Slime2345
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| 01 Jan 2014 10:58 AM |
Title: Heart-Breaker
Genre: Drama, Thriller
Plot: After breaking up with her boyfriend, a girl tries to find different people to date, but her boyfriend won't let that happen anyway. |
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| 01 Jan 2014 11:10 AM |
| Does this sound generic? I can't tell. |
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NilPirate
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| 01 Jan 2014 11:15 AM |
| If you can encompass the entire thing in a simple sentence, it needs more work. |
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Slime2345
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| 01 Jan 2014 11:17 AM |
| Ya, It's just what I think. I'm still thinking of the rest. I'm just asking how that would be as an movie. |
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| 01 Jan 2014 11:23 AM |
| Oh, well then, I apologize. It sounded really generic from my viewpoint. |
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Slime2345
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| 01 Jan 2014 11:28 AM |
| Well I started thinking of it yesterday so it is short right now. Plus I usually do one sentence summaries. I don't know why, I just do. |
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| 01 Jan 2014 12:55 PM |
| wow i havnt herd that 1 b41!1 |
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Slime2345
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| 01 Jan 2014 12:57 PM |
| z0mg meh eater hurhurhurhur |
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zepher32
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| 01 Jan 2014 02:10 PM |
What if it's a psychological thriller that messes with you? Like, lots of twists and stuff. |
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Slime2345
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| 01 Jan 2014 02:12 PM |
| You don't know how the whole plot is going to be like. |
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| 02 Jan 2014 07:01 PM |
| As a filmmaker I know it is hard to come up with purely original film ideas. What you have to do is take the sentence you provided and then find a way to make that your own. Maybe the ex-boyfriend is an alien...I don't know. It just has to have that special twist that makes it it's own. |
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Slime2345
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| 03 Jan 2014 03:02 AM |
| No. After a boy realizes his girlfriend cheated on him, he decides to take a tour of the criminal underground and check out it's brothels and bars where he falls in love with a tr4vest1te h00ker. Inspired by Eyes Wide Shut in a way. |
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LosVider
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| 03 Jan 2014 03:12 AM |
| A bit classical, but if you can refine it, it will be really cool. |
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| 03 Jan 2014 03:59 AM |
Mix in a little bit of Tales From The Crypt type stuff to spice it up.
Like maybe he breaks up with her and begins to regret it. So he goes to apologize until he sees her talking to another man who he thinks shes now dating (she isn't)
So when she leaves, he kills the man. Later on he sees her talking to another guy, again not dating, and the ex kills him too. This goes on until he's a paranoid, raving madman and decides to finally go after the girl.
Ye. |
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LosVider
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| 03 Jan 2014 04:02 AM |
That is both equally terrifying and hilarious.
i cant resist
KILL ALL THE PEOPLE SHE TALKS TO |
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