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Re: Does this plot line sound like anything you have read?

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goof333 is not online. goof333
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04 Feb 2014 07:25 PM
There was something...put in the water. Some sort of mutogenic chemical that only effected a small persentage of the human population. This chemical expressed sertin traits, long dormant within the victum, passed down through generations that remained unknown. They did this. There is no hope for normalcy, not anymore. The traits that were expressed were nearly unique to each indivitual, no two were the same but some may be alike. They became a sort of power to the weilders, but with power comes greed and a sence of superiority...Never lose controll, never take forgranted what you have... Human or not. You will be consumed by your own abilities if the power becomes to great or your soul to weak to bear there burden. Those who are of this select portion of the human race, the gentically blessed, may gain the powers of others of there kind, but only through the death of the other. You can absorb the power that they held and add it onto your own, resulting in multiple powered individuals and relentless powerlust. The more powers you absorb the higher chance of your powers absorb YOU.


A telltail sign of the ones who have been absorbed by there own selves, fallen victim to the prying voices within, is the sprouting of horns. The longer or more complex the horns are the greater number of powers. If you kill one of them and attempt to absorb there powers without proper control of your own you WILL be overwhelmed and lose your self...Are you prepared, mentally and phiscally? Can you control it, or will it control you? Trust is for the weak, you are alone. The unaffected want your kind dead, your kind want to absorb your very essence, and the ones who created this living nightmare are revered as hero's in warfare technologies. Heed my warnings, they are looking for you...They will hunt you down and further your torment. You are a super weapon after all, the will not be denied there property.
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goof333 is not online. goof333
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04 Feb 2014 07:31 PM
Anyone? If not please tell.

Also, what do you think? I thought of it when I was supposed to be paying attention to a lecture on World music given by my teacher... x3
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PawzKat is not online. PawzKat
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04 Feb 2014 07:42 PM
I just finished a book in 'A Million Stars' Trilogy. And while reading this, two concepts from the series came to mind in this paragraph, although they are different. You should make this into a roleplay.
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shadowblade1234567 is not online. shadowblade1234567
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04 Feb 2014 07:43 PM
Seems legit enough to RP.
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goof333 is not online. goof333
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04 Feb 2014 07:48 PM
@Pawz, what seems alike? This is just a rough draft and I will revise and change a few things. C:


Also, this is the song I was thinking of. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hhSA9H9Iaqw

"Monster" by Imagine Dragons.




Thinking of writing a book, this idea of mine stood out the most from the others.
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04 Feb 2014 07:49 PM
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goof333 is not online. goof333
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04 Feb 2014 07:53 PM
@Blu3bird, THANK YOU. :D


I was in a rush and didn't have time to proofread.
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PawzKat is not online. PawzKat
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04 Feb 2014 07:56 PM
I absolutely love 'Monster' by Imagine Dragons, have you ever listened to 'Ready, Aim, Fire'?

Well, in the book, there was this drug called Phydus. Phydus, was a drug that calmed the nerves basically overlapping the human need for emotion, replacing it with simple, quiet obedience. With some other mixtures, the drug, put in through the water, could cause great lust as well.

In the third book, it was discovered that Phydus was kinda of the cause of an accelerated race of human being, it basically granted them a heightened body, but at a price for most.
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goof333 is not online. goof333
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04 Feb 2014 07:59 PM
Yea I Have listened to 'Ready, Aim, Fire'. C:


Oooo, well this chemical (still unnamed, have not though of one yet...do you have a good name?) acts differently than what you listed, so I think I am alright there.


Thank you for pointing that out though! :D
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PawzKat is not online. PawzKat
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04 Feb 2014 08:02 PM
You're welcome, I just wanted to let you know of the small similarities. c;

As for a name, what about 'Cyffuriau'?
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goof333 is not online. goof333
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04 Feb 2014 08:07 PM
Does that name mean anything in particular?

Also, how do you pronounce it? C:
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04 Feb 2014 08:27 PM
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PawzKat is not online. PawzKat
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04 Feb 2014 08:29 PM
It means 'drug'. I was looking up different words in different languages for 'chemical' and 'drug.'
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goof333 is not online. goof333
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04 Feb 2014 08:34 PM
Neat, I will put that in my list of names.

Currently it is the only name on the list. :P



Any suggestions for the story?
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PawzKat is not online. PawzKat
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04 Feb 2014 08:35 PM
;P

For me, perhaps later, I'm entering that time of night where my mind begins to shut down and is basically craving for sleep. Like a zombie..lol.
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discagal9 is not online. discagal9
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04 Feb 2014 08:41 PM
Kinda reminds me of the Geass from Code Geass.
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goof333 is not online. goof333
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04 Feb 2014 09:05 PM
It is not at all like Code Geass. o3o
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Riku1257 is not online. Riku1257
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04 Feb 2014 09:09 PM
This is surprisingly similar to this RP idea I posted on an "Interest Check Thread" a few days ago, but never released.

The only difference was that mine had a mutagenic virus, not a chemical.
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goof333 is not online. goof333
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04 Feb 2014 09:44 PM
What is an Interest Check thread..?



@Catz, But that is when I am most productive! :P
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Riku1257 is not online. Riku1257
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04 Feb 2014 09:49 PM
"What is an Interest Check Thread?"

~

That's for when you have multiple RP ideas floating around your brain at the same time, but are unsure which one would be best received.
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PawzKat is not online. PawzKat
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04 Feb 2014 09:49 PM
Lol. I know, but I have some reading to do. c;
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goof333 is not online. goof333
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04 Feb 2014 09:57 PM
@Riku1257, oooo...I just use a pencil and some paper. C:


Alright Pawzkat you may go read. x3
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Riku1257 is not online. Riku1257
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04 Feb 2014 10:02 PM
That is highly coincidental.

I did as well, for that idea.
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goof333 is not online. goof333
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04 Feb 2014 10:47 PM
Indeed. o-o


Suppose were long lost twins?
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Riku1257 is not online. Riku1257
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04 Feb 2014 10:48 PM
Anything is possible I suppose.
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