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Re: Triumphal; Chapter II/II

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Swordize is not online. Swordize
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09 Feb 2014 09:42 AM
Along the way, we found many other rebels who decided to risk their lives to save humanity. Then, two months later for stealth and secrecy, we caught our eyes on the magnificently large and lustrous palace. Then we saw dozens of guards. We quickly looked for cover, and then everyone broke into silence.

"Who's ready for the battle of our, and everyone's life?" I said breaking the silence.
I heard an affirmative-like word from dozens of mouths. I sole-patrolling guard heard something, and we gulped.
"Scatter, quick!" I quickly whispered.
"What did you do?!" Said one guard.
The other replied, "I'm sorry, I dropped my sword."
"Alright, get back to patrolling. Who knows? Anything can popup these days." The first guard ended.

I talked to John privately to tell him his most important task ever to be done in his current lifetime.
"John. I have an important task for you." I said.
"And what would that be sir?" He replied.
"We're going to need to split up. There are too many guards surrounding the palace."
I pointed at a very high up room in the palace.
"That is where the emperor is. I will kill him myself, so no one get in my way. All your task, and the other rebel's task is to defend me from incoming armed soldiers."
John listened attentively, seeming that he understands this is all very important.
I continued, "I will have a party for swordsmen with me, reflecting incoming bullets bombarding my way. In the other hand, you will raid the current outdoor guardsmen, or maybe even lure them away from the Grand Entrance into the castle. From that point on, you will sadly have to improvise, until you kill every single outdoor guard. After you do so, you will meet me at the Emperor's room."
"Wow. That's a lot to do, and you're counting on me to do it. I will absolutely do this for you -- for us..." John replied astonishingly.

We arose from our camping spot behind a boulder sized rock, but bigger.

"Alright troops. Gunsmen, follow John. You will abide all his commands eagerly and attentively. What he says from this point is law." I said.
John wiped his sweat off his face.
"Swordsmen. You're with me. We're going to enter the palace after John's troop runs along. You will protect me until we get to the Emperor's throne."

Me and the swordsmen walked out to seek another hiding spot since John's troops will attract guards.
John decided he would be the one taking the first shot. He equipped his assault gun, from the archives of a few guardsmen camps we passed by.
He aimed, and then shot.
Two guards fell to the floor, head with blood piercing out of their heads.

"Charge men! This is what we've all been waiting for! FREEDOM!" John yelled from the top of his lungs.

Guards charged here and there, I watched closely, observing everyone, while my men looked away in agony. My men and myself then charged into the tower running past a pool of blood. Guards ran out, trying to learn on what was happening outside. We camped by the doorway, waiting to strike the disadvantaged guards. Within 15 minutes, no more was coming out. We decided to open the doors and get in. I was the last to look at the carpet of blood behind the palace doors. Pain and agony, they go well with one another.

After 30 more minutes, we cleared the hallway losing only one friend of ours, he would be remembered dearly. But I felt as if we missed someone. I lost my attention from seeing the doors of the Emperor's dorm for a while, until one of my soldiers tapped me on my shoulder.

"Uh... Sir, should we break open the door and attack?" He asked me.
"No, I will kill him myself." I answered.

I broke open the door and saw rows of guards, awaiting the Emperor's commands. I was pretty sure they were talking about us. I quickly went back and changed my mind.

"Nevermind, you can go kill the guards. Not the Emperor." I said shyly.

Some soldiers smiled, and went in, running out of their best with their swords. As I heard swords slash and clang on armor, I peeked out of the window. I saw that John's troops had won, and lost around 10-15 troops. I stared at my reflectance on a pool of blood.
'Is what I'm doing... right?' I thought.
I shook my head.
'Yes, it is right, what I'm doing is good for me, and more importantly, everyone.'

I quickly went back seeing that all the guards hadn't been destroyed yet.

"YOU FOOLS! DESTROY THE MAN BEHIND THE DOORS!" A loud, arrogant voice yelled.

It seemed none of his guards had been listening. I smiled, and shot a few of them after barging a little hole in the wall. I turned around and managed to see a guard holding a Luger and he dared for my to put my hands up.

He whimpered, "Do not -- move a finger!"

I followed his orders.
Astonishingly, a certain man avenged my slicing the guard's head off.
John.

"Haha, welcome back John." I said gladly, waiting for my pulse to lower.
"I'm happy to be, we only lost a few our men, but we've still succeeded." John said. "Do you need a gun?"

I gladly took his spare gun, and officer's pistol he found in the bloody hands of a solider.

"I think it's time I go in..." I said while staring at the doors. "John. Stay put here."

All the soldiers of mine whimpered back, some wounded, others severely bleeding.

"Uh... Sir, we've killed all the guards, but the Emperor is just laughing from the top of his lungs." A solider said.
Another one said, "Will he be bringing reinforcements or something?"
"No." I answered, "The rest of his guards are training for battle all the way North-East. I wonder why he is laughing... Just leave him to me."

I slowly entered the room, mind the corpses lying on the floor, unconscious. I was greeted into the room with a roaring laughter.

"I'm here to defeat you once and for all." I said, "You tyranny is over."
He stopped laughing and looked at me. I felt uncomfortable.
"Ah, silly you. You're nothing! After you kill me, how will you control this vast, successful Empire of mine?!" He yelled.

The laughing had resumed.

"I will find out my ways." I said, "And it's about time for your death."

I smiled, and had John's officer pistol out. He just kept laughing.
I shot him, and I noticed my soldiers were watching. We were all surrounded by a long period of silence, but inside of me wants to jump out of a window and celebrate. Maybe he was right. Maybe I'm not able to control this Empire. But I decided I would never know if I never tried.

Our new reign has begun.


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09 Feb 2014 10:59 AM
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09 Feb 2014 01:42 PM
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11 Feb 2014 08:31 PM
I will give you my expert and professional opinion if you give me that American Commando or W's.
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11 Feb 2014 08:33 PM
Fine. I will give a professional opinion for any limited.
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Okay. I will give my professional opinion anyway. This is bad, and you should feel bad.
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