blazar
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| 07 Jan 2014 09:39 PM |
(This is my first completely original RP for years, I've put a lot of thought into this.)
Every family in America is given a budget until all of their children reach 18, this budget is admitted by the government based on the parent's height, weight, gene tree, consumption habits and previous jobs. After the family is given the cash in a airtight, heavily locked suitcase, the parents must not work for another penny. The government keeps track of the money in the budget to the very dollar. The children are required to attend school until they reach the age of 18, then they must go find a job immediately in the work force. On one exception, if the family uses up the budget and no longer has any cash of their own, the government will take one of the family's children. (The child is chosen at random)
Where do these children go? That is a mystery to the general public. In the year 2014, the American Government implemented this law, 4 years later the United States of America became a very hard-working nation. People learned to conserve and better use their money, and those who didn't were severely punished for it. People also immediately found a job somewhere in the workforce at the age of 18, hugely boosting the economy of America. The education also increased because of the dropout rate effectively becoming less than 10%.
You are one of the Sold Children. The government has picked you because your family did not save their money. You have been sent to America's School for Slaves, and you are now working as a boarding student there. Every day is a different task. Some tasks seem very unimportant, others seem too important for you to be in-charge of. You must preform these tasks without any problems, or else you are given a warning. After 3 warnings, you are taken and imprisoned until the month is up, upon then you will be executed in front of the entire 'School' by a firing squad.
You cannot let anybody else know you exist.
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Rules:
1. You have been just Sold, you have no knowledge of what is going on.
2. What I say, goes.
3. After 3 warnings, your character is really going to be killed unless somebody tries to help you. So you can escape. If the friend is caught both of you will be thrown into prison and executed.
5. Put the missing number in your 'other'
6. Romance and Violence are at your own digression, I will not punish you for this, but the moderators might.
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| 07 Jan 2014 09:58 PM |
| (You are awesome already. Marked. It's been awhile I've seen a "good" Dystopia-type RP) |
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PawzKat
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Jeonsa
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PawzKat
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| 07 Jan 2014 10:40 PM |
Name- Kayden Kaspersky Grimm.
Age- 16 Years of age.
Appearance-
Kayden stands at about 5'11, which, in his opinion he considers to be rather average for a guy his age. He weighs in at something around 150, his frequent activities keeping his build lean. Being tall, he is also lanky, and has a tendency to trip over his feet, or to accidentally knock something over with a backhand. However, he is a veteran runner, with lean, sinewy muscles. With skin colour that resembles something close to a creamy pale, with a hint of peach, he's certainly strange. Due to his fair skin, whenever Kayden is pressured to blush, his skin instantly heats up, becoming a splotchy, fiery red. Freckles can be spotted, falling over his nose and even lightly crossing into his cheeks.
His eyes are something he inherited from a fairy tail, a crystalline yellow, ringed with a deeper amber effect that gives his eyes something close to gold. A rounded appearance, his eyes hold, they are lashed by his long, thick lashes, which have been described as "lashes" a girl could kill for. Kayden's features could be described more as "rugged", or "sculpted", with prominent cheekbones and a chin.
His hair is a dark, frenzied mess. Though while it isn't curly, his hair wouldn't be described as straight either. It can be called wavy, because, as stated, it was a mix of the two. It's also rare to see Kayden comb it, as he prefers the mismatched strands and such. As for the accurate colour description, it's dark...almost black in colour with the occasional lighter streak of brown running through. His eyebrows match his hair colour, as in most cases."
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Closed off| Kayden isn't exactly...the easiest to approach. He's seen as angry, bitter, and doesn't really seem to enjoy the company of others. When approached, he might grunt in real one to a question, or say nothing at all. He can be seen as an outcast. `Other traits mentioned; Angry, bitter, irritable, loner.
Intelligent| In contrasts to what people say, Kayden is actually very smart. He tends to score high on both mental & physical tests pushed his way, and always make an attempt to finish them, no matter what. He also seems to have a good know-how of the surrounding world, and is an active nature enthusiast. `Other traits mentioned; Active, determined{stubborn}, vigilant, nature lover. Bio(Optional)- Optional.
Other- 4 |
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vamking12
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| 07 Jan 2014 10:53 PM |
Name: Kevin Farwell Age: 16 Appearance: He has short Jet black hair, Small blue eyes. Shorts arms. Is very short in height only 5'5. Wears a black hoodie and regular blue jeans. Has tinted red shoes. Personality: Quiet Serious Hardworking. Bio When he growing up he seem richer then the kids. His parents has overspent there money quickly giving. Them many great things. He was in born to these parents in march in Maine . He went to school and made a lot of friends. One during his high school. His parent started acting really weird. They started having less food unexplained. It was weird. his parents one day treated him really nicely for some reason. Now he woke up somewhere else why? Other:nice. Roleplay I looking 4 one of these, |
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blazar
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| 07 Jan 2014 11:34 PM |
(Accepted both of you, smooth vamking)
Name- Torrondo Elmao
Age- 15
Appearance- Dark brown hair and blue eyes are Torrondo's most catching qualities at first glance, his dress was pretty casual before he was Sold. His white skin is easily burned but never tans.
Personality- Torrondo was a procrastinator and slacker, often reprimanded for his poor grades in school. His laid back and easy-work shortcut attitude often lead to sloppy and incomplete work for his projects and assignments.
Bio(Optional)- His father died of a heart attack when Torrondo was 4, and his mother lost herself in gambling and drinking away her sorrow. Torrondo has never forgiven her for betraying him and ignoring his pleas to stop spending their budget.
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tcman2000
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| 08 Jan 2014 07:19 AM |
(Didn't know you RPed.) CS:
Name- Alex Cerran
Age-14
Appearance-He's around 6 ft. His hair and eyes are completely black, you can tell he's Asian when you look at him. He dressed casually until the sold.
Personality- He isn't hardworking but still gets work done. He is smarter then he looks, getting straight As. He isnt good at making friends and is usually solitary. Even when he was living with his family, he only played games on his computer.
Bio(Optional)-He had a loving family and the budget was still half full by the time he was 12, but he lost it all during a fire. He lost his parents and the budget during the fire.
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| 08 Jan 2014 10:40 AM |
CS ~
Name- Serene Bjork
Age- 14
Appearance- Serene is of medium height standing at 4'2, and weighs 76 pounds. She has long, black hair that reaches her torso, and silver eyes with a ring of yellow. Serene wears a black top that says "Muse" in German, dark denim shorts, and very floppy yellow flats.
Personality- Serene is nice, but is extremely serious due to her parents teaching her strictness before being taken away. Serene is of German origins, but can speak English fluently. She can understand and take jokes well as well, even if she is strict.
Bio(Optional)- Erm no need, her being German is her only bio thing XD
Other- 4?
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| 08 Jan 2014 06:14 PM |
Name- Gracie Moreno
Age- 14
Appearance- About 5'4", weighing just over 100 pounds. She has caramel hair which reaches her shoulder, and light blue eyes. She usually wears jeans and a T-shirt.
Personality- Gracie is a natural born leader, who can read other people's expressions well. Her main flaw is her pride, her competitiveness.
Bio(Optional)- Gracie was born in Canada (don't know if it's still called that in the dystopian world). That's pretty much it.
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Nieol
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| 08 Jan 2014 06:22 PM |
CS:
Name- Allie Justice Age- 16
Appearance- Allie's hair is a dirty blond, and goes down to her back. It is usually in a type of ponytail, as to keep it from going everywhere and in the way. Allie's eyes are a dark amber color, with a bit of yellow speckles in them, and are a bit almond shaped. Her skin color is rather tan-ish, not being pale at all. Her face is the opposite of a soft face, it is sharp with a strong jaw. She's rather tall, being 5'11" tall, and weighing about 205 pounds, being rather athletic, she has gained a lot of muscle.
Personality- She's a silent person who doesn't say much at all, usually just saying a few words as sentences, and goes straight to the point of what she says, not bothering with all the unnecessary details. She's also a rather honest person, and wouldn't tell a complete lie until it was completely necessary. Allie's also rather calm, as she wouldn't yell at anyone unless it was for a good reason, like injustice. Allie prefers warm weather, as she enjoys the heat, and sometimes takes random walks around the place.
Bio(Optional)- heck yea
Other- 4
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| 08 Jan 2014 06:24 PM |
oh my lord this is amazing
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Name- Lacie Treadwei
Age- 8
Appearance- comps.fotosearch.com/comp/CSP/CSP993/little-girl-holding_~k14313044.jpg
Personality- shy, fearful, obedient, quiet, though secretly an optimistic girl
Bio(Optional)- ....
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| 08 Jan 2014 06:24 PM |
blarg forgot number
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| 08 Jan 2014 07:26 PM |
Name-Jerome Orthron Age:17 Appearence-Tall,Muscular has black hair and red eyes Personality:TBR Bio:NOPE Other:4 |
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Dragonelz
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blazar
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| 08 Jan 2014 10:29 PM |
(Tcman haha, I don't really anymore but a while ago I did, you're accepted, Sympathetical accepted, alannalypinky not accepted: read the rules. TheDeadDemon accepted, StarFire289 not accepted: wrong number, Earthboundv4, I want a bit more description, but besides that you are accepted.)
(Wow, a lot of "Marked"s. Alright let's get started while we wait for everybody else to submit their applications)
**Transportation**
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(All Sold Children experience this disorientation.)
You slowly wake up to find yourself on a train traveling at incredible speeds. Wearing different clothes than before, shorts and pants much like hospital scrubs, with a number tattooed (I will pick your tattoo when you reply)on your left ankle. In a compartment with a neatly made bed, a dresser filled with more of those uniforms that are your size, and a single sliding door. There is a window showing scenery flying by. Trying to recall how you ended up there, you stumble around the room.
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wifi1324
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Jeonsa
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| 08 Jan 2014 10:37 PM |
CS:
Name- Misu Kimak (Miss uh Kimm Ak)
Age- She is about the age of 14
Appearance- Misu is a small, and very tidy girl. She has a small, but powerful and lean build with fair tan looking skin. She had long flowing brown hair with a few black highlights lined into her hair. Her eyes are a hazel, a more green hazel though. She had a sharp, and fair shaped nose for her face as well. She wore a hoodie, it white and a skirt made of the same materials as jeans. Her shoes were flats, black flats. Her hair has a small black bow in it. Well at least that is her causal wear.
Personality- Misu is a caring, thoughtful person. She likes to think things through and look at things from different angles. Some call her weird for she tends to act how that one person who view it that way act sometimes to get a better view. She is a fierce person when it comes to family and friends and she is loyal to the close people in her life. She try's to remain good and is sometimes viewed as to quite in class, or to hard working, but what do they know? The downfall of Misu could be that her kindness could be her downfall because she would risk it her life sometimes, not all times will she do that.
Bio(Optional)- Misu was born into a well faring family but they began to go downward. To maintain their regular life they moved, but it made it worse, until finally they grew broke. Misu, out of two sisters, both younger, was taken.
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blazar
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| 08 Jan 2014 10:38 PM |
| (Jeonsa accepted, you can start RPing.) |
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PawzKat
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| 08 Jan 2014 10:39 PM |
Groggy...haze...mist.
Ugh, my head hurts. Getting up slowly, I wince, my head flaring up in pain as the smog that surrounds my mind slowly dissipates. Slowly. "Where am I?" I managed harshly, getting my jaw muscles to move after a few, short seconds
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wifi1324
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| 08 Jan 2014 10:42 PM |
CS
Name: Devin Lee Age: 20 Appearance: Tall, lean, has shaggy, brown hair, is a little pale, and has an eye patch over his dead, left eye. Personality: Devin has Multiple Personality Disorders. He keeps this a secret. He is sometimes girly, sensitive, or evil and dark. Most of the time he courageous, fearful, nice, but a little shy. When you get to know him, he's fun and cool. Bio: When he was small, his parents would always beat him and be very mean. He got his scared eye when they forced a needle into his eye socket. His parents wasted the family budget on drugs and champagne. They wanted Devin to be a slave. Devin ran away from them when he was only 14. He has had a very dark life, so he trys to make everyone's life better. Other- Devin is sometimes called "Dead-eyed Devin." It is OK if you call him this. Oh, and 4.
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vamking12
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| 08 Jan 2014 10:43 PM |
Kevin
Ah! What am wearing? Where am I ? So many question. But no answer a looked around saw no one else. Kevin noticed he was on a train He must be dreaming. Is he hungover... No! Th can't be it. |
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