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drpece231
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:00 PM |
*starts to read* ...... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0wDunu84JIE |
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giftbox24
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:01 PM |
What are you trying to pull, OP? This isn't even a cliff hanger! |
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:02 PM |
i don't know if i like this or not....
you should make a part 2
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eagle250
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Kotawl
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:04 PM |
its like a drug its horrible but its addicting make part 2 tracking |
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:05 PM |
I can't make a part two. All my creative energy is drained.
☠ a clever quip to sale yer ship ☠ |
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:07 PM |
"I can't make a part two. All my creative energy is drained."
it's not drained! you just simply hit a rough patch,
go watch some soap operas and you'll be back at it in no time! |
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giftbox24
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:09 PM |
Open up your creative orfices Where does the plot go from here? Ideas: Dzu wakes up in a warm bed. It's a bed in one of the numerous rooms in Drpece's $1m mansion. Apparently, he's as classy guy. Drpece gets dark thoughts and does a thing Dzu waits up, acts grateful, and leaves. Suddenly, she realizes that she can't leave because of feelings Dzu wakes up and asks Drpece for about treefiddy
Idk |
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drpece231
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:11 PM |
"Dzu wakes up and asks Drpece for about treefiddy" So she becomes the loch ness monster |
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giftbox24
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:12 PM |
@drpece Yea, spaghetti optional |
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Dzuheron
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:19 PM |
The sun began to sink below the horizon and the silhouette of a great, expensive mansion surrounded by wine orchards came into view. Inside one of the rooms, a woman lay asleep, breathing peacefully. Suddenly a man entered the room and she stirred into wake. "I'm the one who rescued you!" Said the man, who is revealed to be DrPece. "What? You? Why did you rescue me?" She asked back.
"Because that's the kind of man I am," he said with a wry grin, as he approached her bed chamber. "I'm a protector of the less wealthy..." his voice trailed off as he reached out and admired his tripplebillion dollar wristwatch made of pure diamond and platinum. Then he looked back at her, his eyes twinkling like a zillion burning starts in an amber night sky. "Won't you join me for wine?"
"Most certainly!" she said, as she wobbled to her feet and was escorted out of the room by DrPece...
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:24 PM |
bump is nobody reading
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Dzuheron
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:26 PM |
Okay, I'm done writing this piece of savory fiction.
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YOHIOloid
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:27 PM |
I'm good at getting into detail, which I could write a Moris x Song nicely for you.
And also, I could make fiamingdiner write it, he is very good at writing them.
I'll just make the beautiful MMD animation... |
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:29 PM |
@YOHIO
Flamingdinner's a nob tho.
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YOHIOloid
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:30 PM |
| He's better than you, not to mention I know him multiple ways outside of ROBLOX |
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:30 PM |
Hahaha... he's not better than me. Not by a long shot.
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YOHIOloid
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:31 PM |
his fanfics > yours
even the ones involving my book characters which I didn't want were actually DECENT |
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:32 PM |
I honestly doubt it. I don't think FlamingDinner has any redeeming qualities whatsoever.
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YOHIOloid
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:32 PM |
he made OT's jimmies rustled with ilovemom11111
and he also has a crush on song which means you lose |
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| 05 Feb 2014 06:37 PM |
Hah, because crush = higher relationship status? I hang out with her all the time. Plus I don't really have a crush on her per se, but we're good friends.
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