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GorillasInStoreNow is not online. GorillasInStoreNow
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28 Feb 2014 10:53 AM
http://www.roblox.com/Building-place?id=140083205

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FELlNE is not online. FELlNE
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28 Feb 2014 10:57 AM
6/10
edges are trying too hard to be edges
you built the lamest bridge type possible
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GorillasInStoreNow is not online. GorillasInStoreNow
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28 Feb 2014 10:59 AM
Thank you.

I did build this in minutes (15-20).

So I will be working on this alot.

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EvilRedPandaa is not online. EvilRedPandaa
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28 Feb 2014 11:01 AM
Great! Especially for 15-20 minutes.
Reminds me of Skyloft.

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WarbearNomkins is not online. WarbearNomkins
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28 Feb 2014 11:01 AM
7/10
looks good
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FELlNE is not online. FELlNE
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28 Feb 2014 11:03 AM
flatten the bridge
make it an aged wood color
planks need to be separated and unsymmetrical in size and rotation

also, are you only going to make the bridge or are you going to make a whole map?
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GorillasInStoreNow is not online. GorillasInStoreNow
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28 Feb 2014 11:07 AM
I'll try to make a whole map

but I'm trying to make a detailed yet less laggy map.

I used ARC master tool for the bridge and the layer underneath, the rails on the bridge are made without it so they'll be sticking out of each-other.

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EvilRedPandaa is not online. EvilRedPandaa
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28 Feb 2014 11:09 AM
The bridge is good the way it is.
But if you maybe gave the island some rounded edges, it would look better.

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GorillasInStoreNow is not online. GorillasInStoreNow
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28 Feb 2014 11:16 AM
I could make it triangle terrain. But it'll look a bit less better.

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28 Feb 2014 11:52 AM
b1

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28 Feb 2014 12:37 PM
b2

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