Crash6351
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Jenti
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| 07 Jan 2014 09:23 PM |
yes
"Get a little closer let it fold/Cut open my sternum and pull/My little ribs around you." |
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| 07 Jan 2014 09:24 PM |
| I know a paticular set of lyrics you wrote you should share, but you hate them |
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Jared343
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| 07 Jan 2014 09:26 PM |
@Dr
i'm laughing because i know exactly what you're talking about. |
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Crash6351
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| 07 Jan 2014 09:28 PM |
alright here are the lyrics to a three part song i've been slowly working on for a while called "Fallen too Fast"
I. The Boundary Between Fiction and Reality
how would you feel if i told you that life would reach down from beyond? a vision from my dreams awakened and brought to this strange reality but why would i see these sights? why am i the chosen one of this world? i don't have the courage to face this but i cannot hide what i have seen
an elevated sense of truth hidden inside my sacred world
the anecdote in my dreams the sirens that blare to signal the lines a cautious boundary between fiction and reality a tale through time that looked like the past brought into my world a sight that can't be unseen and no one would understand my reasons
a feeling deep inside me a sense of dishonesty in everyone
II. A Strange Concept
so much left to say the mosiac looks at me strangely a beautiful life a single night turned into all of this
life is now just an illusion a strange concept unto my eyes united by a thread these feelings are killing me
III. The Light Has Shown Itself
a light that has blinded me shines upon my body and lures me above from shock and illusion i have fallen too fast a tale that no one would believe has tricked me into my fate i have desire and love for my dreams my escape from reality is now my biggest downfall a cry for help and a passion to share my tales what i thought was reality has blinded me
every day would feel like forever and now i am free of the pain a metaphor calling me to eternity from fear i have fallen too fast |
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Jenti
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| 07 Jan 2014 09:31 PM |
11/10 really really like it
"Get a little closer let it fold/Cut open my sternum and pull/My little ribs around you." |
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Crash6351
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| 07 Jan 2014 09:39 PM |
so here's a huge in the presence of enemies rip off i wrote basically with that in mind (and ntk, the difference between you and me is that i acknowledge that this is a rip off of another song, and that i wouldn't use these lyrics in an actual song of mine)
the unofficial title is "a greater dream"
I. Prologue II. An Eternal Fortue III. My Own Prophet IV. The Quest of My Inner Demons V. The Fallout VI. As I Watch Those Under VII. Epilogue
I. Prologue
(Instrumental)
II. An Eternal Fortune
"Behold Behold this power you see What passion drives you and your wicked ways? Somewhere Somewhere this spirit thrives Would you look inside yourself to find all the answers?"
"Would you risk your life for love? Or eternity in paradise? What's the reason to your envy? The status of your dreams?"
Searching for the answer Must i fight my inner demons? Must I risk my life For this eternal fortune? Where is my past? Where is my god? Straining for the truth Is all of this worth it? Will I find paradise?
What is life without a cause? A driving goal or love? How must I seize the day? How can I begin?
III. My Own Prophet
My mind determines my path A golden ticket hidden inside This war raging on and on I must find my peace A plead for humanity Gathers inside these clouds My answer judges my fortune
A fatal risk For enjoyment in life I am my own god I am my own prophet
This journey in myself Sends me into peril A conversation with myself A haunted spectrum realized This shadow follows me To close this premature journey But now I've found the answer
A fatal risk For enjoyment in life I am my own god I am my own prophet Living life To the fullest extent To become my own I am my own prophet
I pray unto thee My new found god You now guide me through But I feel strange inside A hollow eating me I can't discover it But please help me I'm drowning deep Never to return
IV. The Quest of My Inner Demons
I am not my own What is love? What is life? What do my desires feel like? Caught in this helpless void What is war? What is peace? Is this paradise?
"Judgement has failed you my child You are one of us now What kind of fool would dare to be? You have fallen so low I'm amused by your path Your soul is forever mine"
What evil has tried me? My master has blinded me I must form a new plan To overthrow my master
A greater dream awaits me I have tried, I have failed I just got back up again Searching for that dream Caught in lies, caught in wrath I cannot see myself
"I have you forced in my grasp You cannot escape me You'd die if you tried It isn't so bad in here No more worries, no pain Escaping reality"
What good is it to trade One misery for another? I'm cursed to this torture Now is my time to break free
Serfdom never worked for me I've always wanted salvation Eternal freedom in paradise Searching for this fortune A hidden key is needed My path is almost over This obstacle obstructing me My master's time has come
I'll conquer you Your time is up my master Won't you taste defeat? And free all of your slaves? The fallen angel will fall again Dreams will be realized I've found the answer in myself I'm moving on in this dream
V. The Fallout
(Instrumental)
VI. As I Watch Those Under
I have conquered you... I have found paradise A feeling of love and life This feeling inside of me Shows weakness and strength I'm feeling as my own again
Free of life I've found my dream I found the answer A promise of paradise Now realized
I watch those under me Are they looking for paradise? All of the dreams I have found?
VII. Epilogue
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Crash6351
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| 09 Jan 2014 06:10 PM |
thanks you guys
anything else anyone wants to say |
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