ZeTRAGuy
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| Joined: 11 Aug 2012 |
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| 22 Jan 2014 09:22 PM |
Antarctica, south pole
"Penguins come in" ??? "penguins I repeat, come in!" ??? "Yeah, we're here" Master 3395 yawned. "We need penguins at arkotos, now!" Tehnoooobshow cried. "VAK is attacking!" "Teh, we'll be their." Master replied. As master turns off the radio he takes off with the last penguins TRA has. "ZeTRAGuy." He said "Yes, sir?" I replied. "take you closest family members and go to arkotos!" "Yes, sir!"
In plane above, fort darox II
"Alright, BoilingJohnny, Golfpro2233, Mohid12, andres14 and Benythebull we may not be able to fly, but we can glide. Let's save those souls and show them how we penguins roll!" "Yeah" They Said together "Well let's slide out!" I pointed to the door. We got kicked out of the plane by Gigazic saying "Get off my plane!"
Arkotos, somewhere out of the coastline TRA turf.
Here we dive in! We all pull out are parachutes and fire at the Vaktovians as Vaktovian bodies drop to the ground. "Lets take back alpha!" As we land a few of our fellow soldiers are here. "Shane55, PureGlory, Invious and UAVisOnline are here!" "Yes, we are and we lost half our men, I am glad they sent you." Shane said in pride "Alright, we need you guys to follow us penguins, we got you covered." We rolled into Bravo point at least eight VAK were here. Shane and I snipped down and provided cover for the rest of our team mates. A VAk soldier snuck up on boil and almost slit his throat, I declined that to happen so down he went. another and another.Two were on a rooftop Shane shot both. "Peh lucky shot" I said. "Nothing but skill." He smiled. As we were talking about that we had the flag moving up.
Point Charlie
"Here we are men, at Charlie."
Part one of two, read the second one all so you will not be offended. |
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| 23 Jan 2014 12:23 AM |
| Everything happens to fast e.e at least have a bit of an introduction. |
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ZeTRAGuy
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| Joined: 11 Aug 2012 |
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| 23 Jan 2014 12:24 AM |
| Wouldn't make it too long, besides it would be boring. |
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| 23 Jan 2014 11:08 AM |
| I agree with nar, its way too fast, but a good story. Try to keep a good pace alive. |
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