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romoluz
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| 30 Dec 2013 04:20 PM |
Please. Please don't.
We have way to many clans based off that super generic storyline.
Get creative pls. |
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| 30 Dec 2013 04:21 PM |
| Rom, unlike TNE I plan to be original and actually have good lore and a good story. I want an original base with an original uniform set. |
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romoluz
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| 30 Dec 2013 04:24 PM |
Lol
"Unlike tne"
You do realize unlike your clan that you're working on, tne has had developing lore and still is in work for about a year now. Whether you believe it or not tne is an original work. Lel
"Interesting story"
Your bassically taking the entire basis for your clan off of killzone. Unoriginal, and dry.
Killzone is the typical dry good guy bad guy storyline. Cut and dry, no interesting twists
Pls b original. |
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| 30 Dec 2013 04:24 PM |
| A Helghan clan could be original if people would stop biting off Zejak. |
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romoluz
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| 30 Dec 2013 04:25 PM |
Don't get me wrong killzone has some awesome features to it and is not a bad game.
It just doesn't have a unique plot. |
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| 30 Dec 2013 04:26 PM |
| If some one would create a sory based off of after the fall of Helghan(Visari era) and the recreation of the race on a new planet we could totally make an original clan. |
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romoluz
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| 30 Dec 2013 04:31 PM |
Arch, it would take a creative genius to pull that off. Zajek ain't the problem, it's helghan lore. It's booooorriiing. They're the typical bad guy out for revenge sort and the ISA play the typical "white knight" "were so good and pure" good guy. I appreciate unique clans like TGI, They, like tne, have it's own lore developed by the leader.
I think it would have been way more interesting if it wasn't so cut and dry. Such as isa secretly being the antagonists while the helghan nation was truly just defending itself(not just using it for propoganda like in the game) or something along those lines. And helghan clans are a dime a dozen.
My advice, take some time (3-4 months minimum) develop your own lore for your own unique "race" or whatever, and move from there. |
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romoluz
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| 30 Dec 2013 04:33 PM |
Arch, shadow fall already kinda does that.
And it doesn't fix the fact that their race is just generic in general.
You'd need to do a lot of reworking to make it more interesting. |
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| 30 Dec 2013 04:52 PM |
| People want a GOOD Helghan clan. I plan to develop that. Also, I plan to take the time to develop this. |
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