Skanea
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| 04 Mar 2014 03:39 PM |
It was that one I was working on yesterday if I get a lot of yes I'll post it in the thread
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| 04 Mar 2014 03:40 PM |
Firstly, what do they eat?
Main character's name? |
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drpece231
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| 04 Mar 2014 03:40 PM |
| Cant be worse then shadowfans work, so okay |
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LosVider
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GyroPulse
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Skanea
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| 04 Mar 2014 03:41 PM |
@Hell
there's five main characters, each were created by an OTer in a previous thread that I chose would fit the story
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Typocrite
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| 04 Mar 2014 03:41 PM |
You still didn't answer what they eat
but sure
lets hear it |
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Skanea
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| 04 Mar 2014 03:49 PM |
inb4ban It's still kinda rough, once I finish it I'm gonna re-read it all, editing it a bit It's gonna look weird and clunky cause of Roblox's font n all that, it looks better onsite but I'm not gonna publish it half-done It's supposed to be kinda crude inappropriate humor This is the beginning of it
Jon woke up in another dumpster, spooning with another hobo. He tried to recall last night's antics, but it was all a blur. "Oh Jon, will you ever learn?" He sighed, "borrowing" the hobo's pants and climbing out. He took out his cell-phone and made a few calls. (JontheAsian's character, he didn't give a name.)
Fungle was in his house, relaxing with his twenty-five cats. He took a sip out of his cat shaped mug, setting it back down on the cat shaped table on the coaster with a cat on it. He straightened his cat-hair covered cat shirt. His cat-shaped phone rang. (Anikinis's character)
Charm was in his room, trying on dresses. "Oh, this is a pretty one." He said, posing in front of the mirror. "I think I'll wear it to the Pokemon Meet." He took a picture of it with his cell, when it rang. (CrazyCharmanderFan's character)
JJ was riding his bike, his training wheels leaving sick burnouts in the road. He straightened his 'Swag' snapback and sped down his driveway when his mom called him. "JJ, come inside, I made dinner!" She yelled from their porch. "Screw you, mom!" He said, giving her the finger. His cellphone vibrated in his pocket. (Chicka123's character)
Opal was just hanging around in her room, watching TV. She had a pretty normal life. A pretty boring, normal life. Her phone rang. It was Jon. The only weird part of her normal life. She picked up the phone. (OpalLightStar's character. It goes on after that, though)
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Skanea
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| 04 Mar 2014 03:50 PM |
Actually her name is Ovallightstart, but her character's name is be Opal oops
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| 04 Mar 2014 03:51 PM |
I'd say I like the idea of the introduction but it seems 2 whacky random for me at the minute
Maybe once it develops my mind will change |
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Skanea
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| 04 Mar 2014 03:53 PM |
After that part, it goes into long normal chapters, not cut off parts showing everyone's personal view but I like how it's going so far, I'm around halfway done
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Skanea
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| 05 Mar 2014 04:49 PM |
bump cause i dont want to make a new thread
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