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In the blink of an eye
No copying this book any copy's will result in reporting possible banning. This book was created by petpet299 and kseeking. We hope you enjoy it. (Petpet299 made the title and did do the last 2 chapters and more chapters.)
Chapter 1. The beginning of a adventure. I never knew that life can change in just one blink of an eye…I thought it was all fake like it was a dream. Was it? I don't know if I would ever know. But that day was a adventure I would never forget…. I woke up from my sleep. In a world of with stuff that was breathtaking. "Where am i?" Said, Tanner. "You’re in a dream that you won’t ever forget!" Said, a kid right beside me. "I just want to go home please, I have something important to do." "Well can’t you just stay for 5 minutes? It’s worth it." Said the kid "Do I have a choice?" Said, Tanner. They talked but The kid seemed to be able to dodge all his questions. Tanner was feeling good but strange. the world was beautiful. Side to side there was bright red mushrooms, and violet flowers flowers. He loved it. A roaring lion flew by his head. "Ahh! What was that!" Said, Tanner. "Just some of the stuff we have in store for you!" The kid said in a happy voice. "Um ok?" Said Tanner in a suspicious voice. From up to down there was big animals, tiny animals. Animals you won’t even think of! There was flying elephants, friendly grey wolves wolves, big worms with wings. You would just be amazed at the scenery. Tanner wasn't sure if he could take the adventure that was coming to him.
Chapter 2 Will I be in here forever? Tanner was bored,curious and He was worried. "That kid was right there weird…Where did he go?" Tanner thought. He left the strange and peculiar castle he was in. And he saw the kid from last night he blinked and the kid disappeared. Tanner was starting to feel a little strange about this place it was kinda cool but scary stuff kept happening to him. "I need to find some sense in this place." Thought tanner He walked and walked through a long bridge connected to the castle. He was tired and hungry and hot he kept walking but the path seemed to never end. He thought, "what am I going to do here?!?" But then a women with a brown robe came with a horse she said, "Get on tanner." "What?!? I don’t even know you how do you know my name?." The women said "just get on if you’re hungry." "Um okay?" Tanner said in a curious voice. "Where are we going!?" "Too the best restaurant in town of course!" Said the women in the brown robe "When can I go home?" Tanner said in a worried voice. What do you mean by home? "This is your home!" Said the lady "No its not! This is just a dream that I’m stuck in, THIS IS ALL FAKE I HAVE A REAL HOME AND I NEED TO GET BACK!" Said tanner in a voice of anger and frustration. "Well come yourself down there boy and have fun!" Said the lady in the robe. "How can I have fun when I’m stuck in a dream and sleeping for I don’t know how long in real life! I JUST WANT TO GO HOME!"
Chapter 3 The best restraunt ever Tanner was blown away "wow I know I'm dreaming now. They never had a restraunt as big as this in real life." The restaurant was roughly half the size of a football field. “What food is in there?” Tanner thought. "should I go into there it might not be safe but his stomach forced him to. He went inside to find a crowded all you can eat restaurant. They had pancakes eggs and bacon, and flapjacks waffles cereal all of his favorites tanner knew he shouldn't but he couldn't resist. he grabbed a plate got 10 pancakes 5 waffles 1 bowl of cereal some orange juice and bacon. Tanner went to a table and started eating. He ate with lighting speed. He almost chocked on his cereal when he forgot to breathe. After the cereal he finished the juice then he shoved 5 pancakes at a time down his mouth and demolished all his waffles. Tanner decided to sit and see what happens. Chapter 4 Deep in the woods After lunch Tanner felt refreshed and ready for the day. But he still wanted to go home. Tanner was alone. “Well since everybody left, maybe I’ll have time to look around.” Said, Tanner. He walked around looking at the stuff “You can’t just leave me and your family alone here.” “Who's there!?” The women left. It seemed like she was talking to a grown man. "I need to get back to the castle before night." Thought tanner He turned back and there was the women on her horse. "You ready to go?" She said in a happy but peculiar voice. "Um sure?" Said Tanner really curious voice. They rode back to the castle. "Oh no! We’re going to have to camp overnight here." What why?!?! Said Tanner in a scared voice. "Don’t worry boy it’s all going to be okay!" Said the women "I hope it is." Said tanner The women told Tanner to stay, and she left to go buy a tent for the night. Tanner was worried and started to walk around. He went in the woods and he found a door on the floor. He opened it slowly. The somebody pushed him in. "Help me please help me!" Tanner said in a terrified voice. "Please I don’t want to die please let me go!" Said tanner "Be quiet kid and stay in here while I go buy something." "I will never ever stay!" Said tanner The guy climbed up a ladder and closed the door fast. "Please let me go!" Said tanner. The strange guy left him alone underground.
Chapter 5 Hidden powers tanner knew that he would live as long as the man didn't kill him there where little cracks in the door so he would have air but he didn't know what to do. "I will never make it out alive never see my family again." Said tanner crying. "Yes you will said a strong deep voice." " who are you tanner said looking around the room." No response then he heard it again "you can make it out of here let your emotions show you the way let your anger become power and you sorrow become courage." And with that the voice was gone. Tanner sat on the ground and closed his eyes and tried to calm down. when he was calm he opened his eyes and spoke "you do know what to do." Tanner got up and looked up at the door, then he started moving towards the door but he wasn't walking no, he was flying! He blasted through the door knocking it into a thousand bits. But he hit the door so hard than he flung straight into a gaint mushroom and hit the ground, when he got up he saw the woman in the brown robe on her horse. Chapter 6 Mystery revealing. Tanner was riding with the women. He decided to ask some questions. “Hey so what is this place called?” “This place, Ha your funny don’t you mean this world?” The women said in a joyful voice. “Well… This is a nice place I like how it’s all bright and color-“. Tanner sees a guy who looks like the guy who locked him in that cellar. “Hey you, stop the horse now!” He gets off and goes to the guy. “Who are you and why did you lock me in that cellar?!” Tanner said in an angry voice. Tanner takes the guys hoodie off and recognizes his face. “Wait aren’t you Bernie from school in real life?!?” “No leave me alone and don’t follow me again!” Bernie then puts on his hoodie and disappears. “But wait I need answers!” Tanner was surprised and scared that someone like Bernie will appear and lock him in a cellar. Hey boy get back on the horse we need to get to the castle! “Um ok”… Said Tanner in a strange voice. They rode to the castle. Tanner saw some strange like figures side to side. He swore he saw his dead grandfather there. But he wasn’t sure. They finally make it to the castle. The women helps Tanner find his room. “Whoa this is my room!?” “Yes I know it’s not that big but your gonna have to deal with it for now.” “Are you kidding me this room is bigger than my house in real life!” Tanner said in a happy voice. “What do you mean real life?” The women said in a curious voice. “Well this all isn’t real it’s just a dream” Everything started to swirl up and disappear into nothing. “What’s happening help me!” Ahh and with that everything went dark... Chapter 7 Where am I? Tanner has finally woken up. He does not know where he is. But it’s not real life neither his dream world. “Where am, I have to get out of here!” Tanner said in a worried voice. “Hello is anyone out there!?” He walked and walked but nothing it was just all blank. Until he saw someone. The kid from when he first came to the world! “Hey I remember you!” “Looks like you did it, I knew you wouldn’t last much without telling people about the real world.” He said it in a really strange voice. “But I just wanted to go home.” Said Tanner in a sad voice. “Well now you get to go home, But I promise you that you will miss this place.” “You haven’t even seen the stuff you that was important.” “What do you mean, It was just a silly world in a dream.” “How did you know it was a dream, Or was it all real just in the past.” “Are you serious, giant mushrooms, flying elephants?” “Well of course that wasn’t real, but there was much more to be seen.” And you have ruined it.” “Wait give me one more chance please! Said Tanner in a sad voice.” I am truly sorry but you can’t come back.” “Bye.” “Wait no please!” Said tanner in a scream. He went into a train that took him to a place where there was clouds and only clouds. Right when he entered he froze, and fell asleep. Chapter 8 Reality Tanner wakes up but this time he wakes up in reality. “What where am I?!” Said Tanner in a crazy voice. “Oh no I’m in reality!” “I have to go back!” Tanner closes his eyes tightly…and he opens them. He was still in the same place. “It’s time for school!” His mom said. “Wait I have to talk to Bernie!” “I’m ready for school!” “Wow new record usually it takes you hours to get dressed.” The bus finally comes. “I don’t want to eat breakfast today ill skip it!” “Um okay?” The mom said in a curious voice. So Tanner goes on the bus and is ready to confront Bernie. Tanner thinks about the other world. “I need to get back there he said there was something important I need to know it.” The bus stops. Bernie comes in and sits next to Tanner. “Hey tanner!” Said Bernie with a cheerful voice. “Don’t just hey me I can’t believe what you did to me!” “What are you talking about?” “I’m talking about you locking me in that cellar!” Everything gets serious. “You don’t even know what was coming, But u got lucky and escaped.” “Come back and you will die.” Said Bernie in a threatening voice. "I will not give up even if I have to fight you." Said tanner in a confident voice "you've Ben warned tanner." And with that he disapered into thin air "I have to make it back somehow I have to." Thought tanner but how. "Wait a second if he is going out of the world then he must know how to go in the world, his house!" Thought tanner "that's the key hmm but I can't just exit school I need a diversion." Thought tanner "I got it!" And then he said "hey everybody look its Matt Damon!" Everybody turned and looked and said "where where." While they were looking tanner ran away from the school to Bernie's house which was 2 blocks away from the school. After running for 3 minutes he got to Bernie's house. " what not thought tanner I can't just go in. I've ill climb in throught the back window Bernie's mom always left the windows open cause she was always saying "oh berniekins your to hot you need more fresh air." He'd always hate it when he went for sleepovers but now he was happy about it. He walked cautiously towards the back window Bernie's mom should be at work today but just in case she wasn't. When he finnaly got to the back window he jumped inside the rather big window. Okay now he was in Bernie's house just need to find the entrance he looked around, nothing seemed to look like a dream transporter "think tanner think where would you keep a dream transporter." HIS ROOM! He quickly rushed up the stairs and went to Bernie's room as he opened the door he walked forward and fell into a deep dark hole " AHHHHHHHHH HELP ME" tanner said in a scared voice. Then tanner crashed into the ground with such a force that piecies of the ground broke he got up not feeling any pain impossible he should of felt pain. "We'll just lucky I guess." Just then he saw a bright light an he could make out big mushrooms that where pink and red he was almost there but it was only 15 feet away he knew he could make it he took his first step "argh it hurts." He took his second step he knew he had to do it he took his 3rd step then his 4th step and then his 5th 6th 7th 8th 9th 10th just 5 more steps said tanner but he was on his knees know but he had to make it he took 1 step his elbow echoed so badly he ended up screaming just 4 more, he took one more step "argh my knee." Another step "ARGHHHH just 2 more." Another one " ahhhhhh my back is broken." Just one more one more and he took it the pain was unbelievable it felt like a tow truck was driving over him and was ripping his body apart then a great light flashed and tanner passed out from the pain his body felt. Chapter 9 Friends or famaliy Tanner woke up to I the dream world he once was in then he looked around to see the woman in the brown robe she said " I saw you fall from the sky screaming yu took a pretty hard fall you should rest "thank you for helping me uh." "Marrie is my name." "We'll thank you marrie." Then he looked around and saw the kid he kept seeing but it wasn't a boy it was a girl the girl had dark blue eyes with brownish red hair and her skin was brownish white "my name is angalina but you can call me Lina." Tanner looked around and then said "okay I'm tired of not knowing anything about this place no more stalling tell me." the girl and the woman exchanged looks and then looked at tanner "we'll if you insist." Said Lina "it all started 7 years ago when Bernie first got here we thought he would save our land from the darkness lying at the center of the planet, but we where wrong he wanted power and as everybody knows power corrupts." "We thought he was our savayor he had all the powers of the prophecy, so I trusted him, he fooled me." Lina looked like she was being torn apart "it's okay you don't have to tell me any more." Tanner said Chapter 10 The mystery beyond us “Can I go outside to walk in the woods for a little?” Said Tanner. “Sure you can but you have to go with Lina.” “Oh ok.” “Hey Tanner I’m ready and waiting at the door..” Tanner and Lina then left to walk. But Tanner saw someone in a hoodie. “Oh no Lina lets go this way.” “But why I like this way.” “Lina please just trust me.” “Okay.” Said Lina very curious. The guy in the shadow appeared to be everywhere that Tanner went. Tanner thought that had to be Bernie. So Tanner tried to hide from Bernie. Bernie saw Tanner but before Tanner can run, He froze Tanner and Lina and teleported Lina to the castle. “Where am I, Tanner is in trouble we need to help him!” Said lina scared. “What do you mean in trouble this place has been free from trouble for years.” Said marrie. “I think I saw him… The prophecy is coming true.” Bernie went to Tanner. “How did you get in here again?” “I used your portal.” Said Tanner with confidence. “Oh looks like your pretty brave now huh?” “Yes and I’m not scared of you or what you can do, and this place will be safe as long as I’m here.” But Bernie was just more filled with anger. “What if you’re not here.” “What do you mean?” Said Tanner a little scared. “I mean that you won’t be alive to save this world.” Bernie pushed Tanner and took his dagger out. Bernie lunges to stab Tanner. “No!” Lina came in and pushed Bernie. “Tanner run!” Tanner ran as fast as lightning. “What did you do you idiot!” “Wait I remember you your Lina..” Lina was curious and scared. “You fool next time you won’t be there to help Tanner.” “He will die and this world will be mine again!” Lina gasped and ran away. Bernie already disappeared. Lina ran and ran to the castle. She knew that Bernie was the darkness that came upon them in the past. Chapter 11 A good friend Tanner didn't look so good the color was draining from his face and he was breathing heavily "come on tanner hang in there." Said Lina with consurne in her voice. "He's been through worse." Said marrie "he went through the portal nobody's ever done that." Lina nodded she knew tanner must be the hero but how? Lina sat there and looked at tanner. "He looks cold I should start a fire." She got some wood from the forests and put them in a pile. "Now how to start it." Thought Lina, then she remembered the knife tanner had in this pocket. She came over and put her hand I his coat pocket and pulled out a knife. After that she went over to them firewood. "Okay now I need a rock." Lina looked around and found a not to big smooth rock, she took it and skimmed the knife over it several times untill it made sparkes she took it over to the firewood and the fire roared to life! Tanner started looking better. She looked at him an realized this is the first time she noticed how he looked. He had a nice brown hair with a good light tan skin he was only about 3 inches taller than Lina. He looked really relaxed as he slept by the fire, Lina realized she was tired to. She got onto the ground besides tanner, And fell right asleep.
The final battle. Part 1 Tanner and Lina were at the castle eating breakfast. Some pancakes with syrup and bacon on the side. The lights start to flicker. One light to another light. Till it all went off. “What’s happening?” Said Tanner in a scared voice. Lina disappeared and so has Mary. Tanner begins to breathe deeply. He runs outside and it looks like darkness has come upon them all. He decides to keep running. Tanner goes to the underground cellar he was locked in. He thought maybe Mary and Lina will be in there. He went there and it was open. He saw Mary and Lina down there but they couldn’t get up. “Tanner the darkness is going to destroy this world you need to get something to help us up!” Said Lina in a worried voice. Tanner ran to the castle but it was too late for the castle. The castle was filled with darkness and there were bats all around it. Tanner ran back to the cellar. “Guys the castle is filled with darkness what am I going to do!” Tanner was so scared they were all going to die. Lina and Mary decided to get different items and stack them up so Tanner can give them a hand. They put some books. It was just right that Tanner reached for Lina and carried her up. Then Lina and Tanner got Mary. They saw Bernie in his dark hood coming. They ran behind the tree and started to see where he was going. Bernie went inside the cellar. “Guys follow me we need to lock him in there, we need some time to stop him. They tip toed slowly to the cellar. CRASH! They closed it real hard. They ran more deep in the woods. Mary, Lina, and Tanner were terrified and did not know what they were going to do. “Guy’s I am not who you think I am.” Said Lina. Tanner was really curious but it seemed like Mary already knew something. “I’m actually-“ Lina couldn’t talk someone shot her with a blast and she was knocked out. She flew all the way inside the dark castle. Tanner and Mary had to save her. Part 2 The final battle part 2. Tanner could hear lina crying.Tanner wanted to know what she was about to say. Tanner and Mary had a plan to save Lina, but it was a crazy plan. “We need to get her back.” Said Tanner in a sounding brave. “Tanner u don't know what is coming.” Said Mary sounding sad. “What?” Tanner said while he turned around. Tanner turned back around but she was gone. “Mary where are you!?” Tanner said. “You will need to make a choice, soon you will know the truth.” The whisper said it in a mumbled voice. “Huh who are u ant what to u want me and my friends!?!?” Tanner started to focus again, and was ready to find Mary and Lina "FOOL I can't think of why u would tell him the truth!” Said a guy in the shadows. “I Had to tell him, he was ready!” Said Lina in a very scared voice. “The truth is u are all going to die by the hand of darkness!!!!!” Tanner was running to the castle. The castle wasn’t so bright anymore. It was filled with darkness and shadows. “Why is this place so dark???.” Tanner started to look around the castle, because he knew he couldn’t go through the front door. He walked and walked around until he saw something small. Tanner enters through a small opening in the side of the castle. But it led to a room in the castle. “What’s this room, wait Lina’s diary?” "U know u shouldn't read other people's thought. He put it back in the spot and saw a paper tilted out of the diary. “I think I’m ready to tell Tanner the truth.” Tanner head whe paper say?. “The truth about what?" Tanner thought really hard. Just then tanner hears the wall behind him break. When tanner looks through it he sees that Lina got throw into the wall “Tanner please run!” Said Lina as if she was dying. “No I I'm not leaving!” Said Tanner running to the guy in the shadows. He is suddenly frozen in mid-air. “I knew she would lead you here.” Said Bernie "I know It’s you, no need to hide!” Bernie comes out of the shadows and grabs Tanner by the neck. “U shall all face the same fate as Lina!.” Lina was hurt and she was trying to get up but it was useless." Bernie throws tanner into the wall to. Tanner is scared watching Bernie bringing shadows from the underworld. “Leave him alone!” Mary comes in and moves Lina and Tanner to a safe place. Mary starts to cause a strength of healing to the castle. The brightness hurt Bernie and the shadows. "Ugh your still around ill change that very soon!. Bernie pushes shadow power on to Mary "agh!!!!!" Says Mary sounding really hurt "MARY NOOOOO!!" Suddenly tanner feels stronger and healed He stands up and brings light with him. He was actully glowing. “Bernie you have hurt Lina Mary and this entire planet I won't let u hurt anyone or anything else!!!” Bernie wasn’t scared he was quite happy. “Well u can't kill me u do t have the guts” Bernie says this with a smile on his face. But Tanner knew killing him isn’t the solution. Tanner says goodbye to Mary and Lina. Mary and Lina knew what he was going to do. Bernie is burning in the sunlight as Tanner walks towards him. “Bernie I’m not killing you, I’m just going to save this world from you.” With that tanner pushes Bernie back with a light power blast Bernie is blasted into the wall. Tanner brings a portal on to the front door of the castle. “No you can’t do this!” Said Bernie. But Tanner wasn’t going to change his mind. "AHHHHHHH!" Tanner runs towards Bernie and grabs Bernie. “Your done here and I don’t want you coming back” Tanner holds him from the shirt and throws Bernie in the portal to the real world. Lina screams “Tanner wait!” Lina tells tanner that this world being the same as the other world. Tanner says "I will come back for u someday and ill never forget u." Tanner kisses Lina and jumps into the portal to the real world Somehow Tanner wakes up in his bed. He goes to the kitchen and his mom says “Oh son that Bernie causes lots of troubles huh?” Tanner knew what Lina meant. And he knew his adventure was not over.
THE END
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kseeking
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| 18 Nov 2013 05:59 PM |
| guys i made this book with him pet im ashamed of you lying to children D: |
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| 18 Nov 2013 08:36 PM |
| The title made me think of those weeping angels from doctor who. |
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petpet299
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| 20 Nov 2013 08:22 PM |
| Next time don't be stupid. I wrote you made it too. |
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TimeLeak
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| 20 Nov 2013 08:36 PM |
"tanner kisses" ODer.
~Hᴀᴛʀᴇᴅ ᴡᴀs ғʟᴏᴡɪɴ' ᴛʜʀᴏᴜɢʜ ᴍʏ ᴠᴇɪɴs, ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴠᴇʀɢᴇ ᴏғ ɢᴏɪɴɢ ɪɴsᴀɴᴇ~【★】 |
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petpet299
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| 17 Jan 2014 09:40 PM |
| Its a book idiot. Its romance. Im not a oder for making a GOOD book which is something you cant do. -_- |
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kseeking
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| 17 Jan 2014 10:12 PM |
Every good book has a little romance. I mean it's not like we broke the rules or anything. |
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TimeLeak
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| 20 Jan 2014 01:49 PM |
I can make a terrific book with no romance at all. It's called "horror" and "creativity". Not mainstream lovey dovey crap.
Oɴᴇ ᴏғ ᴛʜᴇsᴇ ᴅᴀʏs ʏᴏᴜ'ʟʟ ᴘᴜsʜ ᴍᴇ ᴀᴡᴀʏ, Tᴜʀɴ ᴀʀᴏᴜɴᴅ ɪᴛ'ʟʟ ʙᴇ ᴛᴏᴏ ʟᴀᴛᴇ~~ |
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| 20 Jan 2014 01:57 PM |
| romance is best as a subplot |
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zepher32
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| 20 Jan 2014 02:21 PM |
As I read this, I became angrier and angrier, the spelling and grammar errors hurt me so badly.
But you tried. So, gold star. |
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Fangous
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| 20 Jan 2014 04:32 PM |
| those are chapters? they look like pages |
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| 20 Jan 2014 05:57 PM |
inb4 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5GgflscOmW8
~WENDY'S: It's good mood food! |
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kseeking
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| 20 Jan 2014 07:09 PM |
| >.< don't blame me for the grammar mistakes, ask pet after all HE wrote more chapters. |
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Nyabingi
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NilPirate
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| 20 Jan 2014 07:17 PM |
Why the EXPLETIVE would you name anyone Tanner?
That's animal cruelty.
I'd rail further on this piece, but at least it's complete so you get some points. |
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| 23 Jan 2014 08:45 PM |
In the blink of an eye should be a banned book for cruelty romance and plot twists And to this book-I would throw this Garbage putrid and waste another penny for this? 0/5 |
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