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| 30 Dec 2013 08:32 PM |
(Almost time/Ghost/Intro) If anybody out there understands what these lyrics mean Let me know If not, I guess it's time for me to leave I'm just not capable of continuing (Almost time/Ghost/Verse 1) Just can't continue anymore Therefore I guess I may quit Sit down and listen I came into this game alone And I didn't have the right skills Three words a line, Barely even rhymed Lyrics barely made sense And they didn't even tell anybody anything So I changed my ways Made myself known Yet, Here I am Walking out of this game alone But you just keep telling me to watch my tone (Almost time/Ghost/Chorus) I guess it's almost time for me to go But just know I didn't except to make it this far Didn't think I'd ever have real rapping skill So just chill out 'Cause your wish has came true (Almost time/Ghost/Verse 2) This ain't no [F] joke I'm planning my departure if I can't get any help If nobody understands what I'm saying, Well, [F] you then I shouldn't have to explain it to you Yea, I may be a pain A real [F] migraine But nobody understands what I've been through Or how hard I've tried to make myself better This is like my goodbye letter My ticket out of here (Almost time/Ghost/Chorus) I guess it's almost time for me to go But just know I didn't except to make it this far Didn't think I'd ever have real rapping skill So just chill out 'Cause your wish has came true |
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| 30 Dec 2013 09:50 PM |
| Forza, you hate all my lyrics. Don't gotta keep announcing it with your thrown-off rates. At least my lyrics have a meaning unlike yours. |
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| 30 Dec 2013 09:51 PM |
"At least my lyrics have a meaning unlike yours." I have tons of feeling and meaning in my lyrics, and I don't even try. |
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| 30 Dec 2013 09:53 PM |
| Yea right. I've read your lyrics. They have no meaning. My lyrics do. They deliver a message. Yours don't. |
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| 30 Dec 2013 09:54 PM |
"Yea right. I've read your lyrics. They have no meaning. My lyrics do. They deliver a message. Yours don't."
Talk about fragment sentences. |
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| 30 Dec 2013 09:56 PM |
| Yea, nice fail with trying to change the topic when you know you've lost. |
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| 30 Dec 2013 09:58 PM |
"Yea, nice fail with trying to change the topic when you know you've lost."
Aren't you a handful? You're lyrics are terrible. My cat had a STROKE because I read this aloud. |
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| 30 Dec 2013 10:00 PM |
| My lyrics don't suck. They're actually pretty good. You're just mad that you know that I'm better than you. |
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| 30 Dec 2013 10:01 PM |
"My lyrics don't suck. They're actually pretty good. You're just mad that you know that I'm better than you." Confirmed seven year old. |
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| 30 Dec 2013 10:03 PM |
| Actually, you're the seven year old. Again, nice fail on trying to change the subject |
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| 30 Dec 2013 10:10 PM |
Oooh! Agent is so cool, we better back up! :O HE TOTALLY DIDN'T JUST USE THE COMEBACK I JUST USED! ;OOO |
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| 31 Dec 2013 03:27 AM |
First, everybody note this.
FORZA'S SONGS ARE FREAKING PARODIES
Second of all,
10/10 because of the fantastic rhyming and beat. |
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| 31 Dec 2013 08:20 AM |
| Forza makes joke songs, while immortal makes more 'proper' songs, if you know what I mean. |
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| 31 Dec 2013 08:26 AM |
| 9/10 And Forza's songs are joking around like my song Swag Sauce |
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| 31 Dec 2013 09:20 AM |
| 8/10 the wordplay and metaphors were okay, but the story and message was good. |
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| 31 Dec 2013 10:43 AM |
What wordplay and metaphors...? Do you even know what they mean? Show me some examples.
OT: I have no idea why the ratings for this are so high, and I see no beat so what are you referring to Sympathetical?
Quite frankly, your message was fine but the rap's dull to me. Elementary rhyme scheme and content. Your message could have been expressed better with good raps. I'm guessing you were more concerned with getting the message across than doing that.
I don't do number ratings, but this was a higher level of bad. |
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| 31 Dec 2013 10:48 AM |
| By beat, I sort of ment flow. This didn't have much flow to go with it, and also it sounded like as if it was desperately trying to find its own 'beat' but it couldn't. |
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| 31 Dec 2013 10:54 AM |
| I could've made the flow a bit better but as someone said (don't remember who) my point was to get the message across. |
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