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Re: CreepyPasta -Too scary for kids under 7-

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Zyliox is not online. Zyliox
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11 Jan 2014 03:18 PM
This is something I came up with.

Derrick was a 15 year old computer maniac. He had just gotten into Tumblr when his screen froze, and then this horrible, mutilated face popped up on the screen. Then text popped up saying "YOU'RE NEXT. DON'T THINK YOU CAN HIDE FROM US," then his screen went back to Tumblr. He got scared and looked online to see if anyone else had seen this happen. He found about 30 people with the same story. He asked them, and either a sibling or their parents answered with something like this
"They disappeared a few days after it happened." Naturally, Derrick was frightened. No one believed him. The next day he got on MySpace and it happened again, only this time, it started to materialize out of the screen and into his room. He screamed as it grabbed him and started to tear his flesh apart. It dragged his corpse back into the computer, and the..uh...fluid that came out of Derrick came with it. His mom came up, and she looked at the screen and saw Derrick's mutilated face with no pupils and bloodshot eyes on the screen. Then, a bolt of lightning struck the house causing the computer to shut down and simultaneously explode. His mom called the authorities and was promptly taken to a mental institute where she spent the rest of her life.

I had a nightmare after coming up with this story.
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Zyliox is not online. Zyliox
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11 Jan 2014 03:19 PM
bump
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Zyliox is not online. Zyliox
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11 Jan 2014 03:22 PM
Double bump!
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MarioDude01234 is not online. MarioDude01234
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11 Jan 2014 03:25 PM
Mm.Hmhm.Hmhmhahahahahha.
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Fangous is not online. Fangous
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11 Jan 2014 03:28 PM
not scary
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dralion is not online. dralion
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11 Jan 2014 03:30 PM
not scary/10
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Slime2345 is not online. Slime2345
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11 Jan 2014 03:46 PM
Rushed. Reminds me of my small story I was filming all by myself called Amber Woods.
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heatpokemon2 is not online. heatpokemon2
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11 Jan 2014 05:12 PM
nope
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SwordxGamer is not online. SwordxGamer
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11 Jan 2014 05:37 PM
this is fake, nobody uses myspace
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rose6666 is not online. rose6666
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11 Jan 2014 05:45 PM
what i read:

*guy logs onto myspace*

*he realises that no one has used myspace since the 1500's*

"GAAAGHGGH, THE NOSTALGIA IS KILLING ME!"

*guy dies from the nostalgia*
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NilPirate is not online. NilPirate
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11 Jan 2014 07:00 PM
no suspense/birds
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Edd1050105022 is not online. Edd1050105022
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11 Jan 2014 09:55 PM
myspace??
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marblemaster is not online. marblemaster
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12 Jan 2014 01:54 AM
not scary at all/10
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Zyliox is not online. Zyliox
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12 Jan 2014 08:33 AM
He was the only Myspace user left in existence. it doesn't have to be scary, either. Just shut up, I feel insulted.
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Slime2345 is not online. Slime2345
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12 Jan 2014 09:01 AM
>Too scary for kids under 7
>Too scary for kids
>Too scary

>"Doesn't have to be scary"

wat
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marblemaster is not online. marblemaster
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12 Jan 2014 09:03 AM
op can't take criticism
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robloxriot9000 is not online. robloxriot9000
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12 Jan 2014 09:12 AM
this is absolutely terrible.
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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12 Jan 2014 09:39 AM
I have to agree, this is... Subpar. It's also incredibly generic. No creativity at all.
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MarioDude01234 is not online. MarioDude01234
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12 Jan 2014 09:40 AM
>marblemaster

well maybe if it was constructive instead of just "this is terrible"
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marblemaster is not online. marblemaster
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12 Jan 2014 09:41 AM
something tells me even if it was constructive OP would still be crying
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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12 Jan 2014 09:43 AM
From OP's profile

I hate 1D, JB, and their fanbases. If you are a fan of either or both, BE WARNED. I am relentless.

I have no sympathy for him. If he's going to do something like that he should suck it up when people insult his work.
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Dogecoin2014 is not online. Dogecoin2014
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12 Jan 2014 10:40 AM
-999999999999999999999999999999999999999999/10
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zepher32 is not online. zepher32
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12 Jan 2014 12:01 PM
spoopy aaahh
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Zyliox is not online. Zyliox
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17 Jan 2014 04:22 PM
I realize my mistakes here. Just ignore the thread from now on.
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