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| 15 Feb 2014 10:47 PM |
The Beast of Granite City Chapter 1, Rumors
The was a young 5 year old named Grant, he lived with his mom, Julia, his dad, Joe, his brother, Gyth, and his sister Deighan. When Grant walked into his brother’s room he overheard him on the phone talking about the Beast of Granite City. Once when Gyth got off the phone, Grant ask him what was the Beast of Granite City. Gyth said you’re not old enough to know about it yet.
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| 15 Feb 2014 10:48 PM |
| needs quotes, indention, better names, and more interesting plot line |
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| 15 Feb 2014 10:49 PM |
| Dude it has indention and its called a preview for a reason |
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| 15 Feb 2014 10:50 PM |
okay, this better not be your introduction, but more of a summary
i can rewrite it if you want me to
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| 15 Feb 2014 10:51 PM |
| please, post you're fan-fiction where people will care. |
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| 15 Feb 2014 10:52 PM |
doesn't sound like a good book to be honest
(\/) Hop hop and don't stop, bunny on. (\/) |
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| 02 Mar 2014 06:01 PM |
| Guys please don' post on this forum anymore my feelings are hurt now :( |
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