄᴏɴᴛʀᴏʟ/sᴏᴍᴇ ʜᴇᴀᴅs ᴀʀᴇ ɢᴏɴɴᴀ ʀᴏʟʟ |
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randy295
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:43 PM |
@MIkey You know,you crictize very good,maybe your crictism may let shadowfan improve and let him explain...Erm...More logically? Yeah... |
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:45 PM |
idk I've tried before tbh the improvement wasn't too huge but idk baby steps
ɪғ ᴛʜᴇ ᴍᴀɴ/ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴛʜᴇ ᴘᴏᴡᴇʀ/ᴄᴀɴ'ᴛ ᴋᴇᴇᴘ ɪᴛ ᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ᴄᴏɴᴛʀᴏʟ/sᴏᴍᴇ ʜᴇᴀᴅs ᴀʀᴇ ɢᴏɴɴᴀ ʀᴏʟʟ |
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:55 PM |
Scroll 1: The Spirit who cried Elf
A meditation sequence had gone on; Syrus was standing in place, meditating to plainsong. The door opened, a man walked in. “Syrus, sir Randus would like to see you.” The man hollered.
Syrus walked out and went to sir Randus. He had put out a sword blade. “This is Souldust, the legendary sword blade that is passed down to a family each year. I would like you to have it.” Sir Randus said. Syrus had put out his two hands and bowed.
Syrus took the sword, and put it amongst his head, the sword blade shined. A spirit had flown towards the city. “You are Syrus?” The spirit said.
“I am Syrus, what shall you do?” Syrus replied. The spirit had jumped into action and threw a scroll. The scroll had read:
Dear Sir Randus and his almighty men,
I am the Elf Emperor and I have this one message for you, you and your men will have to meet me in 48 hours. If you do not come, there will be a castle siege.
Signed,
~Elf Emperor~
Syrus had given the scroll to Sir Randus and he had sat down. “Syrus, we ask you for this one task, go to the kingdom.” Sir Randus said. Syrus nodded, and went on horse.
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randy295
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| 05 Mar 2014 05:05 PM |
Ah i see... Ill be expecting a "Meeting" or perhaps a Castle Siege... Go Syrus and Sir Randus! So basically Syrus is you right? Well This is still baby sets so...OK so far,The souldust must not be stolen |
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| 05 Mar 2014 05:06 PM |
| Syrus is me, but not the Overpowered me. |
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