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Re: _//The Legend of Motaer\\_

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alannalypinky is not online. alannalypinky
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26 Feb 2014 06:52 PM
_//Backstory\\_
Do you remember those stories your parents used to tell you? Those times when they would make up the craziest things. Tales of dragons, treasure, gods! They mostly just read off of a book...nothing much. What about the person who wrote them? That person must’ve been exceptionally creating, making new worlds....out of words. Once, there was this weird story. It was about a man born with magical powers named Motaer. This book, although written for children, was strangely enough in great detail. It told of this great wizard, who could control many elements. In the story, it tells of a ‘false’ god. No one really knows his real name, but many have dubbed him ‘The Powerful One’. He offered Motaer great power...on one cost. The magic Motaer would have received would have turned him into pure magic....no longer human. He could live forever, only dying if the magic were to run out. Naturally, Motaer accepted this deal. He began to find ways to keep his magic, most specifically a potion that would regenerate his powers. A woman named Dania formed a group entitled The Bronze Blade, who trained to kill everyone with access to magic. This group managed to weaken Motaer, forcing him to leave forever. Motaer still lives, as no one has ever found any trace of him dying. However, without him there, the Bronze Blades control more than 90 percent of the world.
Everywhere else is a hellhole. The Bronze Blades won't change it. Because of this, a group called the Silver Guardians was formed. These Guardians were all outcasts from the Blades. All of the members are against the Blades, wanting to stop this dictatorship once and for all. However, so far, they’re losing the battle, as the Guardians are very weak. Both sides are forcing people to join the war that they started. The End?
Like most kids, it was obvious to you that this was all a true story. It’s how you’re living right now: sad, injured, just wishing that it would end.

_//NOW\\_
You are the 10 percent. You happen to be living, surviving in a place not controlled by the Blades....at least, not yet. This is where your story starts. This is where you begin to learn the magic of Motaer.
If you didn’t already notice, almost all the kingdoms are horrid places. The Bronze Blades are psychos, as their lust for power compares only to a few others in the history of this land. The Guardians want to help, but their method is just as bad, seeing that the Guardians want to rule this place as well. They will force little kids into war to do so.
There is no hero in this story. Motaer did nothing to help humanity. The only thing he could’ve done? Motaer did not have to make a deal with The Powerful One. Without this event, the Blades would never have seen wizards working with an evil god. The Blades couldn’t tell who was evil or not, so their response was to kill them all. The Guardians are trying to help, with a good cause, but their method isn’t perfect either. There are small pockets of corrupt places spread through the land. There are no heroes. You have to just pick a side.

_//Kingdoms\\_
Within the land, there are four general kingdoms. Each one differs greatly from the others, and they do not have similar landscapes either.

Kingdom of Killan - The Kingdom of Killan is down in a valley, as it is in between the kingdoms of Afterdamar and Aares. This leads to the people here mainly being farmers, merchants, and families. The land is extremely fertile and leads to large orchards of green, lush plants no matter where you go. It;s not the richest land, but it is....different. Killan was the first kingdom to be taken over by the Blades, and it was taken over with little to no resistance. Hence, the Bronze Blades are centered in Killan. It might sound like a wonderful place, but if you say a single word against the Blades, you’re dead.

Kingdom of Hiliron - The Kingdom of Hiliron is a mining land. It is on the very west of the country, which is a land made mainly of ores and stone. Naturally, the people living there became miners and blacksmiths. This land is extremely cold on the surface.....hence, most citizens live underground. This leads to a problem: with rivers of lava, underground houses are prone to burning up and having really high air conditioning bills. (< See that? My attempt at a joke.) Nevertheless, people there have adapted to the living conditions. Without much sun, they’re pale and get sunburns easily while traveling. They’re usually bulkier than others, and were the last to be overtaken by the Blades.

Kingdom of Aares - The Kingdom of Aares is the middle kingdom. They lie at a reasonable height: not mountainous or low. They are near the ocean, and suffer from almost constant storms. The people eat mainly seafood and plants that can tolerate a ton of water. This is the only Kingdom where horses are widely used. Throughout the land, wild horses roam, and can be caught by skilled riders. Some of the Blades and Guardians buy horses from here, which allowed Hiliron to stay relatively untouched by the war. They have their own problems to deal with, as in Mother Earth attacking from the skies. This kingdom is currently controlled by the Blades, but the natives don’t feel the influence as strongly.

Kingdom of Afendamar - Finally, this kingdom. The Kingdom of Afendamar is in an extremely mountainous region. It hosts the home base of the Silver Guardians, as the cold climate is perfect for their planning. The Blades rarely venture up here, as the route is extremely long and arduous. Most of the citizens escaped here to be free from the Blades, not knowing that they would walk into another dictatorship. The jobs here vary, with everyone trying to work as a community to survive.


_//Cities\\_
Now, in this Kingdoms there are a few different cities. Of course, this is not a complete list. There are others, but the ones mentioned here are the best known towns. Ones with a ✮ are the capitals.

Killan:
✮ Belvoir ✮
Sudbury
Ryde
Brandon

Hiliron:
✮ Plax ✮
Buoro
Lappach
Patrica

Aares:
✮ Marat ✮
Julos
Clairac
Loyes

Afendamar:
✮ Azet ✮
Gilleje
Venge
Lisby


_//Classes\\_
This is the list of the types of people:
Blades - A member of the Bronze Blades
Lord - A lord is a landowner, usually someone associated with the Blades. Very few people are this rich, as the world is in a state of disaster.
Priest- A priest heals and supports in a battle, while worshipping the god that they believe in.
Guardian - A member of the Silver Guardians.
Knight - A knight is a warrior that fights for their kingdom, they are often suited in armor and wield swords.
Archer - An Archer specializes in long range combat, and lacks skill in melee combat.
Merchant - A merchant sells goods and is usually armed with a weapon to defend themselves and also has guards.
Artisan - An artisan is a person who is skilled at making things by hand. This class includes blacksmiths, glassblowers, and anyone who creates things by hand.
Thief - A thief is very agile, preferring to sneak in and steal rather than straight out fight.
Slave - What do you think?
Prisoner -A prisoner is someone who has broken the law and been caught. They are usually put in the prisons located in Hiliron.

_//Rules and Admins\\_

1. MAGIC is rare! I'll let a select few have it. If you do have it the blades can and will kill you on sight. That is, if they see you using it.
2. General roleplay rules. No Mary Sues, Gary Sues, god-modding, etc. If you don’t know these, don’t join.
3. Don’t argue with the admins, or the rules. Just because it’s not said does not mean it’s allowed.
4. Don't kill anyone's character without permission
5. Use common sense!
6. Put Motaer in other.
7. Please be detailed. We want at least 2 lines a post, and detailed CSes.
8. Have fun!

As of now, the only admins are myself and vamking.

_//CS\\_
At last! The time has come! Please BE DETAILED! Try to get complete sentences, grammar, and a few lines for appearance, bio, and personality.

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Class:
Appearance: (A few lines please, links are allowed.)
Personality: (Again, at least 2 lines.)
Bio: (Yes, it is required.)
Hometown: (City and Kingdom)
Skills:
Weaknesses:
Other:
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hugeboo322 is not online. hugeboo322
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26 Feb 2014 07:11 PM
(Mark)
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alannalypinky is not online. alannalypinky
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26 Feb 2014 07:12 PM
Bump1
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26 Feb 2014 07:23 PM
Name: Auren Corve
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Class: Guardian
Appearance: (A few lines please, links are allowed.) (:/ I'm drained, thanks to Soccer practice.) Auren is brown haired, though his hair is turning silver. His eyes are gold colored, and he is pale skinned. He stands at Six feet and three inches high, and has a slightly muscular build.
Personality: (Again, at least 2 lines.) Auren is a kind person, but stern when he needs to be. He likes to lead, but he knows when it is time to follow someone. He is straight to the point and quick tempered. He is also persistant.
Bio: (Yes, it is required.) Auren was born in Lisby, and he was raised being taught that the Blades are evil. Auren always wanted to know magic..(Ugh! Wish I could come up with a better bio!) When Auren was 19, his father gave him his blade: Judgement. At twenty, he joined the guardians. Now 21, He's trying to help the Guardians defeat the Blades.
Hometown: (City and Kingdom) Lisby, Afendamar
Skills: Swordplay, Axes!, Leader.
Weaknesses: Quick tempered, stubborn.
Other: Mortaer. And UUUUGH! I WISH I WASN'T DRAINED RIGHT NOW!
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vamking12 is not online. vamking12
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26 Feb 2014 07:35 PM
Name': Regar Elderwin
Age: 26
Gender:Male
Class: Thief
Appearance: He is somewhat buff not ripped or anything. He is just Average height. He has his hair in a ponytail he nevers cuts it and got sick of it getting the way so he put it into a ponytail. Speaking of hair his is light brown a little shiny. His skin is tan. He has brown eyes his eyes are a little small. He has long arms a good amount longer the average you could say. Nothing else about his appearance is what you would call special or unique. He wears a brown leather armor with small iron studs. Normal green pants. And tan sandals. On his left hand ring finger he wears a sliver ring.
Personaity: He is fair to everyone and is pretty nice. He doesn't steal for no reason instead he takes contracts to steal big items. He might even refuse to do a contract. Not a very happy though. He hates living this way. And wishes the war will win. He is quiet not talking unless needed.
Bio: He was born in Marat the capital of aares. He was born into a loving but poor family. His family has all there kids do odd jobs. He's was the three oldest of four kids. So he did't have to odd jobs till about 10 years old. He spend time delivering stuff. Having get places quickly and stuff. At 18 he decided he wanted to end this war. Not by picking a side but by thieving. Doing things like planting stuff to make It look like a crime. He is still doing this sadly.
Hometown: Marat Aares
Skills: Sneaking Speed Parkour
Weaknesses: Not a Smooth talker by any means. Has no fighting skills.
Other: Motaer
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Ericthehuman1 is not online. Ericthehuman1
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26 Feb 2014 07:39 PM
(marked.)
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vamking12 is not online. vamking12
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26 Feb 2014 07:48 PM
David Accpted
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alannalypinky is not online. alannalypinky
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26 Feb 2014 08:02 PM
Everyone's accepted, as admins are auto-accepted. I'll make my CS later, and we can start when we have 2 more people.
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26 Feb 2014 08:06 PM
Name: Jacob Graff
Age: Twenty-one
Gender: Male
Class: Archer
Appearance: He has dirty blonde colored hair that is slightly swept upwards at the front. His eyes, shaped like an almond, are a deep, deep blue color. Jacob's skin is a peachish color, making it possible for his ears, face, etc. to turn red easier. For Jacob's age, he had an average body build. And he is five foot ten. Jacob usually wears everything leather. i.e.: Leather armor, leather boots, leather gloves, etc.
Personality: Jacob is the type of person who is loud walker, talker, eater; and pretty much loud at everything he does. And he is also obnoxious, which tends to make people annoyed. Those people then make Jacob mad by yelling at him. When Jacob is mad, he turns bossy, ordering people to do to things for him. Two obvious traits about Jacob is that some people call him dumb, but others call him smart. Those two personality traits even out, making him smart or dumb at different times.
Bio: Jacob was born on the 19th of May-- but, I don't think you want to read about this. Anyways, as a kid, Jacob was treated not as kind as he really wanted. His parents, mostly his dad, abused him a ton, but the reason why he does, is because he drinks. His dad drinks way too much, but the reason why is because his wife, Jacob's mom, had died. Jacob's mom died when she was hunting for the city's food. She had worked as an Archer, but she was a bit too slow, thus making her get clawed to death. People in the city found Jacob's mom's bow and returned it to the family. And that is what Jacob uses now, his mother's bow.
Hometown: Azet, Afendamar
Skills:
[Great Aim]: This skill helps Jacob shoot arrows more accurately.
[Sneaky]: Jacob is rather sneaky, but he isn't that good at this yet because well, ahh, just read the weaknesses.
Weaknesses:
[Loud]: Since Jacob is loud, sneaking is a bit harder for him.
[Unprotected]: Since he wears leather armour, one claw swipe on him will hurt him terribly.
Other: Motaer
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vamking12 is not online. vamking12
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26 Feb 2014 08:09 PM
Nice eric
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alannalypinky is not online. alannalypinky
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26 Feb 2014 08:12 PM
Accepted
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Ericthehuman1 is not online. Ericthehuman1
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26 Feb 2014 08:16 PM
(thanks vam.)
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alannalypinky is not online. alannalypinky
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26 Feb 2014 09:05 PM
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26 Feb 2014 09:11 PM
Name: Nathaniel Cather

Age: 29

Gender: Male

Class: Knight

Appearance: (A few lines please, links are allowed.) He wear a suit of silver armor, When he does not wear a helmet you can see he has no scars. He has blonde hair, blue eyes, and blonde eyebrows. He is 5"6", Buffed enough to be noticeable when he is not wearing his armor. His arms and torso is all cut up with scars showing hes been in many battles.

Personality: (Again, at least 2 lines.) He is smart, resourceful, strong, and fast. But he is not a fast thinker and he lets his own feelings get in the war of his job sometimes.

Bio: (Yes, it is required.) He started out a child as you must of expected. But he was special. Not only he was strong for a kid be also had some magic. He hid it from his family for years until he was 18. They freaked out. He did not expect them to be loyal you the Blades. They went after him. He escaped to the forest and hid there. With his poor magic he was able to hide better then he expected. He one day met his mother and she became a blade just to get him. She was alone when they met and they locked in combat. He was not able to kill his own mother. He disarmed her. Literally cut off her sword arm and ran. He made it to the mountains and made camp in the city he is in now. He made it as a knight, changed his name and lived as a knight ever since hidden in plain sight.
Hometown: (City and Kingdom) Lisby

Skills: He has magic that can confuse people briefly enough for him to make a escape and a spell that can improve his speed when needed. He rarely uses them.

Weaknesses: His own feeling to his past of his family. Make it impossible for him to trust anyone. So he never got married and does not plan too.
Other: Motaer
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alannalypinky is not online. alannalypinky
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26 Feb 2014 09:12 PM
Not accepted. No magic. Bad boy.
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vamking12 is not online. vamking12
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26 Feb 2014 09:13 PM
I'll let you have magic
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alannalypinky is not online. alannalypinky
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26 Feb 2014 09:14 PM
There needs to be a limit, though. Magic can't just be allowed. Perhaps you need to PM an admin beforehand.
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vamking12 is not online. vamking12
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26 Feb 2014 09:15 PM
Kay.

Thinking about adding a group called the gold knights.

Pretty much everyone trying to one up each other
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blanchey is not online. blanchey
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26 Feb 2014 09:19 PM
Crap. I miss read rules. Could I change it?
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vamking12 is not online. vamking12
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26 Feb 2014 09:20 PM
Yeah no magic and our Accpted
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26 Feb 2014 09:32 PM
Name: Suzanna Mey

Age: 21

Gender: Female

Class: Thief

Appearance: (A few lines please, links are allowed.) http://digital-art-gallery.com/oid/54/640x482_10247_Ginger_2d_fantasy_girl_thief_redhead_picture_image_digital_art.jpg

Personality: (Again, at least 2 lines.) Well, she is flirty, and a little too stubborn. Infact, she will try to STILL pick-pocket someone who caught her. And then, if say mugging a person, may try rather...dirty...grapples when disarmed.

Bio: (Yes, it is required.) Well, she grew up daughter of a tavern woonch, so ofcourse, once she was able to cook for her own, age 6 by the way, she began to serve herself. By 12 she was a thief of food like bread, and soon by about...16...a accidentle move while trying to knock a guy her age out gave her a brilliant idea based upon her reaction. At age 18, Suzanna works tavern wooch at day, thief by night.

Hometown: (City and Kingdom) Kingdom of Killan, Belvoir

Skills: Grappling against opposite gender, and pretty impressive stealth

Weaknesses: Blades, blushing

Other:Motaer
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alannalypinky is not online. alannalypinky
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26 Feb 2014 09:33 PM
Accepted, but don't go overboard on the flirt/romance stuff.
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hugeboo322 is not online. hugeboo322
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26 Feb 2014 09:34 PM
I know iknow
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vamking12 is not online. vamking12
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26 Feb 2014 09:36 PM
I guess we shall start

Alanna do you plan on making a. Character?
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alannalypinky is not online. alannalypinky
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26 Feb 2014 09:38 PM
Yeah, but maybe in a little while.
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