RAE181
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| 11 Feb 2014 11:27 PM |
((Quick tip! This follows the Metro Last Light Story line! And Disclaimer: I do not own Metro Last light or I attend on copying it.))
((Please use the Metro Last Light Wiki to know what your doing.))
[TABLE OF CONTENTS] QUOTES PLOT RULES CS
[QUOTES] 'Our bloody skirmish with the bandits was over. I had expected mutants and monsters...but how many more of my 'fellow humans' would try to kill me before I reached Polis'
'As I entered the abandoned tunnels with Bourbon, I wondered if I'd been wrong to trust him. But the station gates were still sealed, and there was no telling when I'd have another chance to leave Riga.'
'Market station was just a little further, but Bourbon warned me that our path went through the 'lost catacombs'...'
'I'd never seen a Market like this--you could buy almost anything. But, Bourbon owed money to the Hanza sentries, and was anxious to leave.'
[PLOT] You are a Ranger in the time setting where Artyom is going to find the so called 'Dark One'. With growing tensions from the Red line and Fourth Reich, you are preparing for war. But first you are sent out to find some 'important' pieces in a library, this is so it would preserve humanity ((Hint hint le DLC)). So you and your team are going to the prep zone before you head into the library. Sooner or later you will be called back to D6 and help to protect it along side with Artyom, preparing for your death. Right now you are preparing to go to the library.
[RULES] 1.) Follow the common ROBLOX rules. 2.) Keep your weapons within the game period. ((Ex, B-gun)) 3.) No GOD modding. (No one likes a God modder) 4.) Ignore trolls/spams. Reply to them only fuels them. 5.) My words aka, my rules. 6.) Please be mature and realistic. 7.) Start when I say so. 8.) If you have read it this far please put 'Polis' in others. 9.) Only admins and I can make events. 10.) No Mary sues, no Gary sues. 11.) Keep romance at a hug. 12.) Please put 2 or more sentences in your bio. Admins: [Insert admins here, soon be updating]
[CS] Name:
Gender:
Age (24+):
Rank (Below Captain but above sergeant):
Two Guns of Choice:
^ Attachments:
Suit: Ranger Armor
Bullets:
Bio:
Psy. Appearance:
Personality:
Appearance (Ex. Ski Mask):
Other:
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RAE181
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| 11 Feb 2014 11:29 PM |
((Messed up on a spacing on the plot sorry bout that!))
[PLOT] You are a Ranger in the time setting where Artyom is going to find the so called 'Dark One'. With growing tensions from the Red line and Fourth Reich, you are preparing for war. But first you are sent out to find some 'important' pieces in a library, this is so it would preserve humanity ((Hint hint le DLC)). So you and your team are going to the prep zone before you head into the library. Sooner or later you will be called back to D6 and help to protect it along side with Artyom, preparing for your death. Right now you are preparing to go to the library.
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Z0rr0w
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| 12 Feb 2014 12:48 AM |
What is "Psy. Appearance?" Is a Psy some sort of Psychic Super Saiyan Final Form? And for regular appearance, you have your example as a ski-mask. Is a single article of clothing good enough for others to properly visualise your character?
And why do you have to involve the plot of the games/books in this? Why not build an original story based in the Metro universe instead of doing a retread of what was already made? This is bad and you should feel bad. |
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RAE181
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| 12 Feb 2014 08:43 AM |
| Thanks for the suggestion, going to remake this later in the day. |
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