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| 05 Feb 2014 09:20 PM |
Long ago, there were 4 kingdoms. The Elves, the Dwarves, the Humans, and the Empire of Orks. But soon, the Dwarves were broken down and soon murdered by Orks and then the Elves were soon in recession into the woods, unable to fight. It was a war for rule of the world. In the fury, the Humans have Knighted you. You are now ready to fight in the glory of your homeland. Glory to the Humans!
CS: Name (plus title): Appearance: Personality: Weaponry and Armor:
Average roblox rules apply. |
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vamking12
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| 05 Feb 2014 09:23 PM |
Hello I'm vamking12. And realized that becoming a roleplayer is awkward and take hard work.
So why do you want to roleplay. |
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| 05 Feb 2014 09:26 PM |
| ((Not sure why you said this, but... I guess I roleplay to fill in a character's role and do things in the past or future which isn't possible in my life.)) |
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vamking12
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| 05 Feb 2014 09:27 PM |
Good to know cause I'm about to hurt your feelings.
This is the worst piece of $ hit that I ever seen I became I worst roleplayer just reading this. |
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| 05 Feb 2014 09:30 PM |
| And how is this bad, exactly? |
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vamking12
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| 05 Feb 2014 09:34 PM |
Here is a awesome roleplay
About the wild west and magic bullets
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=124962613
That took two months to make and it is 200 times longer then what you made.
Yet no one wanted to join that. |
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| 05 Feb 2014 09:36 PM |
| Oh yes, my rp is bad because you think there are better ones therefore mine is awful... right. Dude, I'm new to making rps, I'm no professional, so please, leave.) |
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| 05 Feb 2014 09:36 PM |
| Anyways, we're open for cs'. I my self am a Lord. |
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| 05 Feb 2014 09:42 PM |
| (Mind if I make a thief char?) |
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| 05 Feb 2014 09:44 PM |
| Yeah, you can be most common jobs too)) |
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| 05 Feb 2014 09:47 PM |
CS: Name (plus title): Suzanna Mey Appearance: She has long red hair, reaching waist, green eyes. Olive skin. She can be considered beautiful. Wearing a black outfit, a short skirt and half shirt. Personality: Flirty, rude, dumb, likes to rob lords. Weaponry and Armor: A knife |
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| 05 Feb 2014 09:48 PM |
| ((accepted. Perhaps you could be stealing from me and you think I don't know)) |
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| 05 Feb 2014 09:50 PM |
(Sure) Suzanna slipped in the window, smiling. |
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| 06 Feb 2014 04:39 PM |
((Internet went out. Sorry. :<)) I calmly sit there, noting the girl hasn't realized she's tripped my small wire which starts up a large amount of gears, which, in turn, alarms me of her presence. I sit there, waiting for her to do something. Actually, I'm sure it's a he. most women don't thieve. |
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| 06 Feb 2014 04:52 PM |
| Suzanna slipped through a door. |
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| 06 Feb 2014 05:26 PM |
| He sat there, calmly waiting. He watched very quietly, waiting for the right moment to pounce and jail the thief. |
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| 06 Feb 2014 05:35 PM |
| Since she was a bad thief, she knocked over a vase. |
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| 06 Feb 2014 10:04 PM |
| (I kinda agree...this is very short. If you add more details, it looks like a good idea. For example, limits on 'Titles'? Perhaps a PLOT?) |
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MrStilts
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| 07 Feb 2014 12:02 AM |
(Yes, what vamking said could neither be considered contructive criticism or nice, though this is a rather basic RP.
There is nothing particularly offensive about this thing, although isn't anything extraordinary that would catch the eyes of anyone that is not into more simpler things. You're off to a good enough start, but I suggest looking through a few of the older resident's RP's if you wish to improve.) |
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