altar30
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| 19 Feb 2014 11:03 PM |
(Radical)) Courtney Love let the bullet hit Kurt's head, Little J drag raced and MJ did Sudafed, Controversy Controvesy,God we love controversy! Government shutdown and snowed in cause of Snowden, It's illegal to be yourself living under Putin, Controversy Controversy, God America loves controversy! Everyones a caged beast with laws to make us agree, Listen to what we say and don't you make a peep, kapeesh? Disagree and get a kilo from UPS, Accompanied by the feds to make the arrest, You have the right to remain silent but I recommend you resist, Break your cuffs and take to the streets, raise your fist. Controversy's worthless without action to better, Government rats and media label heroes traitors, But those [F]'ing rodents are just tryna sniff out the cheddar, They don't give a Hoover whether the weather And planet can hold together, Chop chop, Rather take a nice cut of land and sell paper, Genociders on every dollar and Native blood on our cotton sweaters.
(Drake17dude) Now let's get real, Cause the people we used to mentor think they can kill, Their rap leaders, Now you feeling yourself, We opened the books taught you but you put it on the shelf, I'm always gonna be bigger you are just my elf, They like what happened Bullet Ace and Rad, Nothing bad we've just been busy, And me and Marco are putting in mad hours for that tape, Shawn taught me to keep my head up, Sipping Amp from a cup, We laid the game out for those fools, Now they thinking their raps are hot like the block, Used to talk (S) but now your on my (C)ck, Guess I'm the Sheppard let me tend this flock.
(Radical) Words can only go so far, I'm trying to talk a marathon, Looks to me that I'm going in circles like a merry go round, Meanwhile some innocent inmates are kept in worse conditions then poodle pounds, Pounds pounds, the thought gets loud, then attacks, Revolution gets tossed around like a hackey sack, And when push comes to shove, no one fights back, I'm sick of activist advising others to act And never stepping a foot out to protest, how should they react? How would you react to your lil bro gunned down by another Zimmerman? Probably the same way OJ treated his Ms. Simpson, Thing's don't just happen, and I'm not calling on race related acts, Human on human silenced is just as bad as black on black, Lifes just a series of cause and effect, except, When the cause is conditioned to highlight a hierarchy, That's just causes some controversy..
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altar30
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| 20 Feb 2014 03:43 PM |
4deep8me.
"Intelligence is the ability to adapt to bass" - Stephen Walking. |
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| 21 Feb 2014 10:52 PM |
| I'm feeling some Chance the Rapper influence. |
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altar30
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| 23 Feb 2014 11:52 AM |
@Philosphical,
I haven't heard much from Chance, this was more influenced by Ab-Soul :) |
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| 23 Feb 2014 11:56 AM |
9/10
I thought it was cool. |
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| 24 Feb 2014 06:41 AM |
| This song is so underestimated |
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rockytree
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| 24 Feb 2014 07:13 PM |
Terrible e.e I would hate to hear you acctually sing this. I mean the flow. Damn you suck. |
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| 24 Feb 2014 10:36 PM |
| Is that an honest comment or is that just cause it's a ro-rap. |
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rockytree
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| 24 Feb 2014 10:38 PM |
| No I mean it really sucks. :/ |
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| 24 Feb 2014 10:42 PM |
| Oh alright then. Care to explicate on the matter? |
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| 24 Feb 2014 10:44 PM |
No offense its just cheesy. Change the lyrics. |
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| 24 Feb 2014 10:46 PM |
| I can see why you'd think that. Thanks for the feedback. |
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| 25 Feb 2014 04:25 PM |
Well your rhymes are alitte the diffrent verses don't blend. For the rhymes try some 2 syllable rhymes. Ex. Explode-Corrosive Molded-Behold Behold my talent thats pure explosive so much green my house looks molded lyrics like acid damn corrosive say this loud and yo b!tch will notice that I have a flow sicker then the dark lodus |
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| 25 Feb 2014 09:39 PM |
| Dude that freestyle was pretty decent also,thanks for the advice |
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| 27 Feb 2014 08:26 PM |
@Drake That isn't even my best thats just my beginners lesson for people who need it. |
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| 28 Feb 2014 07:54 AM |
| 9/10 Verses out of place but nice content. |
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