keyyon
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| 26 Dec 2013 03:32 PM |
Your just mad at me because i survived after getting hung from a tree your mad at me cause im no human being so your just asking me why am im a meanie, im a meanie but your just full of jelly your mad cause your songs sound like nelly and you have nothing else to complain about so you go on forums searchin for songs to complain about and once we say i dont care you start to pout because your sukin on WEENIES, lots of WEENIES and im just like why are you always saying these bad things cant you say something nice i know your poor but being nice is free, it has no price so stop being a jerk cause in real life your as little as mice you probably have a head full of head lice so imma say this again not once but twice your just mad at me because i survived after getting hunged from a tree im no human being and you all should know that i dont give a $@!# and yall know i show pure hate to people who hate on me so stop hating on me or ill tie you up to a burning tree and see if your like me not a human being. cause i cant burn if im already burnt im no human being im a demon you see jason8630 is a fkin fggot nvm i lied hes a fkin swaggot always being a hater cause he cant rap! hes just a fat guy eating all of the mcWraps i bet you he cant run half a lap unless you put food at the finish line! He will run so fast and get the food he will be all like "ITS FINALLY MINE" hes just a big meanie has a body of a bean bag beanie! he suks so many WEENIES! LOTS OF WEENIES and im not just picking on him im getting ballsofopperation too for comparing me to slim cause if im compared to slim i already know im not better than him! Simply orange, you ruined the entire cypher! once i release this i bet your gonna get angry then get hyper your gonna try to battle then once you lose your gonna be lookin for someone to tattle or to say that i rigged the battle i have this rap skill like i was a snake with the rotten rattle! your the dirtiest cattle i ever met NO CHILDREN this cattle has rabbies so you shouldnt PET! when the darkness comes again i blame it on my evil twin. NtkEzio i tried to deaded the beef or anything problems we had he said no and ruined my holiday spirit i was sad... NOT hes just angry cause his criminal song was a crime and is sitting in the jail cell Becoming something dirtier than ROT. I EAT RAPPERS LIKE YOU, I PUT THEM IN MY POT, THEN RUN OUT TO THE PARKING LOT TO MAKE SURE NO ONE SEES CAUSE IF THEY SEE ILL LET NTK LOOSE AND GIVE EM A DIEASE HES INFESTED, HES AFRAID TO GET TESTED Cause he has EGGS in his body that are nested once they hatch they wont be tried for a while cause there perfectly rested! hes no assassin hes just a bad artist he cant freestyle his group runs him there his trainer and hes the TOTODILE If i ever have to hide his dead body ill throw it in the eygpt's River called the NILE. Lola i mean COLD FIRE, dude theres no such thing as a cold fire! she said i was a rapper who she admired (ewww) i dont OD, then i ordered a huge amount of barewire cause ill crack any one in the head see all these rappers underneath me man there just dead! IM NOT LOSING CONTROL IM GAINING MY INSANE MIND SO DONT GET UPSET IF I DIDNT MENTION YOUR NAME THAT MEANS YOUR OK WITH ME OR YOUR NEXT so dont send me a text or a rap response cause if you do then the beef is offically on! cause ill flip you like a burger then slice you up, chew you then spit you out on the burger bun! SO YOU HAVE 10 SECONDS TO HIDE, AFTER THE 10 SECONDS THERE WILL BE NO PLACE TO RUN CAUSE IM A GOON WHO IS IN THE DARKER SIDE OF THE MOON WHO LIKES TO WATCH THE LOONEY TOONS NUDE IN THE AFTERNOON (why) IM THE BEST EXAMPLE OF A EMINEM GIMMICK SO COME ON SAY THAT I MIMIC I DARE YOU TOO CAUSE THATS WHAT THEY ALL SAID Well they said it then but now there just dead they couldnt stay alive in the lions den! And some survived and got pecked to death by my possessed hens! and one was alive then my evil twin stabbed him in the neck with a black pen.. I BEEN BACK SINCE OCTOBER. SO ITS BAD TO SAY IM BACK IM STILL THE SAME BLACK SHADE KILLIN WEAK RAPPERS WITH SKILLS THEY LACK I SAY WHAT I SAY CAUSE I AM BLACK OR MAYBE I HAD TOO MUCH CRACK IM GOING ALL OUT IN THIS RAP NOT, IM GONNA GO ALL OUT IN THE FINAL ATTACK SO SAY THIS VERSE IS WACK, OR I SHOULD STOP DOING TRACKS CAUSE MY SONG ARE EXTREMELY LONG AND THERE LAME ITS OK, I JUST WANTED EVERYONE TO KNOW MY EVIL TWIN NAME....
BLACK SHADE.... Shout out to lil rac, hey how are you? thats good, where were you! you was gone for a while my friend! and if were not friends hey lets be friends.
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AudioChef
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| 26 Dec 2013 03:53 PM |
| Corn growing in December. That was horrible. |
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keyyon
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| 27 Dec 2013 12:22 PM |
| nobody cares what you think if u dont like it then dont respond, the responding was suppose to tell me what i did wrong so i can fix it. not just say -8/10 or corn growing in decemember.. |
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| 27 Dec 2013 12:23 PM |
| Cmon BLACK SHADY, You have done better |
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| 27 Dec 2013 12:24 PM |
| Didn't flow that well - like some of your others |
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keyyon
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| 27 Dec 2013 12:30 PM |
This wasnt a song it was a freestyle.. and i know i done better ill do something else to make this failure nothing.. #TBN, #B.J.P |
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StellaOwl
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| 27 Dec 2013 12:31 PM |
no flow or point bad word choice meaning is lost
there, happy? |
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keyyon
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| 27 Dec 2013 01:05 PM |
Sure im happy. My meaning waa dissing the people in the song.. |
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keyyon
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| 27 Dec 2013 02:18 PM |
| Really? xD do it. This is my wrost yeah i know but if this is the only song/ verse you saw from me and you think you can beat me than your dead wrong pal.... #TBN, #B.J.P |
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| 27 Dec 2013 02:37 PM |
| China that sucked Black shady (Keyyon) Can Spit way better than you. |
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keyyon
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| 27 Dec 2013 04:33 PM |
This guy drives fast cars? but he isnt even on the list of good MTers so hes not a star this guy is a smelly torn up rag he probably still play tag with a group of guys cause hes a fg. once he starts rapping we all start to lag i hope he suffercates himself by putting this walgreens bag on his head then he can fall down and just to make sure hes dead ill take his soul and turn it into black pitch coal. |
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keyyon
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| 27 Dec 2013 06:19 PM |
neither are you dude your songs sound like r.kelly but thats an insult to R&B so in rap you sound like a german nelly
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| 27 Dec 2013 07:11 PM |
"nobody cares what you think if u dont like it then dont respond, the responding was suppose to tell me what i did wrong so i can fix it. not just say -8/10 or corn growing in decemember.."
You should expect criticism if you're putting things like this out for the public. I will respond to what I want. I can list a bunch of things, such as how corny it was, how messy your flow comes off, how dull it is, how the whole rap is basic, how redundant it is, how your attempt at metaphor failed, etc. |
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keyyon
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| 27 Dec 2013 07:23 PM |
| Not bad to be honest. Wanna join my huge upcoming collab? It'd be awesome if you could join. If you do, just PM me. |
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| 27 Dec 2013 07:30 PM |
| You don't recognize metaphors in your own "rap"? |
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keyyon
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| 27 Dec 2013 07:46 PM |
| Like i said i free styled this when i typed this i was coming from the top of my head and i wasnt trying to make any metaphors, i re-read it and saw some. ill admit this is a a fail i done better |
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| 27 Dec 2013 07:57 PM |
I've mentioned before that making raps off the dome doesn't mean they have to be dull.
Very well, though. If you can admit to your failures then I don't have an issue with that. |
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PIERCE457
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| 27 Dec 2013 07:58 PM |
>Your just mad at me >Your just mad at >Your just >Your
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