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| 27 Jan 2014 04:40 PM |
[Electro] It was a dream To be in the lights of the street ooohhh Those Haters ooohhh Those Haterssss They hated me That was my motivation LOOK AT ME NOW *fades out*
[Astro] I was just a young blood With a really big dream To see my name in the lights And my face on the big screen Paris London All over the World My mind is goin' crazy like a rabbit for trix swirls It's all thanks to the Haters They're the ones that brought me here After going through all that hate and fear I'm finally here... *fades out*
[Electro] I was a young blood with nothing but a dream big ambition filled me oh can you see, The haters motivated me and made me sad but lucky thats what made me grow, So all you out there who hated me why you gotta hate? All you out there who liked me congrats on your success. All of you out there ohhhhh all of you out there JUST LOOK AT ME NOW *now now* JUST LOOK AT ME NOOOOOOOOOw *fades*
[Astro] Look at me now I got the world in my hands And i got the btches givin me a dance so many honeys its like im up in France Where i once struggled I am now the best My name is heard from the east to the west *echoes* NOW LOOK AT ME *fades* |
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| 28 Jan 2014 11:08 AM |
"its like im up in France"
What's so good about France?
~[The Mango Farmer/RNW Lieutenant Colonel]~...
"Intelligence is the ability to adapt to bass" - Stephen Walking... |
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iViera
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| 28 Jan 2014 11:10 AM |
Love that it's upbeat and kind of edgy and different and it COULD be something new. Problem is RHYMING. You both need to work on the rhyming, it can't be regular verse - rhyme verse all the time. It needs to be verse-rhyme-rhyme or verse-rhyme-rhyme.
I'm giving this a 9/10. It needs to Improve. |
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| 31 Jan 2014 04:32 PM |
Nice but not really seeing the vison about the rhymes I was excited to see this try and do a few songs where people can feel you and sign you
9/10 For some sense of postion because other rappers just get clocked out by disses |
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:13 PM |
Inferno Paris hello? City of love city of light lol...
Electrobeats You call yourself a hero but ur actually a zero
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:27 PM |
| why do you rap about success when these corny ass verses get you nowhere, you don't have any haters bruh. i used to be like you, an introvert. get a life |
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:28 PM |
| We are ro soccer legends we are talking about our succes don't say something you don't know |
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:33 PM |
| IM SURROUNDED BY IDIOT RO RAPPERS |
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:34 PM |
| Idiot read my song the song of life |
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:42 PM |
| Ro rap has changed so much but ad it's back on its feet |
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:43 PM |
| Read my hit song the song of life and then you'll see how much it has changed |
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:44 PM |
| BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA |
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