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| 06 Jan 2014 05:56 PM |
Good story. Now if I can somhow get my own novel on here...I still have no clue whats been blocking my novel from here.
Just post the story three sentences at a time until you get a blocked message. Then just figure out what's being blocked and get rid of it. Then you can post the entire story! |
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| 06 Jan 2014 05:56 PM |
And with a large force of lightning and the loud boom of thunder, a blue vortex spontaneously erupted from the sky. Out of it fell a young, blonde-headed fellow. He brought out his chainsaw, beautifully equipped to serve his needs, and started it up.
"Groovy," he said, and started to walk towards a place.
A bar. |
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| 06 Jan 2014 05:56 PM |
Mal, there is a bunch of words that are censored that shouldn't even be censored in the first place.
Great story so far Mario, I still think Mage should be the evil mailman that has a bomb in his bag and ends up killing everyone. |
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| 06 Jan 2014 06:01 PM |
Great story so far Mario, I still think Mage should be the evil mailman that has a bomb in his bag and ends up killing everyone.
That's not historically accurate! Change it to an evil courier with a vial of poison in my satchel. |
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| 06 Jan 2014 06:03 PM |
Hey, look!
Swift isn't the main character!
HUZZAH!
'Got 99 souls and a witch ain't one' |
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| 06 Jan 2014 06:03 PM |
Mage do you like your portrayal so far?
Aye. |
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| 06 Jan 2014 06:04 PM |
i like mine, i rejected swift several times in several stories.
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| 06 Jan 2014 06:06 PM |
im glad i rejected him
im my own woMAN
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| 06 Jan 2014 06:06 PM |
| I'm pretty sure whatnot is one word |
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| 06 Jan 2014 06:06 PM |
....Capri. Are you trying to say something.
His pickup lines worked once.
'Got 99 souls and a witch ain't one' |
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| 06 Jan 2014 06:08 PM |
When he walked into the bar, the time traveller -- Jake, was his name -- he questioned what was going on.
"Where in the hell?" he mumbled to himself briefly. Then he noted a group of people leaving the bar from another entrance, droning on about a... banannachair? He nodded his head in doubt and took a seat at the bar where he set down his chainsaw.
"Name's Jake," he said to the bar tender. |
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| 06 Jan 2014 06:09 PM |
what
when have they ever worked
they work on younger children because they are convinced hes going to buy them candy |
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| 06 Jan 2014 06:09 PM |
| Leslie what are you doing with that chainsaw ther |
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| 06 Jan 2014 06:14 PM |
"Both. One for my right and one for the left." The bar tender confusedly pour two glasses worth on either side of the man. The bar tender also looked confusedly at the strange contraption the man had strapped to his arm when he walked in. Some kind of mechanism made of the finest metal he had ever seen.
"Yeah, it's called a chainsaw, buddy," as Jake drank from each glass after the other. "Line em up again and I'll knock em down again." |
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| 06 Jan 2014 06:20 PM |
(Has this become like a roleplay or something? I'm confused...)
'Got 99 souls and a witch ain't one' |
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| 06 Jan 2014 06:21 PM |
oh my god this is really amazing ;-;
*claps* bravo bravo |
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