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Re: TRA Fort Talus: The Unknown Story

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jellyjim98 is not online. jellyjim98
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23 Aug 2013 10:52 AM
{THIS IS 100 % FICTION. ALL CHARCTERS AND EVENTS CAME FROM A DREAM I HAD. ANY SIMILARITIES BETWEEN ANY REAL ROBLOXIANS AND ANY CHARACTERS IN THIS STORY IS A MERE COINICENDECE.}


This is the unknown story of TRA's Fort Talus. We all know what it says for the description. But few actually know of the defenders of it, before it got garrisoned at the fort. This is their story.

{PART 1}

"Sir, the sensors are going off. Should we send a few men to investigate it?" There was a small not of panic in his voice.

"No need Private, they've gone off almost nonstop for the past month."

"By your orders, Lieutenant."

"At least someone remembers who is in charge here.", I mumble under my breath.

The sensors were faulty, I thought to myself. Everything here is faulty. We are in the middle of nowhere, on an island. We are hundreds of thousands of miles from the nearest city.

There is only a few ways you get sent to 'guard' Talus. You mouth off to the wrong HR, shoot something you're not supposed (Like an HR for an example), or is the HR's just hate you. With my luck, all three happened to me.

Anyways, something about the sensors disturbed me a little bit. Usually, when I got over to the instrument panel, and hit a few keys, the alarm shut off. This time it didn't.

"Wake the soldiers up, we might have a small raid."

We sometimes have small, lightning raids. the biggest one had 10 unskilled enemy soldiers. They were never a problem for my platoon, but still had to be dealt with.

As the soldiers got to the first Radio Tower in danger, we saw this would be no lightning raid. Because before us, we saw at least 100 soldiers on the wall, probably even more behind it.
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enes130 is not online. enes130
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23 Aug 2013 10:53 AM
"FROM A DREAM I HAD"

I stopped there... Dont dream about this game..
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kingcon12 is not online. kingcon12
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23 Aug 2013 10:57 AM
Strange...
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Pwnagemaster100 is not online. Pwnagemaster100
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23 Aug 2013 10:58 AM
Coo' storeh, man.
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ConAar is not online. ConAar
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23 Aug 2013 10:59 AM
I like it. Have you applyed for the newsletter thingy, If not consider it!
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PeregrineFalconz is not online. PeregrineFalconz
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23 Aug 2013 10:59 AM
cool
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robinsthedark2 is not online. robinsthedark2
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23 Aug 2013 11:01 AM
Nice, I like it, will there be a second part?
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jellyjim98 is not online. jellyjim98
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23 Aug 2013 11:37 AM
{THIS IS 100 % FICTION. ALL CHARCTERS AND EVENTS CAME FROM A DREAM I HAD. ANY SIMILARITIES BETWEEN ANY REAL ROBLOXIANS AND ANY CHARACTERS IN THIS STORY IS A MERE COINICENDECE.}

{PART 2}

[12 months prior]

I knew I was in trouble when I got the 'invitation' to see The Council. I called them The Council, but really it was just all of the HR's deciding my fate. I knew what the Council room looked like, I had been there 4 times before.

"JELLYJIM98,", the voice boomed, "YOU HAVE COMMITTED CRIMES AGAINST TRA. WHAT DO YOU SAY IN YOU DEFENSE?"

I knew it was the voice of our Commander. I had heard rumors, that if the Commander sneezed, he world would shake. Next to him were the other 16 members of the Council. Most of them hated me. Most of them wanted to see either out of TRA, or dead.

"I have nothing to say in my defense, Sir." What could I say? The evidence was stacked against me. I knew I hadn't done some of the things I was being accused of, but they wouldn't listen to me, even if I had tried to defend myself.

"THEN THIS COUNCIL WILL MAKE UP ITS MIND ABOUT YOUR PUNISHMENT."

I waited, sweating, not knowing anything about my punishment. I hoped the few HR's that didn't hate me would keep me from getting killed, demoted, or exiled. As I waited, I saw many angry glances at me.

"JELLYJIM98, THIS COUNCIL HAS REACHED ITS VERDICT."

I tensed up, knowing this would be the end of it all.

"THE COUNCIL HAS DECIDED TO SEND YOU TO GUARD TALUS."

"Talus, Sir? What is that?"

"TALUS IS THE HEART OF TRA'S POWER. THERE IS A PLATOON ALREADY THERE, YOU WILL RELIVE THE CURRENT OFFICER ON DUTY."

"ANY QUESTIONS BEFORE WE DISMISS YOU?"

"No, Sir. I do not have any questions."

"THEN YOU WILL BE SHIPPED OUT IN A FEW DAYS TIME."

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Angelodude99 is not online. Angelodude99
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23 Aug 2013 12:19 PM
Very nice. You should continue.
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jellyjim98 is not online. jellyjim98
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23 Aug 2013 12:46 PM
{THIS IS 100 % FICTION. ALL CHARCTERS AND EVENTS CAME FROM A DREAM I HAD. ANY SIMILARITIES BETWEEN ANY REAL ROBLOXIANS AND ANY CHARACTERS IN THIS STORY IS A MERE COINICENDECE.}

{PART 3}


As I was boarding the transport heading for Talus, someone stopped me.

"Jelly, wait up a second."

I knew the voice, it was one of the Council members. Properly one of my favorite ones, Colonel HeatWave007.

"What do you want, Sir?"

"I want you to have this."

"What is it?

" A weapon, you might need it."

"Thank you, Sir."

"Also Jelly, I want you to know that nobody has survived at Talus for more than a year. Only use this weapon if you absolutely need."

I don't know why I need another weapon, I already had my rifle, my pistol, and my knife.

As I boarded the transport, I feared I would not be coming home.


It was a long flight, over 48 hours with stops every 12 hours.


"Sir, we are approaching Talus.", the pilot's voice came over the intercom.

I jumped out before it fully was down. I had always hated flying, add some nerves to that, and I was ready to kill the pilot. I was ready to kill every pilot.

Introductions where made, I met the old officer in charge. When I saw Captain Angelodude99, I did not expect to see a penguin.

"They let a penguin be the commanding officer here?" I asked.

"Yeah they did. Do you have a problem with that?"

"No, Sir." I responded back.




As I took over command of Talus I found out a few things. You don't let Recruits and Privates anywhere near the core. The nearest TRA outpost is about 432,960 miles away, meaning you don't have any real contact on the outside world. And most importantly I learned that if the core of Talus fell into enemy hands, TRA's defenses would fall, and TRA would be crushed.
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Cyanova is not online. Cyanova
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23 Aug 2013 01:03 PM
Good story ^-^
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Angelodude99 is not online. Angelodude99
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23 Aug 2013 01:46 PM
Yeye!! I'm the Commanding Officer!! Woot.

~[American]~
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xSanctum is not online. xSanctum
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23 Aug 2013 01:46 PM
Addicted to ROBLOX?
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TheLittleGoomba is not online. TheLittleGoomba
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23 Aug 2013 01:47 PM
why would you dream about this terrible game?
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jellyjim98 is not online. jellyjim98
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23 Aug 2013 01:49 PM
{THIS IS 100 % FICTION. ALL CHARCTERS AND EVENTS CAME FROM A DREAM I HAD. ANY SIMILARITIES BETWEEN ANY REAL ROBLOXIANS AND ANY CHARACTERS IN THIS STORY IS A MERE COINICENDECE.}


{PART 4}

I quickly fell in to the routine at Talus. Every 4 weeks or so, We would get supplies. Food, ammo, and for some reason, the Council kept sending us fuel barrels. Usually during some point during the week, I took the soldiers out and we shot the barrels until they exploded. This help calm some nerves, and kept the skills somewhat honed. One time, we also received a bunch of medical supplies.

"Captain Cyanova, why are you giving us medical supplies?"

"Ask the council, Jelly. I don't ask about the deliveries, I just watch over them.", she replied.

Why is the Council sending us medical supplies, I thought.

As Cyanove was boarding the transport to get off this island, I stopped here.

"Cyanova, wait. None of my men knew anything about first aid."

"Then I guess I'll have to stick around for a day or two and train you guys in the basics."

"What about the transport?"

"Ma'am, the transport, will be down for a while. The drives are overheated", the pilot yelled from the cockpit.

"Looks like that takes care of that, I must say it is good to have some guests here, it gets kinda boring here."



As Cyanova showed my men the basics of first aid, my men became more of outcasts. Nobody wanted to spend time with us. The members of the transport guard didn't want to spend any time with my men. Even Cyanova didn't want to, but she had to teach us.



As the transport left, I knew we wouldn't get anymore visitors. I was really wrong on that one.
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Vakadian is not online. Vakadian
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23 Aug 2013 01:50 PM
who dreams about this game?
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jellyjim98 is not online. jellyjim98
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23 Aug 2013 01:54 PM
I can not control what I dream about.
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yougiblue is not online. yougiblue
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23 Aug 2013 02:04 PM
You are awesome jelly even i didnt read the story but part 4 was great your dreams is hard to control on it i dreamed a nightmare i was liek cant wakeup from it but i forced but mind and then it's over and started new day in my life it going to be my last dream and my last day heh but you are great.
LT yougiblue.
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jellyjim98 is not online. jellyjim98
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23 Aug 2013 08:00 PM
{THIS IS 100 % FICTION. ALL CHARCTERS AND EVENTS CAME FROM A DREAM I HAD. ANY SIMILARITIES BETWEEN ANY REAL ROBLOXIANS AND ANY CHARACTERS IN THIS STORY IS A MERE COINICENDECE.}


{PART 5}


*Waahh**Waahh**Waahh*

I woke up with a start. I didn't know why the alarm is going off. But it never has before.

Then it hit me, "Soldiers, get up, with have a raid!" I yelled.

*Waahh**Waahh**Waahh*

"Turn the alarm off.", someone said behind me.

"Take up defenses positions!" I yelled over the chaos.

"Where do you want us to stand?" a Recruit yelled.

At that moment, I realized it. We had never had an attack. Nobody knew what to do.

Not knowing the skill level of our adversaries, I quickly set up positions.

"Alright, nobody gets past, a few of you over by the tunnel. A few near the tower itself. Finally, a few of you with me on the road. Lets go go go!



After that day, I realized we aren't alone on this island. I set up regular patrols of the island. The men groaned and complained when ever they got patrol duty. But if they didn't, the had to do a 36 hour guard shift.



A few weeks later, all of the Council members decided to pay Talus a visit. They called it an inspection. I knew they wanted to see if I was weak. Luckily, I had gotten word a few days before and had been drilling the men almost nonstop. Sadly, during the Council's visit, we got another lightning raid. Apparently, they wanted to try to wipe out the command structure of TRA. As the alarms sounds, my soldiers moved to their positions, just like we had been practicing. I asked the Council to stay back, they ignored me.


After the final shots were fired, I heard a something I will never forget.

"MEDIC. I NEED A MEDIC.", it was the voice of General JamalMarley.

As quick as I could, I got over to him. "Calm down, Sir. I can heal you, if you calm down."

After I applied the first aid to the General, he thanked me. I knew that one less Council member hated me now.

As the Council was boarding there transport, General JamalMarley came and spoke to me.

"Jelly, you saved my life. I will not be able to shorten you sentence here, but I want you to have this. You are a good soldier."

As he walked up the boarding ramp, I looked at what he gave me. A golden Revolver.

"Thank you, Sir."

I knew he couldn't hear me, but I didn't care.
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Icee444 is not online. Icee444
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23 Aug 2013 08:04 PM
Awesome plot, jelly. This is truly original.
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ghostlyblood is not online. ghostlyblood
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23 Aug 2013 08:38 PM
Lemme be in da story?
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kingdino4 is not online. kingdino4
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23 Aug 2013 08:40 PM
Nice. Can i be guy who dies first but majestically?
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jellyjim98 is not online. jellyjim98
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23 Aug 2013 10:21 PM
{THIS IS 100 % FICTION. ALL CHARCTERS AND EVENTS CAME FROM A DREAM I HAD. ANY SIMILARITIES BETWEEN ANY REAL ROBLOXIANS AND ANY CHARACTERS IN THIS STORY IS A MERE COINICENDECE.}

{PART 6}

*Waahh**Waahh*Waahh*

Another raid? I thought.

"What are the sensor's showing?", I asked the Private monitoring the sensors.

"Sir, they are not showing a human presence."

"Are you saying the sensors are faulty?"

"No Sir, they aren't faulty, there is some thing not human out there."

"Alright, I will send a team out immediately to check it out."



"Scout Team, anything to report?"

"No Sir, everywhere we have checked so far is clear."

"Keep looking, there is something not human out there."

Many minutes went past, but it felt like hours. Time spent not knowing if we have ghosts on this island.

"Sir, I think out team might have found something."

"Well, what is it?"

"It is ... well... I don't think you would believe me if I told you, Sir."
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Codeman5555 is not online. Codeman5555
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23 Aug 2013 10:27 PM
Entertaining, keep writing.
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kingdino4 is not online. kingdino4
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23 Aug 2013 10:37 PM
Put me in please. c:
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