Juanpans
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| 15 Feb 2014 08:25 PM |
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aLPTzgnLTQI&feature=youtube_gdata
Be completely honest, read the desc...
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ruines
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| 15 Feb 2014 08:27 PM |
7/10
Needs to have video, proper grammar (via intro text), and camera pans. |
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TrollCune
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Juanpans
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| 15 Feb 2014 08:28 PM |
What do you mean proper grammar?
I spelt something wrong?
My english :c
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| 15 Feb 2014 08:28 PM |
There are far more beautiful places on roblox that you could have shown.
But 9/10 for great choice of music and 8/10 for editing/timing/pacing. 8.5/10 completely
good work
How to improve: If you ever have a still image, try to apply a small drift. It makes everything look more alive. |
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Juanpans
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| 15 Feb 2014 08:30 PM |
Thank you MisterObvious for the advice!
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Avilius
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| 15 Feb 2014 08:31 PM |
Add this place - http://www.roblox.com/Brook-Lane-place?id=129928901
- But will it blend? |
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| 15 Feb 2014 08:37 PM |
Here's a video I made 5 years ago but you can use this as inspiration/reference/research. It was much like this but the screenshots matched the music beats. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CO-lgzPqwuY |
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