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| 20 Nov 2013 02:42 PM |
~~~~~Trapped in Time~~~~~
You wake up on a cold winter morning. The snow hangs off the trees in a beautiful manner. Everything seems lovely and peaceful. You walk outside to admire the snow. You immediately hear a crackling sound and as you look right, you see a gaping hole spinning in the ground. You quickly try to enter the house, but you are slowly being pulled in. "Help!" You scream, but it is too late. You fall down the hole, screaming for your life, and you pass out. When you come to, you are lying down next to a tree. German Panzer tanks roll by and you hear shouts and gunfire. A bullet hits the tree next to you, so you get up and start running. You fall into what you think is a , but it turns out to be one of those spinning holes again. You are flying through a vortex of sorts, then a new hole spits you out. This is where your story begins.
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Roswyn
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| 20 Nov 2013 02:50 PM |
"You fall into what you think is a ,"
What is , |
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| 20 Nov 2013 04:00 PM |
| It was a typo. I ment "hole". |
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| 26 Nov 2013 05:58 PM |
too many "you"
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timpookie
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| 26 Nov 2013 06:04 PM |
Sonic, look at his post count. You can likely conclude that he is new to writing.
And Leggo, I'll have my CS up after school (ie in 8 hours)
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