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| 04 Feb 2014 10:19 AM |
I had a dream that turned into ambition it tasted like cream and I was total domination. Then there was 10 minutes left in regulation you won the match by a simple catch you then called you're self a hero but let me tell you you're worse than a zero . (Chorus) The song of life' the song of life is everything nothing is right any day or night but the sights and the clay made us say we are The song of life. (Electro) ok now I'm singing this song every line every day nothing. Can stop me anyway You tell me i horse play but let me tell you this You sit down and lay. While I save the world you sold you're home nothing is right till I write every single song that's made long wait hold on my mom is coming so long. |
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| 04 Feb 2014 12:12 PM |
| That's some talent there nice move ! - Jackmanya (Rate:10/10) |
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monty155
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| 04 Feb 2014 12:13 PM |
| what does this have to do with video games. |
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| 04 Feb 2014 06:42 PM |
| You guys are so good tell me if you liked this and I will make even more songs!!! Thank you guys for 40 views album coming soon 😄 |
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PoniSpai
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| 04 Feb 2014 06:49 PM |
You wrote text. That is hardly a good song.
Go make a full version with vocals and good musoc and I will dig. But until then, this ain't nuthin' m8. |
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:09 PM |
| Imagine a beat m8 and you'll understand |
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PoniSpai
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:09 PM |
| Give me a BPM. What genre? Backround instruments? Tempo? |
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:14 PM |
| Imagine somebody rapping this in a voice like eminem and aha take on me or pot bull feel this moment tempo |
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PoniSpai
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:16 PM |
That tells me nothing.
Eminem has such a variety of vocal points. And that isn't a tempo. That's a comparison to a song. |
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:20 PM |
| Don't hate just love it just imagine a rap a fast tempo exept chorus |
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:25 PM |
| Omg guys u are amazing 83 in 1 day we are awesome thank you guys to much selfs steam coming out soon |
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PoniSpai
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:27 PM |
| Why would I love it when it isn't even a decent song. |
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Roseart2
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:29 PM |
Electro, please give me a real song.
These lyrics are subparb, but Eminem has many vocal points, he can be very quiet, and very loud and emotional. And I don't know the instruments, beat, time signature, nothing.
"Why my dear boy". |
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:30 PM |
| Cause u never heard a rap now let's lay this off ok 😃 were all friendshere |
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:31 PM |
| Yea like the first part (before the chorus) is middle and loud and second part (after chorus) is low and not that quiet but quiet |
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Roseart2
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:31 PM |
@Electro I actually like rap. If you want me to imagine "rap", I'd imagine this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ssMTJArRjYs
"Why my dear boy". |
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:34 PM |
| YES THOSE YES TAHT IS WHAT OT IS LIKE |
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Roseart2
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:36 PM |
@Electro 1.Please join Music Fans. They will be enlightened to see you.
2.And btw, you are horrible at "music" if you only type stuff on ROBLOX. Sing this or something and get me something on YouTube.
3. John Cena and Tha Trademark are not Eminem nor Pitbull.
"Why my dear boy". |
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:39 PM |
| Well there this is how ro rappers put songs on roblox and ok |
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| 04 Feb 2014 07:42 PM |
| Imagine the beats as Electro Beats |
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| 05 Feb 2014 08:56 AM |
| Bump so the world can see dumbness. |
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| 07 Feb 2014 02:44 PM |
| I know you can make mistakes with the rhymes but a dream tasted like cream? nice ryhme but it look's like a rhyme scheme now I recap it |
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