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| 24 Jan 2014 11:59 AM |
Moris fell into a hole that led him to a hellish other dimension called Nytmer. As soon as he arrived, he was attacked by lots of scary creatures and he fought within an inch of his life when he was rescued by a strange transporting mist. He woke up in the palace of Korona, a king that resembled a dog with a mo-hawk.
He promised to help Moris get back to his world if he hunted down the shards of Hellbreaker, a sword that could release Korona from his chains (he was chained to the palace). The shards were each defended by darkness guardians. So Moris went on the journey, led by hope, to retrieve each of the pieces. Along the way he became more skilled and rescued a few fellow mortals from the hellish plains.
Moris eventually defeated all of the guardians and brought the pieces back to Korona. Once breaking free of his chains, he summoned a great energy that tore the world open and Moris' familiar home came into view. Moris then realized that Korona was evil and had been held there by some magical source to keep him from destroying or conquering his world. It all made sense.
So Moris fought Korona and won, and Korona's ability to command magic flames was passed to Moris.
Moris' life returned to normal (except for him being more skilled) and he had nightmares from time to time.
Ok.
You know... that thing is that kitties... are magical. |
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| 24 Jan 2014 12:03 PM |
Huh Are you going to be a fantasy writer or something |
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| 24 Jan 2014 12:05 PM |
"Huh Are you going to be a fantasy writer or something"
Yes. But I still feel like this story doesn't fit... it needs to be fleshed out more, thrown in with a bunch of creativity.
You know... that thing is that kitties... are magical. |
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| 24 Jan 2014 12:10 PM |
If you were righting surreal comedy we could do a colab I don't even write Or do comedy |
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| 24 Jan 2014 12:10 PM |
@me *writing dodangit english |
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| 24 Jan 2014 07:09 PM |
"i do not care"
Then you shouldn't have spent the time writing that comment. lol
And I'm really sorry now that every time I bump this thread it will come up in your My Forums inbox. :P
You know... that thing is that kitties... are magical. |
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| 24 Jan 2014 07:12 PM |
what was that you said awhile back saying you didn't have an ego?
-Imagination- |
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| 24 Jan 2014 07:13 PM |
| How long did it take you to type this? |
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| 24 Jan 2014 07:13 PM |
"what was that you said awhile back saying you didn't have an ego?"
I know you're only a grade-schooler but honestly I expect you to know the difference between being creative and fantasizing.
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| 24 Jan 2014 07:14 PM |
@Song
I don't know.
Korona's a character I've had for years now... I guess you could say he was my second original furry OC.
You know... that thing is that kitties... are magical. |
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| 24 Jan 2014 07:14 PM |
"I know you're only a grade-schooler"
this is coming from you don't make me laugh
"but honestly I expect you to know the difference between being creative and fantasizing."
no I know the difference in between an attention seeker, vs a person with actual creativity
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| 24 Jan 2014 07:16 PM |
| Wait did u just quote twilight? |
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| 24 Jan 2014 07:16 PM |
"I don't know.
Korona's a character I've had for years now... I guess you could say he was my second original furry OC."
He sounds cool. :)
I found this interesting...
I find most stories interesting...exceptnonfictionthatisnotrelatedtodinosaursbecausenonfictionmakesmewanttogotosleep... |
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| 24 Jan 2014 07:16 PM |
"this is coming from you don't make me laugh"
um wat? i'm only stating a fact ok.. you admitted it to ot anyways..
"no I know the difference in between an attention seeker, vs a person with actual creativity"
what's wrong with my posting my ideas to ot, posten? if you don't like it, i don't see why you can't leave.
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| 24 Jan 2014 07:22 PM |
"um wat? i'm only stating a fact ok.. you admitted it to ot anyways.."
when was this? never I have never posted my grade level on these forums before because in all honesty, you claim you're in highschool when you seem to have the maturing of a 2nd grader but moris I am not the one claiming assumptions here
"what's wrong with my posting my ideas to ot, posten? if you don't like it, i don't see why you can't leave."
and it's also the other way around I don't see anything from stopping me mess with your emotions I mean in my mind you are practically bipolar, and your responses to things amuse me because they make no logical sense to me. Maybe I am a grade schooler at heart, mainly because I can stare at a rock for a good hour without getting bored. Then again, it could also be the other way around, I could be somewhat of a genius at heart. Who the hell knows, because I sure don't. If you don't like what I am doing, I don't see why you can't leave, Moris.
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| 24 Jan 2014 07:24 PM |
"I can stare at a rock for a good hour without getting bored."
Oooh, do you like geology? |
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| 24 Jan 2014 07:27 PM |
"Oooh, do you like geology?"
A lot of things fascinate me mainly some of the people on OT Some are actually just good jokers and deceive people, and others lack the common sense of an average person, who are serious. They are the people who make this place interesting. and yeah, geology is ok, but I like psychology a whole lot better
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| 24 Jan 2014 07:28 PM |
"and yeah, geology is ok, but I like psychology a whole lot better"
IMO Paleontology, geology, and biology are the best sciences~ |
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| 24 Jan 2014 07:30 PM |
biology and chemistry master sciences
wraze is as charming as electricblaze |
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| 24 Jan 2014 07:31 PM |
"when was this? never" About a week ago you told everyone that you were almost in highschool. I don't know if you have bad memory or something, but you did.
"I have never posted my grade level on these forums before because in all honesty, you claim you're in highschool when you seem to have the maturing of a 2nd grader" Ouch. Getting burned by a gradeschooler. :')
"but moris I am not the one claiming assumptions here"
"claiming assumptions"
ok i'm not claiming assumptions either. lol
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| 24 Jan 2014 07:31 PM |
| this is what you call 2 mary sue ocs |
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