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| 31 Dec 2013 11:26 AM |
I feel sorry for you guys; I think you're truly pathetic.
Keep messin' with me and you're gonna need a paramedic.
'Cause I'mma start a riot, so you best just forget it,
'Cause I'm a man of my word and you all know I said it.
Y'all judge me, but I got less flaws than you,
A mini snickers bar has more nuts than your entire crew.
'Cause I'mma tear down your doors, leave you bleeding on the floor,
Keep attackin' me an' I'll beat you 'til your skin is blue.
Sticks and stones may break my bones, but a punch will leave a bruise.
You're playing 'gainst a powerful, you're 'bout to lose.
'Cause you guys are nothin' but fog and I'm about to see through,
You're no real threat, what exactly are you trying to prove?
You can keep on pretending and tryna act hard,
'Cause I know you're weak and you're 'bout to leave this battle with scars,
You can act tough, but I see you for what you truly are..
Puss!es. Just puss!es with tiny lower parts.
That's what I thought. |
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PenBlade
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| 31 Dec 2013 11:30 AM |
| Lol. Surprisingly not terrible like most raps on here. I liked the mini Snickers line. |
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| 31 Dec 2013 11:34 AM |
| Thanks. I do Music GCSE and write raps for fun. |
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PenBlade
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| 31 Dec 2013 11:35 AM |
| Well, please continue to do so. Lol |
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| 31 Dec 2013 11:55 AM |
I love it, but I don't rap, lol. :P
Lyrics are amazing, carry on what you do! |
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| 31 Dec 2013 11:57 AM |
"Surprisingly not terrible like most raps on here."
This but it's not that good either. |
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| 31 Dec 2013 12:22 PM |
"This but it's not that good either."
Never said it was good, but when compared to other ro-raps, which don't even have song structure or rhyme schemes, this is pretty decent. |
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| 31 Dec 2013 12:30 PM |
"Never said it was good, but when compared to other ro-raps, which don't even have song structure or rhyme schemes, this is pretty decent."
I wasn't directing that at you. I know you never said it was good.
"^ You jelly?"
Hell no. Where I used to rap the newcomers could tear you and all of the rappers I've seen on MT so far part lyrically. You're not making anyone jealous with this. Especially not me. |
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johnb
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| 31 Dec 2013 12:43 PM |
| if i send you a beat will you rap for me? |
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| 31 Dec 2013 12:52 PM |
| Rap over it or type one up? I don't have recording material so it'll have to be the latter if I do it. |
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| 31 Dec 2013 12:54 PM |
Rap over. E.mail it to me:
DignityDeoVonsonZuka@live.co.uk |
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| 31 Dec 2013 12:54 PM |
Did you structure this? like:
A: hay A: may B: cool A: ray B: pool C: green
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(it's an example) |
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| 31 Dec 2013 12:57 PM |
Kinda like:
Hey Grey Prey Fool, Cool Today
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| 31 Dec 2013 12:57 PM |
| Like I said I can't rap over it. I'll have to type it up if you want me to do it. |
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| 31 Dec 2013 12:58 PM |
| I think he's talking about me. |
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| 31 Dec 2013 01:00 PM |
| In that case link to it when you're done. |
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johnb
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| 31 Dec 2013 01:01 PM |
| Here I got some samples ready let me whip up a quick chicken and I'll send it to the OP |
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| 31 Dec 2013 01:02 PM |
| What are you talking about? I think he means me. |
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| 31 Dec 2013 01:03 PM |
| Yeah, he is. I can rap to it and email it to you. |
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| 31 Dec 2013 01:57 PM |
| Nice rythm, feel like saying this too everyone i know.xD |
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| 31 Dec 2013 01:58 PM |
| Be warned, there are a few fast raps. |
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| 31 Dec 2013 02:00 PM |
I didn't dislike it
Impressive |
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| 31 Dec 2013 02:10 PM |
| I sent ur promo beat now spit a hot 16 |
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