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| 04 Mar 2014 01:32 PM |
Chorus: I will be famous (x5)
IDestroyRobloxians/1BlackFog/Black-Fog
I know I will be famouse making videos in las vegas and I know I will be hated in all different places I have gift and its not contagious. When I rap I feel like I'm in the zone, I got so many rhymes its like I got a clone I quit rap they wee gone and now they're home they make you wanna turn up and the medicine is unknown. I wouldnt be here if it weren't for the people that I love, wouldn't be here if it weren't for god up above.
Chorus: I will be famous (x5)
IDestroyRobloxians/1BlackFog/Black-Fog
I'm gonna live my life and complete my dream, I'm just the right age I'm only a teen, It like I rap like a grown-up it seems. All you gotta do is pray and it will be alright, I can see in the future for me and its bright.I know I do bad but I know god forgives, you know love, thats what he gives. Don't ever let your dream go like it sticks to you, you might have one, 2 dreams or a few. Believe, give yourself some trust,maybe you can find a four leaf cleaver and have luck. Chorus: I will be famous! (x5) |
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| 04 Mar 2014 02:21 PM |
| Nice, but make it a little longer next time. |
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| 04 Mar 2014 02:29 PM |
| Thanks charlie I didn't feel like making it long for some reason. |
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| 04 Mar 2014 03:42 PM |
| You're a Dizzy Wright fan, aren't you? |
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| 04 Mar 2014 03:50 PM |
Don't know who that is I have been working on this for a while when I was 10 its been 3 years I just had it on my pc so I just put it up I forgot to write it like This Didnt Have Time. |
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| 04 Mar 2014 03:52 PM |
I want to smash your head on a brick wall.
Just a scratch upon the skin, a drop of blood to welcome them. |
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| 04 Mar 2014 04:40 PM |
| Poetry will get you no where in life, neither will your ugly choice of words. |
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| 04 Mar 2014 08:35 PM |
"Poetry will get you no where in life"
You are an ignoramus. |
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| 05 Mar 2014 02:49 AM |
"Poetry will get you no where in life"
"You are an ignoramus." you have no right to call him that, because of the incredibly minor success rate of any aspiring artist, and because these people are actually too lazy to separate lines |
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| 05 Mar 2014 05:57 AM |
| I wasnt too lazy I forgot I had it on my pc and pasted it on and it was like that and I posted I forgot :/ |
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| 05 Mar 2014 06:47 AM |
"you have no right to call him that, because of the incredibly minor success rate of any aspiring artist, and because these people are actually too lazy to separate lines"
If you make claims such as "poetry gets you nowhere in life" then I do have a right to "call" him that. |
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| 05 Mar 2014 11:31 AM |
Needs to be longer, seems unorganized, and plus its kinda tiring to see raps about fame and wealth all the time.
8.5/10 |
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| 05 Mar 2014 12:23 PM |
pulling an ox
>Total Posts: 156 Yeaaa gtfo |
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1991Hero
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| 07 Mar 2014 11:58 PM |
| hey, yeah, sonic, let's see your five star life when you head into the mainstream... lol |
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| 08 Mar 2014 08:46 AM |
"hey, yeah, sonic, let's see your five star life when you head into the mainstream... lol"
1. There wouldn't be as many acknowledged poets if poetry could get you nowhere in life. Don't go disrespecting someone else's lifestyle to insult people on a forum.
2. Poetry is not my vocation, nor have I ever claimed it was. Just because I am addressing it as I am doesn't mean it is what I want to do. |
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| 08 Mar 2014 08:47 AM |
| Also, making it somewhere in life doesn't always equate to a "five star life". It rarely does, actually. |
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| 08 Mar 2014 10:39 AM |
| @1911 racism won't get you anywhere calling them "people". |
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| 10 Mar 2014 12:29 AM |
it obviously wasn't clear enough to you, but i assumed you were the same as them, obsessed with "making it big" in the "rap game" but let me ask you this, how successful do common RAPPERS end up? and what lifestyle are you referring to? the nihilistic one i insulted, or some sort of lifestyle centered around writing poems? |
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| 10 Mar 2014 12:31 AM |
@sik if youre talking to me, i dont see racism in what i say...
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| 10 Mar 2014 12:31 AM |
| sonic, i doubt poetry for a living, rap or not, is an effective life choice... |
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| 10 Mar 2014 05:11 AM |
50 cent before rap Projects in queens
50 cent after rap 500 million dollar house,
Sorry what did you say? |
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