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| 30 Dec 2013 08:22 PM |
The swamp was crowded with uncontrolled flora and murky waters wherever you looked. It was hard to traverse this land, but for a seasoned Vaktovian, it was quite literally a walk in the park. A squad of five navigated through the slimy weeds and vegetation spread about in an arrow-like formation, with the highest ranking being Sergeant leading the small brigade. To make the situation even worse, they were in the midst of a horrid rainstorm that constantly terrorized the swamp’s inhabitants and visitors. The rain rapped upon their exosuits, but the units paid no mind to the seemingly never-ending tapping on their outer shell; they remained ever vigilant and aware of their surroundings. Among the platoon, however, was a Level 1 Vaccine. He seemed to struggle and linger behind as they rustled through the swamp. He felt himself falling under the pressure and anxiety of being the perfect and relentless drones they were trained to be. He neared the Corporal adjacent from him, quietly whispering with a heavily vocoded and distorted voice, “Sir, what’s our e-estimated time of arrival towards the outpost?” He slightly stuttered, attempting to sustain some sophistication and order. “Hm?” The Corporal murmured, looking the Vaccine up and down. “Ah, yes, right. We’re approximately 20 minutes away. For now, don’t bother anybody and just keep your eyes open, Vaccine.” “Yes, sir.” He scuffled back to position prior and kept his head up, patrolling with his squad silently for the next 20 or so minutes before catching sight of the big, black watchtowers that surrounding the outpost. Under his rebreather, he dropped his jaw in amazement as they neared the tall structures. As they made way to the primary gate, two Vaktovians both adorningone tick upon their suits abruptly left the shadows that shrouded them and into the dim lights. The duo turned both of their heads upwards, bringing their arms up and requesting entrance. They looked back to the squad, nodding and moving out of their path as the large, red door’s manifested energy dimmed; granting safe entry. Too busy taking in the beauty and sleek architecture, the Level One was set into a trance. His pleasure was long lived, however, due to the Corporal urging him forward. He snapped back to attention, tightening his grip and straightening his posture as he made way through the arched entryway. Just as the entrance turned on its emitters and sealed the way, he received an audio transmission through his visor. “The Ascendancy transport ship is going to be arriving at the Outpost to pickup all vaccines temporarily inhabiting it for transport to Arcadia. En route to the planet, I will hold a training session in the hub upon the Ascendancy. Glory to Vaktovia! Colonel Arcane, over and out.” He glanced over to his comrades, who simply nodded in approval; one even pointing in the direction of the landing bay, where he witnessed a horde of fellow vaccines crowding around the site. He gave a quick, but rigid salute and gripped his StA-53 tightly, sprinting towards the mass of soon-to-be-Vaktovians.
[[Written by Vaktovian Private First Class, Bloodbred.]] |
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PappyJR99
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Zeriten
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| 30 Dec 2013 08:38 PM |
no slenderman 0/10
the inner machinations of my mind are an enigma |
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| 30 Dec 2013 08:39 PM |
| I really like it. Bloodbred is really talented. |
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| 30 Dec 2013 08:43 PM |
@Pappy
You should ask bloodbred for one. I want to see how your story will come out. |
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| 30 Dec 2013 09:10 PM |
| Thanks, But all the credit goes to bloodbred. |
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| 30 Dec 2013 09:27 PM |
| What about JC. I feel like they made a combat but still a joke. |
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| 04 Jan 2014 08:07 AM |
THANK THE LORD MORE STORIES! Finally, I thought I was the only one who wrote things here, jeez :v |
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Enzo01234
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| 04 Jan 2014 08:09 AM |
Good.
+1038 posts | Joined October 2010 | [-★-] Our Unit shall rise again] |
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Zheos
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| 04 Jan 2014 12:15 PM |
| Same thing I said when I read it. |
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| 04 Jan 2014 12:16 PM |
no paragraphings T.T
"Your opinions does not matter to me!" |
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| 04 Jan 2014 12:52 PM |
| It was so long I reuedted it then copy amd paste from a friend. |
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| 04 Jan 2014 12:53 PM |
Summary of story:
I in truck I at outpost I have gun I am ub3r l33t! |
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| 04 Jan 2014 12:56 PM |
| Yay! You said a complicated word! Here's your gold star, Vinny. |
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| 04 Jan 2014 12:59 PM |
| Look at how soulless you are with that -.- emoticon. After all that time in VAK, you've become more robotic than a VACCINE or whatever you call your fake robots. |
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govand554
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