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| 30 Dec 2013 01:01 PM |
(Written in the Stars/Ghost/Intro) Man, this ro-rap [S] is gettin' old But I've been told That once you succeed, You'll have your name written in the stars (Written in the Stars/Ghost/Verse 1) Yea, I'm that kid nobody cares about I scream but they don't hear me out They just talk about how I always pout like a kid But what they don't know is I am a kid This ain't no fib I don't need a damn bib I'm not a baby Also, I'm not like you I don't go picking on the smart ones Or the weak ones I'm smart but I'm not weak, But now I'm on a streak, And I'm going to make a name for myself No matter if it stays the same I will be heard They will be told They'll be scolded if needed But who gives a [F] anymore One last big collab and I guess I'm done (Written in the Stars/Ghost/Chorus) Yea, we're written in the stars A million miles away With our message plain and main, And while the seasons come and go We never change (Written in the Stars/GothicLord12/Verse 2) I lay awake at night wondering why staring at the sky eye's are hollow my soul is dry.Who is god did you ever wonder? the big man in the clouds who sends down the thunder makes us who we are or makes us fall asunder he's like batman were his boy wonder live while you can you aint gettin any younger tree's are fallin but who collects the lumber TIMBER looks like we have a runner.Make it big get a house and some nice cars write some bar's.Don't go on a journey to find yourself look up it's written in the stars. (Written in the Stars/Ghost/Chorus) Yea, we're written in the stars A million miles away With our message plain and main, And while the seasons come and go We never change (Written in the Stars/Black Shady/Verse 3) my name is black shady, if you look up you will see it in the stars! i didnt become a rap artist for the girls or the cool cars i came to earth from my home land mars thats why im always so insane when i drive my cars its not in the right lane' always crashing down when i come on stage children start frown and my stage is no longer a sell out, its a bail. i sit and make new lyrics but not even critics wanna hear it even the sones that go like this " lyrical miracle spiritual individual criminal subliminal In your swimmin' pool" they just laugh and call me a funny fool, they think i rap because i wanna be cool i cant drop out of rap cause i already dropped out of school all i need is something to wake me up hey Ghost if you dont mind i need some Vdka in my cup as my name is still high up in the dark sky in the stars, fk the stars my name is craved in the moon.. cause i fked up lots of goons! im a super nova!!! now who else name is written in the stars!! (Written in the Stars/Ghost/Chorus) Yea, we're written in the stars A million miles away Tryin' to become known But nobody here's us So we keep screamin' 'til they hear us out (Written in the Stars/Ghost/Verse 4) Yea, there's no denying That I'm applying skill and thought into these lyrics You people just don't see it That I want to be liked But all people do is try to start fights It's just not right But I've had my name written in the stars a few times All of you have You just gotta look closely, Concentrate, Then you'll see want you want to see You'll see your name written up in the dark sky (Written in the Stars/Ghost/Chorus) Yea, we're written in the stars A million miles away Tryin' to become known But nobody here's us So we keep screamin' 'til they hear us out (Written in the Stars/King Hurricane/Verse 5) It was my decision, should I keep living Should I just continue with this addiction, so bad I don't know my addition bad meets evil evil meets people that's people with problems evil people. I can't think straight got too much on my plate I could die right here why hesitate NO! don't do it You must be crazy, almost as crazy when battled shady. you'll lose the crown you'll lose the town say people that had you found WAIT! Look on the bright side. Where I'm going there is no night side. So let me die. NO! Your not leaving your going to continue succeeding and keep believing and you'll be achieving MAYBE! maybe I should stay I might miss the sweet night and day I might miss the place where I lay YES! wait no I'm gonna go. NO! don't go you'll miss the rivers that flow your winds that still blow FINE! maybe I will maybe i'll just wait until then to die I won't feel how it feels.
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| 30 Dec 2013 01:28 PM |
| Nice lines i like how you used the actual song chorus.Btw my stage name is reflex you should of used that instead of gothiclord12. |
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| 30 Dec 2013 02:02 PM |
| I love it. I like how you added the other song with this. Love the blend. |
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daelynjon
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| 30 Dec 2013 03:34 PM |
| Thanks for the compliments guys! But the chorus I had stuck in my head from a Tinie Tempah song so I just had to use it. I just remixed it a bit. |
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LilRac
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| 30 Dec 2013 07:03 PM |
Wow guys, I knew I made the right decision with you. Gothic, you have impressed me. Coming from what you were when you started, to what you are now, it's inspiring.
Well done guys. |
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| 30 Dec 2013 07:39 PM |
| I made 5 new songs i'll PM you the links racs. |
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PenBlade
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| 31 Dec 2013 11:09 AM |
I hate to be the one to rain on your parade, but I really didn't enjoy it, man. It just seemed like a lot of simple rhyme schemes. Overall, a rather poor song, in my opinion.
Just keep writing and you'll improve. |
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daelynjon
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| 01 Jan 2014 05:52 PM |
| I am the owner of Rere Records and staff of YMCMB jeez am i a ghost!!! D:< |
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| 01 Jan 2014 06:30 PM |
| this is terrible, all you stupid little record owners, i can school you in a second |
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| 01 Jan 2014 06:48 PM |
| Forza, all those record owners could school you. So could I if I really felt like it. |
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| 01 Jan 2014 07:09 PM |
WOW, YOU USED THE SAME INSULT I DID, YOU'RE SO CRAETIVE. SOMEONE GIVE THIS DOOSH BAG A MEDAL |
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| 01 Jan 2014 07:15 PM |
| Actually, it wasn't an "insult". It was a fact. Drake, Lil, Gothic, Me, Symp, That guy from Reloaded record or whatever, Dinodude, Biskit, could all DESTROY you Forza. Face it. You'd never stand a damn chance. |
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| 01 Jan 2014 07:25 PM |
| i'd destroy you guys like jews in the holocaust |
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daelynjon
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| 01 Jan 2014 08:06 PM |
| Forza Go Cry In A Pillow & Besides You Belong there instead of this game! |
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| 01 Jan 2014 08:24 PM |
| Wow Bro, You're So Cool Let's Talk Like This! |
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| 01 Jan 2014 08:48 PM |
I give it a 6/10
im notta rapper im just a rap battler |
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keyyon
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| 02 Jan 2014 07:50 AM |
| so u forgot about shady??/ xD |
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