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Re: TGI Story- A raid on NFC [Chapter 1. Landing]

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cloudhammer12 is not online. cloudhammer12
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22 Feb 2014 12:41 AM
- This takes place in Nightfall Clan's Fort Topixa, an experience of winning a Nightfall clan raid, an experience through my eyes.

* I recommend you read SLOWLY and try to imagine these experiences in your head.

=

-1. Landing

Heh, I love the feeling of tranquility before entering a battle, it's pretty nice, isn't it? Despite the thousands of Arcadians packed on 20 ships.

WE'RE NOT TAKING A TRAIN TO AUSCHWITZ, FOR CHRIST'S SAKE.

All that was going through my head was, "Am I going to live?", "Am I finally going to meet this so called 'God'? Will I live and tell the tale of killing my own blood and suffer trauma?" Other then that, all I felt was the rumbling of the ship's rudders, or whatever's taking us to this unlucky fate. I try to think positivley, but I'd rather not as of now. My brain is running at thousands and thousands of miles per hour, while I am going to likely meet my fate. Splendid.

A few hours later, I finally hear some landing.

I look out one of the windows of the ship, I see us lowering down, deeper into the brown, rocky mountains. It feels like they're dropping us off to the bottom of the Grand Canyon, a trapped place with no escape. A tear sheds from my good eye, as I see the grass. It's the grass from when I was a child, the same, beautiful Viridian grass. It reminds me of my amazing childhood, and how I miss the warm memories.

I hear a familiar voice in the background, an Officer named Proelio. The arcane Officer, he is.

"ARCADIANS! WHAT ARE WE GOING TO DO TO THOSE NFC?!" He yells.

"DECIMATE!" A Gaurdsmen says. "WE'RE GOING TO ANNIHILATE THEM!" Another one yells.

"WE ARE ARCADIANS! MADE OF ROCK AND STEEL! SHOW THEM WHAT WE GOT!"

Everyone yells; "YES, SIR!" at the same time, the yell of adrenaline, could shake nations. This adrenaline begins to pump in our veins, as if we were skydiving, epic adrenaline.

After a little, the ship lands, finally.

"SHOW NO MERCY, ARCADIANS!" Screams an unknown voice in the background. This is really stressful, I'd hate to kill my own blood. On the other hand, I enjoy killing, so I don't mind. Everyone SCREAMS bloody murder, nearly bursting my eardrum, and so the ship back door opens, unloading a nice breeze into the ship.

Everyone begins to run out of the ship, screaming "GLORY TO ARCADIA!" Oh, the Adrenaline is making me jump up and down, my mouth foaming, the enjoyment! I'm so excited! I feel the tight packing around me feel loser as more people run out of the ship, and finally my turn to let the breeze smack me in the face as I run to spill blood for my home.

I finally get to move my feet around, running out the ship, while more behind me get to do the same. It feels foreign, the feel of something after you haven't felt it for so long. I stop and look at the distance.

The blue, perfect sky, the green grass, the mountains, and the mighty Fort Topixa standing tall straight ahead of me. This amazing glance is similar to no other; of pure beauty; not many get to see such beauty. I feel so overwhelmed I drop to my knees.

After who knows what, someone tackles me by accident, attempting to run toward Topixa, I fall down, and reality flows back in like a flash flood. I look into the distance again, seeing hundreds of Arcadians running towards Gate 1, and some running around the base.

"Well, time to go." I say, in my head. I'm so excited, sad, scared, and blood lusted. I can not contain my different emotions. I really want to cry for no reason, it's very odd. I felt this through the whole ship ride, too.

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HOW'D YOU LIKE IT?

THE CLIFFHANGER? HOW DID YOU?

I tried to implement a lot of physical feeling, so you could try and imagine the feel in your head.
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BaronOpconius is not online. BaronOpconius
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22 Feb 2014 12:42 AM
You made this sound more like a damn narrative than an actual story. 0/10
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cloudhammer12 is not online. cloudhammer12
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22 Feb 2014 12:43 AM
Bumpy.
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cloudhammer12 is not online. cloudhammer12
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22 Feb 2014 12:43 AM
Partially it'd be a narrative.
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cloudhammer12 is not online. cloudhammer12
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22 Feb 2014 12:45 AM
In fact, it's heavily narrative.
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waka911 is not online. waka911
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22 Feb 2014 12:46 AM
10/10
"Claps" Waka does
"Well done" Waka said,
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cloudhammer12 is not online. cloudhammer12
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22 Feb 2014 12:47 AM
@ Waka-

Thank you.
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cloudhammer12 is not online. cloudhammer12
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22 Feb 2014 12:52 AM
Bump.
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Grifey is not online. Grifey
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22 Feb 2014 07:17 AM
10/10
Beautiful.
Watery eyes.
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TH3L4ZYS0NG is not online. TH3L4ZYS0NG
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22 Feb 2014 07:22 AM
i stopped at heh, sorry.
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LordZedex is not online. LordZedex
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22 Feb 2014 07:22 AM
cool

you seem to be smashed my good sir
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