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| 03 Jan 2014 02:18 PM |
[REFLEX]- Yeah straight from the big apple Concrete jungle goin so hard mix my tounge in a hustle grew up east side always in a rumble hangin with the big boys gettin into rustle's always been reckless can't get my head straight Im a lone wolf i don't like to co-operate when you livin in the city it's always a debate To bad i don't negotiate!
I'm from New York Concrete jungle where dreams are made of There's nothing you can't do Now you're in New York These streets will make you feel brand new Big lights will inspire you Let's hear it for New York, New York!
[ICY PUNCH]-I keep my style for the ladies, When the boys see me they start hatin' and start being crybabies. I don't think you know who I am let me introduce my self, I'm Icy Punch, you can hate me on me but your only truly hating on yourself. I don't think you should be following me around when I go, I'm already out of your sight because I'm already gone. It's okay if you hate, We really need to negotiate, I really think we need to separate. Don't make me humiliate you. The crying blues are almost on you. Icy Punch is outta here!
I'm from New York Concrete jungle where dreams are made of There's nothing you can't do Now you're in New York These streets will make you feel brand new Big lights will inspire you Let's hear it for New York, New York!
[Reflex]-Yeah i was underground for the longest while even though my rhyme's were strong like ceramic tile words stung like acid and bile been through hell and back but in the end it's all worthwhile but the odd's are always versitile the game's a race and i'm only gona a quarter mile life's as long as the great nile Even here on the east side in the N.Y.C you can't get anywhere without respect and loyalty but you gonna stay afloat as Long as you have buoyancy were all in this together-unity
I'm from New York Concrete jungle where dreams are made of There's nothing you can't do Now you're in New York These streets will make you feel brand new Big lights will inspire you Let's hear it for New York, New York!
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NOOBLEY1
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| 03 Jan 2014 03:43 PM |
| Isn't the Chorus just Empire State of Mind? |
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| 03 Jan 2014 09:48 PM |
| Real lyrical but not much flow. work on rhyming and [S] |
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| 03 Jan 2014 11:01 PM |
| Lol i can do way better i just got writers block... |
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| 03 Jan 2014 11:04 PM |
| If you have writer's block then you shouldn't be putting work out there, whether or not you have "completed"(/given up on) it. |
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| 03 Jan 2014 11:14 PM |
| I promised i would post it by the end of the day. |
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| 05 Jan 2014 09:08 AM |
| It's okay 10/10 now I understand your side of music |
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| 01 Feb 2014 09:17 AM |
| 8/10 I'm from BROOKLYN THAT'S WHAT'S UP |
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| 01 Feb 2014 09:59 AM |
stopped reading when you copied off of empire state of mind
IT'S NOT THAT HARD TO MAKE UP ORIGINAL LYRICS
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| 01 Feb 2014 10:12 AM |
record yourself performing it, or else its wrorthless
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| 03 Feb 2014 02:35 PM |
| @Nitro yes but i used to live in NY and i'm still on the east coast of canada. |
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