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| 24 Nov 2013 12:00 PM |
::~::Heroes: The beginning::~::
Introduction
You were walking home from school/work, you suddenly feel drowsy and fall to the floor, you see two men in lab coats pick you up, then it all went black.
You wake up in a glass cylinder full of a clear liquid, though you can breath, on your arms are a few spots were you were obviously injected.
Basics
The government are testing on humans, you are taken in to a lab, they test on the humans. Most of the humans grow abilities, such as shape shifting and telekinesis. Eventually the humans will learn how to use their powers and escape. Some of the humans shall wreck havoc, while others will try bring peace.
Rules
1.Not too powerful powers 2.Put ~Hero~ in other 3.Ignore trolls 4.No godmodding 5.Be realistic 6.Be serious 7.Don't take unrealistic powers like soul trap etc. 8.Have a maximum of three characters 9.Have a maximum of 3 powers
Areas
Forest: A lush forest on the borders of the city
Four towers: In the centre of the city is four towers, one is for apartments, one is for mysterious purposes, one is for a hospital, and the last is for shops, there is one hidden black market in here, in the black market you can buy money printers, weapons, etc.
City centre: In the centre of the city are the richest people, in huge houses and such, the local police station is here.
City outskirts: This is an okay area, though there are many beggars, Gangs and black markets here. The local fire station is here.
Forest town: A wooden town in the forest.
Character sheet:
Name: Surname: "Hero" name: (Optional, for mutated/non mutated heroes people only) Age: Gender: Appearance: Clothes: "Hero" Clothes: (Optional, for mutated/non mutated heroes people only) Personality: Biography: Weapons: (Optional) Mutated or not:(If not you start in the city and live a normal life, unless you want to be a hero/villain without powers) Companions:(Has to be another of your characters or a friend who accepts, if they accept they have to put you as their companion) Power:(Only for mutated people, have a maximum of three) Other: |
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| 24 Nov 2013 12:12 PM |
Name: Bella Surname: Bella May Croftford "Hero" name: (Optional, for mutated/non mutated heroes people only) Super Girl Age: 19 Gender: Female Appearance: Blonde blue eyes 5"9 Clothes: Grey T Jeans and Sneakers "Hero" Clothes: (Optional, for mutated/non mutated heroes people only) A Pink Suit and a Pink cape Personality: Funny and kind Biography: She lived in California and then moved away from her family to live by herself. Weapons: (Optional) Bow and Arrow Mutated or not:(If not you start in the city and live a normal life, unless you want to be a hero/villain without powers) Mutated Ima hero with powers Companions:(Has to be another of your characters or a friend who accepts, if they accept they have to put you as their companion) Uh Can it be u? Power:(Only for mutated people, have a maximum of three) Fire, Invisibility and shape-shifting Other: N/A
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NATBRI
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| 24 Nov 2013 12:46 PM |
Name: Nathaniel A.
Surname: Lincoln
"Hero" name: Governor
Age: 36 (Due to mutations he now looks as if he's in his twenties.)
Gender: Male
Appearance: 6'4.5, Black hair, Skyblue eyes with a yellow sunburst in the middle, strong build, medium weight, good shape.
Clothes:Clothes: Black trench coat, Western Fedora Black, cowboy boots black steel toe, jeans, bullet proof vest, holster, sword scabbard black wood.
"Hero" Clothes: Black trench coat, Western Fedora Black, cowboy boots black steel toe, jeans, bullet proof vest, holster, sword scabbard black wood, black shirt.
Personality: Southern by birth, holds a gentlemanly preference, and a belief in hard work. He may be slightly arrogant but he is very intelligent. Talks and likes to talk but believes in saying what you mean and leaving out what he calls "fluff" thus it seems as if he's a quite person. All of this coupled with his strong belief in God and his training as a military officer and Air Force Pj makes him an interesting character.
Biography: Southern by birth, he made A's in school. He was fairly popular although never enjoying the popularity as most would. By the time high school was over he had applied for various military academies eventually gaining entrance to the Air Force Academy in Colorado. Becoming a doctor in the Air Force. And then rising to the difficult task of becoming a Pararescueman. He was deeply wounded by the unlikely deaths of all his friends in the service coupled by the deaths of his parents at home. This led him to want to help his country more devoting his entire self into it. Though he was already taking on one of the most difficult jobs in the Air Force and couldn't figure out what to do next. Apparently the higher ups noticed his need for something more challenging and offered him a spot in a new program. They refused to give him any information on what it was about further than the phrase "you would be providing a great service" nevertheless he agreed believing that his government would not send him into anything he couldn't handle and that God would be watching him. And that is where the story begins.
Weapons: A one handed sword, and a revolver.
Mutated or not: Mutated
Companions:(Has to be another of your characters or a friend who accepts, if they accept they have to put you as their companion)
Power: 1. Self-Sustenance(Never needing need sleep, food, ignore temperature, aging, etc). 2. Hydra healing (Heal back stronger, ex:cut off a weak arm grow a muscled one.)
Each of these powers has a weakness that can be discovered with a little brainstorming and if accepted I'd be happy to pm you those weaknesses so you would know when another player should outsmart me. Although I've not been known to god mode nor do I enjoy doing as such.
Other: Military officer training, previous doctor, and pj. His mind has been amplified by his new powers allowing him to constantly be at the top his game and then some. |
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| 24 Nov 2013 12:48 PM |
Name: Nathaniel A.
Surname: Lincoln
"Hero" name: Governor
Age: 36 (Due to mutations he now looks as if he's in his twenties.)
Gender: Male
Appearance: 6'4.5, Black hair, Skyblue eyes with a yellow sunburst in the middle, strong build, medium weight, good shape.
Clothes:Clothes: Black trench coat, Western Fedora Black, cowboy boots black steel toe, jeans, bullet proof vest, holster, sword scabbard black wood.
"Hero" Clothes: Black trench coat, Western Fedora Black, cowboy boots black steel toe, jeans, bullet proof vest, holster, sword scabbard black wood, black shirt.
Personality: Southern by birth, holds a gentlemanly preference, and a belief in hard work. He may be slightly arrogant but he is very intelligent. Talks and likes to talk but believes in saying what you mean and leaving out what he calls "fluff" thus it seems as if he's a quite person. All of this coupled with his strong belief in God and his training as a military officer and Air Force Pj makes him an interesting character.
Biography: Southern by birth, he made A's in school. He was fairly popular although never enjoying the popularity as most would. By the time high school was over he had applied for various military academies eventually gaining entrance to the Air Force Academy in Colorado. Becoming a doctor in the Air Force. And then rising to the difficult task of becoming a Pararescueman. He was deeply wounded by the unlikely deaths of all his friends in the service coupled by the deaths of his parents at home. This led him to want to help his country more devoting his entire self into it. Though he was already taking on one of the most difficult jobs in the Air Force and couldn't figure out what to do next. Apparently the higher ups noticed his need for something more challenging and offered him a spot in a new program. They refused to give him any information on what it was about further than the phrase "you would be providing a great service" nevertheless he agreed believing that his government would not send him into anything he couldn't handle and that God would be watching him. And that is where the story begins.
Weapons: A one handed sword, and a revolver.
Mutated or not: Mutated
Companions:(Has to be another of your characters or a friend who accepts, if they accept they have to put you as their companion)
Power: 1. Self-Sustenance(Never needing need sleep, food, ignore temperature, aging, etc). 2. Hydra healing (Heal back stronger, ex:cut off a weak arm grow a muscled one.)
Each of these powers has a weakness that can be discovered with a little brainstorming and if accepted I'd be happy to pm you those weaknesses so you would know when another player should outsmart me. Although I've not been known to god mode nor do I enjoy doing as such.
Other: ~Hero~
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| 25 Nov 2013 06:33 AM |
| (Accepted, should I make a character?) |
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| 25 Nov 2013 12:43 PM |
| (Little mix, you missing something) |
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Rhiss
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| Joined: 20 Nov 2012 |
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| 26 Nov 2013 07:55 AM |
This needs a bit of work. The plot seems to be overly cliche, and it also seems a bit too rushed.
Another thing is, that it's so short on the story department. Why exactly, are they testing on people? Why are all the characters suddenly drowsy?
I reduce points from the Roleplay in the fact that it has a cliche premise, and too little information on the story.
However, I give the Roleplay points, for not forcing players to play as a person with powers; that isn't done too often.
All in all, this should be remade, but with more detail and information, and bring something a little different to the table. |
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kseeking
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| 26 Nov 2013 11:28 AM |
Name: Alex Surname: Sanderson "Hero" name: (Optional, for mutated/non mutated heroes people only) Captain Cosmic Age: 20 Gender: Male Appearance: He has black spiky hair with a muscular body, he has brown eyes. Clothes: He likes to wear a black jacket and blue jeans with his nikes. "Hero" Clothes: (Optional, for mutated/non mutated heroes people only) He wears a golden suit that covers all his body except for his face on his face he wears a mask on the suit there are streaks of blue lighting down across his suit. That glow when the power of cosmic is within him. Personality: He is a very adventurous and can be kind but ever since mutation he's been more focused and always keeping an eye out. Biography: Alex grew up with his little sister always with him there were never separated and always watching out for each other they would always make sure they stayed safe until the mutation after they escaped they fled where they had been held prisoners. Weapons: (Optional) Mutated or not:(If not you start in the city and live a normal life, unless you want to be a hero/villain without powers) yes Companions:(Has to be another of your characters or a friend who accepts, if they accept they have to put you as their companion) His little sister Kayla Power: Cosmic manipulation: He can manipulate the power of cosmic in portions for limited time it takes a certain level of his concentration and a lot of his will power. Superhuman strength: stronger than average human. Flight: he has the ability to fly. Other: Heros
Name: Kayla Surname: Sanderson "Hero" name: (Optional, for mutated/non mutated heroes people only) Teleka Age:19 and a half. Gender: Male Appearance:she has tan skin and black long hair with brown eyes. Clothes: She likes to wear her black skinny jeans and a hello kitty t-shirt. "Hero" Clothes: (Optional, for mutated/non mutated heroes people only) She wears a black spandex suit with a eye mask. Personality: She is very kind and caring for people and need and will help almost anyone Biography: She grew up with her big brother growing up with him there were never separated and always watching out for each other they would always make sure they stayed safe until the mutation after they escaped they fled where they had been held prisoners. Weapons: (Optional) Mutated or not:(If not you start in the city and live a normal life, unless you want to be a hero/villain without powers) Yes Companions:(Has to be another of your characters or a friend who accepts, if they accept they have to put you as their companion) Her big brother Alex Power:(Only for mutated people, have a maximum of three) Telekinesis Other: Heros |
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| 26 Nov 2013 11:31 AM |
This has pretty much the exact same plot as Rangergirl's roleplay, Evolved. http://web.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=118467299
~I've got a joke. Modern Society. |
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| 26 Nov 2013 11:49 AM |
| (Interesting....marked until I make up my mind!) |
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Melvar
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| Joined: 10 Jul 2011 |
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| 26 Nov 2013 12:53 PM |
Name:Bradley Surname:Conway "Hero" name: Cyboy (Optional, for mutated/non mutated heroes people only) Age:14 Gender:Male Appearance: Short, tan, brown eyes, dimples, freckles scattered across his face, short brown hair parted the the right.
Clothes: "Hero" Clothes: Nah (Optional, for mutated/non mutated heroes people only) Personality:Extremely shy, fairly intelligent. Biography:He lived a normal life. His parents were kind and he had a semi-spoiled life style. He was the "popular" kid in Elementary school but in Middle school he has classes with no one he knows. Which made him depressed and sad. He only cares about his family and he never wants to leave his home. Weapons: None (Optional) Mutated or not: Mutated(If not you start in the city and live a normal life, unless you want to be a hero/villain without powers) Companions: None(Has to be another of your characters or a friend who accepts, if they accept they have to put you as their companion) Power: He is permanently a cyborg in his interior but he shows no signs of an artificial body. He is monumentally stronger than before and can shoot a paralyzing beam out of his eyes. (Only for mutated people, have a maximum of three) Other: None |
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| 26 Nov 2013 02:47 PM |
Surname: Rainor Name: Talithin Age: 30 Gender: Male Appearance: Caucasian, 5 foot 11, brown hair and brown eyes, when facial hair not cut, has a mustache and beard. Clothes: when off duty, wears jeans and a T shirt. When on duty, wears SEAL armor and a bulletproof vest. Personality: Kind, but strict. Biography: He underwent SEAL acadamy at 28, graduated at 29 and was assigned on SEAL Team 1. Rxtremely talented soldier and tactician. Won't bore you with childhood or details of training. Weapons: FN SCAR STD and HK MP5N Mutated: No, but he is a bad to the bone SEAL. Companions: He does, his SEAL team, but I won't use them directly, for the sake of typing. (And my fingers...) Other: Hero |
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| 26 Nov 2013 02:48 PM |
| Misquote. In companions, I mean that they won't be in the RP much. |
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| 26 Nov 2013 03:58 PM |
| (Marking, I'll make my CS when not busy.) |
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| 26 Nov 2013 04:21 PM |
"This has pretty much the exact same plot as Rangergirl's roleplay, Evolved. http://web.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=118467299"
You seem to be implying that he copied Rangergirl. How do you copy a cliche? |
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| 26 Nov 2013 05:23 PM |
| I don't have any others though |
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| 27 Nov 2013 08:03 AM |
| (Littlemix, your character is good, but read the rules, Malvar you missing the same thing, beside that, all above accepted, and for the people giving me constructive criticism, I thank you, but I do not say why the government took them in because they don't know yet.) |
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kseeking
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| Joined: 22 Apr 2012 |
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| 27 Nov 2013 10:24 AM |
| (So can we rp now? Because I really want to start blowing up planets and stuff.) |
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| 27 Nov 2013 11:48 AM |
@Kseeking Which one was born prematurely? If the sister was half a year younger than her brother,one of them would have had to been born prematurely. |
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PawzKat
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| Joined: 22 Apr 2012 |
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| 27 Nov 2013 12:11 PM |
| « Marked. Might join, might not. » |
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| 28 Nov 2013 06:56 AM |
| (You can start, but should I create a character?) |
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| 28 Nov 2013 08:52 AM |
| (you now accepted, should I make a character?) |
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| 28 Nov 2013 08:53 AM |
not joining because i need a biography
JUST FOR THE POST COUNT |
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