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| 23 Feb 2014 11:52 AM |
[REFLEX/AnonymousAdversary]- Sometime's i wish i could escape my problem's mend my ways,i seen better day's i'm hoping this is only a phase it's not like i'm begging,asking for praise I'm starting to see that life is a maze Iv'e been giving up alot lately it's like i can't is my catchphrase Everyone who enter's my life betrays,Like forget all the date's and bouquets,My heart's a easy target go ahead btch,set it ablaze while i sit back and watch my life as it decays
(Chorus) I want everything to fade away, I don't want it to rain today, Can everything just go away, I want everything to fade away, I don't want it to rain today, Can everything just go away,
(Bullet/Drake17dude) Lying to myself saying lifes okay, Tried to smoke my problems away, Thinking this drink is gonna make me feel okay, This maze I'm trapped in, Hoping its a phase, So I take another blaze, And another shot, I don't feel the affects, Wondering how my life ended up this way, I've seen better days, I just wanna press pauce, Go back to the days when I believed in santa claus, And that was way back, I keep mask on, Nobody knows my pain, But in my life all I see is rain, Uh, (Chorus) I want everything to fade away, I don't want it to rain today, Can everything just go away, I want everything to fade away, I don't want it to rain today, Can everything just go away,
[REFLEX/AnonymousAdversary] Here we go again another conversation, trying to find out who I am in this never ending laceration. Surrounded by sins, oh where do I begin. Awaiting the pearl gates of heaven to welcome me in. I've always been the soldier who never blows his composure, but lately I feel ready to explode like a super nova. It's elementary memories of a child so pure, torn apart by the world so dark and so cruel. I can remember back when everything was so happy and bright, back when the skies were crystal clear even on the darkest of nights. Now no more blossomy for me only silent cries, looking up to empty skies and asking when it's my time. Please God grab me and wake me and take me out of these dreams, away from the monsters and nightmares trying to murder me. Away from the noise away from the pain, out of this nasty place full of the criminally insane. To a wonderful paradise a world so clean, no murders of crimes just living oh so happily. A fantasy that could only be seen unconsciously, for the grim reality has been bestowed upon me, is killing me inside ever so slowly, while you watch from above promising to hold me. But I'm not sure how I can last, no breaks on this train going nowhere fast.
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| 23 Feb 2014 01:17 PM |
Someone diss someone I wanna see a show.
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| 23 Feb 2014 01:22 PM |
Just So Ya Know When You Ro Rap You're Suppose To Set Up Your Verses Like This
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| 23 Feb 2014 04:33 PM |
Nobody cares about your input biskit. Your nothing to any ro rapper anymore.
Also good rap guys, i like it! |
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| 23 Feb 2014 04:53 PM |
I could easily come back in case you never knew that. I'd rather be a has been than a never was.
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| 23 Feb 2014 04:57 PM |
Calling yourself the top record label, it's only because there is no competition anymore. lmao
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| 23 Feb 2014 04:59 PM |
Oh wait I have more to say, I'm not a hater, it's called criticism, which is where you give feedback. I was just stating how the layout for Ro Raps are usually like this you know? Because first of all it's easier to read when it comes to a rap, plus they already do that when you see their lyrics. Call me a hater, but there is a reason you don't improve, and you never will.
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| 23 Feb 2014 06:21 PM |
| Ha ha. Like i said to larus. You shouldn't talk because you play pew pew with virtual guns. And you dont critisize but you hate on 90% of ro raps you see because you have way to much time on your hands, and also. Yeah. I dont have competition . I never did cause RCRD was whack from the beginning and you have no management skills biskit... |
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| 23 Feb 2014 06:28 PM |
"You shouldn't talk because you play pew pew with virtual guns"
Larus is in clans, so he uses guns. 90% on raps? I've only commented four times on MT this whole month. I changed my name in January, that means I had to comment once each week on MT. So if 90% of my time is one day, assuming it takes me one day to make a comment, then your an idiot. It takes 5 minutes at most to make a comment, not my whole life, I'm not slow, you might be, but not me. Be mad at me because I gave my opinion, instead of telling them their good, I'd like to see them IMPROVE at it, so I just said it's better to write your rap in a more organized format.
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| 23 Feb 2014 06:45 PM |
| Thank's for the views biskit. |
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| 23 Feb 2014 06:47 PM |
No problem, you deserve it, you have good verses, hope to see your improve. But just so ya know, I can't post without upping the number of views.
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| 23 Feb 2014 11:12 PM |
| It was actually nice. It felt balanced between the main and the feature and the lyrics fit the theme without being trashy. |
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| 25 Feb 2014 10:21 PM |
| Aye, This is dope. I am starting and group for people that's underground. Mabey you could make some mix tapes. I pay too. Just contact me. |
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| 26 Feb 2014 05:32 AM |
| Were not underground we may be some of the most recognized Ro-Rapper's out there. |
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| 26 Feb 2014 06:51 AM |
| Thanks for the compliment tho |
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