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| 24 Jan 2014 12:10 AM |
(Verse 1 Bullet/Drake17dude) I remember when I first met you, You made me complete, I was the Dr. Dre to your beats, But as time went on our relationship went bittersweet, Then there was a blur, Now there's a hole in my heart where you were, I tried to fill it by being a stoner, Busy getting lifted, While your out with your new guy I'm busting these tracks, Trying make some throwback raps, Sitting with a light and a match, My heart didn't have a patch, Had no one to reattach, To, Inside I'm blue, Cause this all happened one night when all I can think about was you, I'm getting texted pictures from your Best friend of you and your guy, Tryna justify, To myself why I'm thinking of you, Knowing you could care less about me, Uh..
(Chorus Bullet/Drake17dude & Alex Wolfe/Nitromegaman) But that's the past, Yet I can't stop thinking of you, But I hate the fact, That I'm alone without you, I hate the fact, That I'm alone without you, A-A-Alone With out you,
(Verse 2 Alex Wolfe/ Nitromegaman) When I first saw you, I thought you'll be the one, Sure we had fun, But you left me for someone else, Girl, you were my prized possession, But you broke my heart, Now we're in this situation, so many complications Since you left me, I felt alone I felt why was I born, Or why love exist, She will always be missed, But how would I love again,
(Bridge Bullet/Drake17dude) Your gone, I'm gone, No longer together, But you will always be missed,
(Chorus Bullet/Drake17dude & Alex Wolfe/Nitromegaman) But that's the past, Yet I can't stop thinking of you, But I hate the fact, That I'm alone without you, I hate the fact, That I'm alone without you, A-A-Alone With out you, |
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| 24 Jan 2014 12:18 AM |
wow 10/10 original concept great writing just wow
(not really though) |
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| 24 Jan 2014 03:08 AM |
| To be honest, it's still better than how he used to rap. |
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| 24 Jan 2014 07:52 AM |
| Thanks. There's along way for me to go before I get great but I just do it as a hobby I want to be a professional Basketball Player. |
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iViera
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| 24 Jan 2014 03:14 PM |
0.5/10 ;3 Lol jk.
99.5/100 ;3 |
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| 26 Jan 2014 04:27 PM |
| I'm really glad how this turned out. |
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| 26 Jan 2014 11:04 PM |
| @Jono 7.9 estimated to 8. ^_^ |
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PenBlade
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| 27 Jan 2014 10:01 AM |
I wasn't impressed. It honestly struck me as kind of corny and lame. If you make a song about relationships, it should be deep and meaningful. This just seemed like something that happened in elementary school.
5/10. |
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| 27 Jan 2014 06:53 PM |
| @pen dude we ain't adults or have a real life recording studio to actually make a professional love song like Bruno Mars or Adele. Of course we haven't experienced actual real love since we're still young so expecting a love song like neyo or usher from a couple of teenagers is drastic. |
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| 27 Jan 2014 06:57 PM |
| @Nitro: Exactly why you shouldn't be trying to make lyrics like this. Nitro is correct, but it's still better than his older raps. |
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| 27 Jan 2014 08:04 PM |
| Thanks. love songs aren't really my thing but I was expressing my feels |
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PenBlade
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| 28 Jan 2014 10:25 AM |
"@pen dude we ain't adults or have a real life recording studio to actually make a professional love song like Bruno Mars or Adele. Of course we haven't experienced actual real love since we're still young so expecting a love song like neyo or usher from a couple of teenagers is drastic."
EXACTLY. So why are you writing love songs when the closest you came to love was being chased by girls at recess? |
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| 28 Jan 2014 02:37 PM |
| Well on my behalf, the point of writing a love song is something that people can relate to or a love song that expresses emotion, no matter how much it shows. But all it matters is if people listening/reading the song like it. Not all songs have to be meaningful though like opa gangnam style or what does the fox say. Just because we're teens doesn't mean we don't have to write love songs. There's all types of songs from meeting your first crush to spending the rest of your life with a woman. But the age group the song focuses on is the age group that will mostly understand the song or the experiences someone may experience before. |
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| 29 Jan 2014 07:44 AM |
| Yea, I guess Pre-K students do need something to rock out to. |
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| 29 Jan 2014 02:10 PM |
And I guess haters need something to be jealous to.
P.s. I'm 15 |
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| 29 Jan 2014 02:14 PM |
| Jealous of what? You have nothing to be jealous of. |
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