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| 04 Jan 2014 08:46 PM |
Jesse stared out of the dirty RV window, slammed a hand on the steering wheel -- and began to grimace. He didn't need this. Not now.
"What's wrong?" asked Diamondback, his lover. Jesse turned to her and sighed.
"Apparently one of the damn tires popped, and while we were asleep today it went flat." Diamondback shared his look of disappointment. "So now what?" she asked. He shrugged. "Walk, I guess. Get Severen up." Diamondback nodded and went to the back of the RV.
"Honey, get up. RV's trashed." Severen grunted.
"Really? I was just getting used to it," he complained. She gave him a pat on the back as he walked past her towards Jesse. "Hey, Jesse, what's the deal?" "Popped tire," he said and gave a what-can-you-do gesture. "So let me guess, we're walkin'?" he asked.
Jesse nodded and reached over to the passenger seat to grab his bag. "Get your stuff," he mumbled as he put the strap over his shoulder. Diamondback got her purse and Severen got his saddlebag. Then they gathered up to the RV door. Jesse smiled, "It's only six o'clock so we at least have time on our side," and then he opened the door.
Diamondback went first, breathing in the night air with a certain crazy joy in her eyes. Severen went second -- hyped up and ready to go. Jesse, last, took a moment to take it all in. It was a nice night. But weren't they all?
"Severen, get a rag," he ordered. Severen opened up his saddlebag and pulled out an old torn up rag. "We'll have to get some more later, boss. But here." He handed him the rag. Jesse took it and put it in the gas valve of the RV. Then he took out a match from his pocket. He lit it and set it to the rag. "Come on," he said, as the flames started to spark down the course of the rag.
The three of them were at least twenty yards from the RV when it finally blew up. Shards of metal and chunks of melted plastic landed all around them. Fires bloomed on all sides.
Yes, tonight was a nice night, Jesse thought to himself as they walked. ---
To Be Continued |
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| 04 Jan 2014 08:56 PM |
| Is this a Breaking Bad fanfic? |
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:04 PM |
| Because when I pop a tire my first instinct is the blow the car up. That seems logical. |
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:14 PM |
If you were in a stolen vehicle you had to leave behind, wouldn't you get rid of it so they don't track you? Exactly.
Wait for the rest and all will be explained. |
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:20 PM |
If you were in a stolen vehicle you had to leave behind, wouldn't you get rid of it so they don't track you? Exactly.
Wha? No? That seems like the worst possible thing you could do. An explosion would attract a ton of attetion and I can only assume there would still be a gold mine of forensic evidence.
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:23 PM |
| What if they're out in the middle of the desert? |
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:24 PM |
What if they're out in the middle of the desert?
What in the world are they doing in the middle of the desert? |
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:25 PM |
@mage
investigating the sand. |
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:25 PM |
| i should continue from this morning too |
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:26 PM |
| i dont have anything to continue from this morning. |
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:28 PM |
"If you were in a stolen vehicle you had to leave behind, wouldn't you get rid of it so they don't track you? Exactly."
oh my god?? ??
you do not make something that looks like a god damn distress fire from someone that needs to be saved or something
i thought they were just hillbillies who didnt know how to repair a car |
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:29 PM |
Alright I'll say it
This is a fan prequel to Near Dark. These are vampires. They travel across the Southern States. They were hiding out in the desert so no one would find them for the day. They were going to drive back into the city at night to get food. The tires were out so instead they'll have to find new transport.
Kk? |
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:30 PM |
| And for those of you getting mad that they destroyed the RV - they do that stuff in the movie. I'm only staying in line. |
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:31 PM |
| idk what near dark is but if it's idiots who smoke signals to "get away without being known" then its the stupidest vampires ive ever heard of |
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:31 PM |
dont you mean that harry styles fanfiction "dark"
that book was gooodod |
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:32 PM |
| http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FiYSirEHS5E |
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:34 PM |
NOPEN OPE THAT FREAKS ME OUT
LAST TIME IM EVER LOOKING AT A LINK FROM YOU |
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:37 PM |
youre scared easily
whatever
bad fanfiction to go with what looks to be a bad movie |
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:39 PM |
@capri
This one isn't scary.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DviGOGPttFE
And it has the catchiest song ever |
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| 04 Jan 2014 09:44 PM |
that actually looked ok
he got it in abunch of times |
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