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jroc45011 is not online. jroc45011
Joined: 22 Apr 2013
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15 Feb 2014 10:47 PM
The Beast of Granite City
Chapter 1, Rumors

The was a young 5 year old named Grant, he lived with his mom, Julia, his dad, Joe, his brother, Gyth, and his sister Deighan. When Grant walked into his brother’s room he overheard him on the phone talking about the Beast of Granite City. Once when Gyth got off the phone, Grant ask him what was the Beast of Granite City. Gyth said you’re not old enough to know about it yet.
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Innovauxon is not online. Innovauxon
Joined: 27 Nov 2008
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15 Feb 2014 10:48 PM
needs quotes, indention, better names, and more interesting plot line
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jroc45011 is not online. jroc45011
Joined: 22 Apr 2013
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15 Feb 2014 10:49 PM
Dude it has indention and its called a preview for a reason
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theblablybla is not online. theblablybla
Joined: 03 Jul 2009
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15 Feb 2014 10:50 PM
okay, this better not be your introduction, but more of a summary

i can rewrite it if you want me to

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Argumentally is not online. Argumentally
Joined: 08 Feb 2014
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15 Feb 2014 10:51 PM
please, post you're fan-fiction where people will care.
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LittlePrincessEmma is not online. LittlePrincessEmma
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15 Feb 2014 10:52 PM
doesn't sound like a good book to be honest

(\/) Hop hop and don't stop, bunny on. (\/)
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jroc45011 is not online. jroc45011
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02 Mar 2014 06:01 PM
Guys please don' post on this forum anymore my feelings are hurt now :(
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