Zyliox
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| 11 Jan 2014 03:18 PM |
This is something I came up with.
Derrick was a 15 year old computer maniac. He had just gotten into Tumblr when his screen froze, and then this horrible, mutilated face popped up on the screen. Then text popped up saying "YOU'RE NEXT. DON'T THINK YOU CAN HIDE FROM US," then his screen went back to Tumblr. He got scared and looked online to see if anyone else had seen this happen. He found about 30 people with the same story. He asked them, and either a sibling or their parents answered with something like this "They disappeared a few days after it happened." Naturally, Derrick was frightened. No one believed him. The next day he got on MySpace and it happened again, only this time, it started to materialize out of the screen and into his room. He screamed as it grabbed him and started to tear his flesh apart. It dragged his corpse back into the computer, and the..uh...fluid that came out of Derrick came with it. His mom came up, and she looked at the screen and saw Derrick's mutilated face with no pupils and bloodshot eyes on the screen. Then, a bolt of lightning struck the house causing the computer to shut down and simultaneously explode. His mom called the authorities and was promptly taken to a mental institute where she spent the rest of her life.
I had a nightmare after coming up with this story. |
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Zyliox
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Zyliox
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Fangous
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dralion
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Slime2345
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| 11 Jan 2014 03:46 PM |
| Rushed. Reminds me of my small story I was filming all by myself called Amber Woods. |
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| 11 Jan 2014 05:37 PM |
| this is fake, nobody uses myspace |
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rose6666
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| 11 Jan 2014 05:45 PM |
what i read:
*guy logs onto myspace*
*he realises that no one has used myspace since the 1500's*
"GAAAGHGGH, THE NOSTALGIA IS KILLING ME!"
*guy dies from the nostalgia* |
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NilPirate
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Zyliox
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| 12 Jan 2014 08:33 AM |
| He was the only Myspace user left in existence. it doesn't have to be scary, either. Just shut up, I feel insulted. |
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Slime2345
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| 12 Jan 2014 09:01 AM |
>Too scary for kids under 7 >Too scary for kids >Too scary
>"Doesn't have to be scary"
wat |
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| 12 Jan 2014 09:12 AM |
| this is absolutely terrible. |
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| 12 Jan 2014 09:39 AM |
| I have to agree, this is... Subpar. It's also incredibly generic. No creativity at all. |
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| 12 Jan 2014 09:40 AM |
>marblemaster
well maybe if it was constructive instead of just "this is terrible" |
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| 12 Jan 2014 09:41 AM |
| something tells me even if it was constructive OP would still be crying |
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| 12 Jan 2014 09:43 AM |
From OP's profile
I hate 1D, JB, and their fanbases. If you are a fan of either or both, BE WARNED. I am relentless.
I have no sympathy for him. If he's going to do something like that he should suck it up when people insult his work. |
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| 12 Jan 2014 10:40 AM |
| -999999999999999999999999999999999999999999/10 |
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zepher32
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Zyliox
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| 17 Jan 2014 04:22 PM |
| I realize my mistakes here. Just ignore the thread from now on. |
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