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| 07 Jan 2014 09:00 AM |
[INTRO]-Bullying is a problem that million's of kids world wide are effected by including myself.I know how it feels i share your pain.This song goes out to all those who are bullied or took there own lifes due to it.
Yeah theres always that one kid who lays awake at night crying and stuggling wondering why life is a fight he feels invisible out of sight why's this happening it just aint right if you're trapped in the dark follow me to the light carry on pass the candle let's make this world bright!
Don't laugh at me, don't call me names Don't get your pleasure from my pain In God's eyes we're all the same Someday we'll all have perfect wings Don't laugh at me...
Yeah you have to open your eye's realize this is a problem you can't even walk outside without being judged grow your wings let them blossom live life watch the leaves fall in autumn one day those demons will hit rock bottom believe in yourself may the past be forgotten!
Don't laugh at me, don't call me names Don't get your pleasure from my pain In God's eyes we're all the same Someday we'll all have perfect wings Don't laugh at me.
Yeah i hate them bullies like a dog hates mange they don't know who there messing with there shooting in the wrong range people like us need to stick together forget the weather we need to band together take my hand not like it's out of range come on stand up it's time for a change!
Don't laugh at me, don't call me names Don't get your pleasure from my pain In God's eyes we're all the same Someday we'll all have perfect wings Don't laugh at me.....
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| 07 Jan 2014 09:09 AM |
| Very well done, but i desire the verses to be longer! xD |
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| 07 Jan 2014 09:14 AM |
| Yeah i just wanted to put this together i felt like i really need to get the message out there. |
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Jenti
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| 07 Jan 2014 04:34 PM |
>"Bullying is a problem that million's of kids world wide are effected by including myself.I know how it feels i share your pain.This song goes out to all those who are bullied or took there own lifes due to it."
lets not forget that time you told me that i should die :^)
"Get a little closer let it fold/Cut open my sternum and pull/My little ribs around you." |
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| 08 Jan 2014 01:59 AM |
I'm just surfing the forums and I find this. Nice job. |
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| 08 Jan 2014 02:01 AM |
I couldn't really expect something horrible out of you. And this proves it even more. I also like what this rap talks about, such an important matter.
10/10 |
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| 08 Jan 2014 08:19 AM |
Well, I will give this a 8.9/10 Verses should be longer [2]
~Gimme Cookies~ |
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| 08 Jan 2014 08:54 AM |
http://www. azlyrics. com/lyrics/markwills/ dontlaughatme.html
your chorus is so unique |
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| 08 Jan 2014 09:00 AM |
| ^ omg I saw the lyrics.... Seriously why |
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| 08 Jan 2014 12:38 PM |
| Remix rap same chorus alot of song writers on roblox are doing it if you did not notice. |
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| 09 Jan 2014 12:58 AM |
| Saw the title and knew what you were going to sample for the chorus already. |
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| 09 Jan 2014 11:49 PM |
| Dude i like it.. its very lyrical |
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| 10 Jan 2014 12:05 AM |
Pls space out those lyrics omg
And it just sounds like a generic anti bullying song
Which there are thousands of |
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StellaOwl
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| 10 Jan 2014 05:57 PM |
Idk I don't love the lyrics
The message is good but that doesn't change the fact that I don't really like the lyrics |
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| 10 Jan 2014 06:46 PM |
"Bullying is a problem that million's of kids world wide are effected by including myself.I know how it feels i share your pain.This song goes out to all those who are bullied or took there own lifes due to it."
pfffft
i died when i read this part
fun fact of the day: "off i go from june to may..." |
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| 10 Jan 2014 06:49 PM |
a solid 2/10
maybe like a 1.5 maybe just maybe |
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