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Re: should i share some lyrics i've written

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Crash6351 is not online. Crash6351
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07 Jan 2014 09:22 PM
y/n
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Jenti is not online. Jenti
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07 Jan 2014 09:23 PM
yes


"Get a little closer let it fold/Cut open my sternum and pull/My little ribs around you."
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DrAwsomeMonkey is not online. DrAwsomeMonkey
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07 Jan 2014 09:24 PM
I know a paticular set of lyrics you wrote you should share, but you hate them
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07 Jan 2014 09:25 PM
99c
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07 Jan 2014 09:25 PM
yep
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07 Jan 2014 09:26 PM
@Dr

i'm laughing because i know exactly what you're talking about.
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Crash6351 is not online. Crash6351
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07 Jan 2014 09:28 PM
alright here are the lyrics to a three part song i've been slowly working on for a while called "Fallen too Fast"



I. The Boundary Between Fiction and Reality

how would you feel if i told you
that life would reach down from beyond?
a vision from my dreams awakened
and brought to this strange reality
but why would i see these sights?
why am i the chosen one of this world?
i don't have the courage to face this
but i cannot hide what i have seen

an elevated sense of truth
hidden inside my sacred world

the anecdote in my dreams
the sirens that blare to signal the lines
a cautious boundary between
fiction and reality
a tale through time that looked like the past
brought into my world
a sight that can't be unseen
and no one would understand my reasons

a feeling deep inside me
a sense of dishonesty in everyone



II. A Strange Concept

so much left to say
the mosiac looks at me strangely
a beautiful life
a single night turned into all of this

life is now just an illusion
a strange concept unto my eyes
united by a thread
these feelings are killing me



III. The Light Has Shown Itself

a light that has blinded me
shines upon my body and lures me above
from shock and illusion i have fallen too fast
a tale that no one would believe has tricked me into my fate
i have desire and love for my dreams
my escape from reality is now my biggest downfall
a cry for help and a passion to share my tales
what i thought was reality has blinded me

every day would feel like forever
and now i am free of the pain
a metaphor calling me to eternity
from fear i have fallen too fast
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Jenti is not online. Jenti
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07 Jan 2014 09:31 PM
11/10 really really like it


"Get a little closer let it fold/Cut open my sternum and pull/My little ribs around you."
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Crash6351 is not online. Crash6351
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07 Jan 2014 09:39 PM
so here's a huge in the presence of enemies rip off i wrote basically with that in mind (and ntk, the difference between you and me is that i acknowledge that this is a rip off of another song, and that i wouldn't use these lyrics in an actual song of mine)

the unofficial title is "a greater dream"


I. Prologue
II. An Eternal Fortue
III. My Own Prophet
IV. The Quest of My Inner Demons
V. The Fallout
VI. As I Watch Those Under
VII. Epilogue



I. Prologue

(Instrumental)



II. An Eternal Fortune

"Behold
Behold this power you see
What passion drives you and your wicked ways?
Somewhere
Somewhere this spirit thrives
Would you look inside yourself to find all the answers?"

"Would you risk your life for love?
Or eternity in paradise?
What's the reason to your envy?
The status of your dreams?"

Searching for the answer
Must i fight my inner demons?
Must I risk my life
For this eternal fortune?
Where is my past?
Where is my god?
Straining for the truth
Is all of this worth it?
Will I find paradise?

What is life without a cause?
A driving goal or love?
How must I seize the day?
How can I begin?



III. My Own Prophet

My mind determines my path
A golden ticket hidden inside
This war raging on and on
I must find my peace
A plead for humanity
Gathers inside these clouds
My answer judges my fortune

A fatal risk
For enjoyment in life
I am my own god
I am my own prophet

This journey in myself
Sends me into peril
A conversation with myself
A haunted spectrum realized
This shadow follows me
To close this premature journey
But now I've found the answer

A fatal risk
For enjoyment in life
I am my own god
I am my own prophet
Living life
To the fullest extent
To become my own
I am my own prophet

I pray unto thee
My new found god
You now guide me through
But I feel strange inside
A hollow eating me
I can't discover it
But please help me
I'm drowning deep
Never to return



IV. The Quest of My Inner Demons

I am not my own
What is love? What is life?
What do my desires feel like?
Caught in this helpless void
What is war? What is peace?
Is this paradise?

"Judgement has failed you my child
You are one of us now
What kind of fool would dare to be?
You have fallen so low
I'm amused by your path
Your soul is forever mine"

What evil has tried me?
My master has blinded me
I must form a new plan
To overthrow my master

A greater dream awaits me
I have tried, I have failed
I just got back up again
Searching for that dream
Caught in lies, caught in wrath
I cannot see myself

"I have you forced in my grasp
You cannot escape me
You'd die if you tried
It isn't so bad in here
No more worries, no pain
Escaping reality"

What good is it to trade
One misery for another?
I'm cursed to this torture
Now is my time to break free

Serfdom never worked for me
I've always wanted salvation
Eternal freedom in paradise
Searching for this fortune
A hidden key is needed
My path is almost over
This obstacle obstructing me
My master's time has come

I'll conquer you
Your time is up my master
Won't you taste defeat?
And free all of your slaves?
The fallen angel will fall again
Dreams will be realized
I've found the answer in myself
I'm moving on in this dream



V. The Fallout

(Instrumental)



VI. As I Watch Those Under

I have conquered you...
I have found paradise
A feeling of love and life
This feeling inside of me
Shows weakness and strength
I'm feeling as my own again

Free of life
I've found my dream
I found the answer
A promise of paradise
Now realized

I watch those under me
Are they looking for paradise?
All of the dreams I have found?



VII. Epilogue

(Instrumental)
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Johnny17095 is not online. Johnny17095
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07 Jan 2014 10:45 PM
This is real good.
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Crash6351 is not online. Crash6351
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09 Jan 2014 06:10 PM
thanks you guys


anything else anyone wants to say
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