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| 21 Dec 2013 08:50 PM |
Dear God...... Can I Ask You For Some Guidance I Know I've Been a Stranger, Sorry For The Silence It Seems I Only Talk To You, In My Time Of Need Time To Serve My Purpose, I Commit To You My Deeds So From Here On Out, I'm Doin This For You Beyond The Shadow of a Doubt, I've Been Born Anew You Prepared For Me a Feast, I Am Forever Thankful My Mind Is Set At Ease, My Heart Is Finally Tranquil I Ain't Chasing This Dream In Pursuit Of a Few Grand I'm Sewin' The Seams, Tryin To Prove I'm a New Man It Isn't Fame I Pray For, When I Lie Awake At Night It's To Take Em From The Dark, & Lead Em To The Light My People Need Direction & I've Grown Tired Of Waiting Break Free From His Grasp, Reject The Hand Of Satan Some'll Say I'm Gone Religous, Call Me a Preacher I Just Opened Up My Heart, Listened To The Teacher
I listened to my heart then I followed the cloud Walked alone on this Boulevard surrounded by crowds Every single step was guided, I felt as if my soul divided But now it's whole,So I'm taking it home where it belongs Everyday I'm writing a song. Looking forward to my future who I'm gonna become Honing in like a beacon,I ain't tryna be a deacon I'm here to play my role like an actor in a sitcom With the whole world watching feel the weight on my shoulder Every single day seems like the world is getting colder Like the winter I can feel it in my bones, Still I keep it real I ain't never been a clone Sacrificing all my time to this cause of mine, I know I'm Royal I can see it in my bloodline It's do or die so I'm doing it more than ever Forget the cheddar I just listen to my heart hear the echoes of my heartbeat You Gotta Understand, Time Is Only Borrowed Picture Judgement Day, & If It Came Tomorrow Lemme Ask a Question, Promise To Be Honest Look Inside Your Heart, Have You Forgotten Who God Is Take a Look Around, Seek & You Shall Find He Lives Inside Us All, He's Even In This Rhyme Before We're Laid Down Amongst The Roses & Carnations Know That The Creator, Will Put To always Test Our Patience Have Faith... When You Face Your Weakest Moment Be Still, Your Strength Lies In The Atonement We're All Born Broken... God's Grace Is Da Glue If Da Shoe Fits...... Forget It Man, U Know What To Do Now That I See The Light, I Ain't Gon Ever Let The Sun Set The Odds Stacked Against Me, No Wonder I Ain't Won Yet That Don't Really Matter, I Keep Pushin' The Envelope Listen To My Heart, reflex A Stethoscope |
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| 21 Dec 2013 08:59 PM |
| Bro that is the best rap Ive ever heard. |
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| 21 Dec 2013 09:00 PM |
| Thank's alot of heart in it it's been a year today since my grandma died. |
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| 21 Dec 2013 09:03 PM |
| That was right there and then, magnificent. |
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| 21 Dec 2013 10:28 PM |
| Great rap gothic. Keep up the good work. |
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| 21 Dec 2013 11:18 PM |
| Now this is what i call a perfect song, if this was turned into a video, I would be watching this for months, no years xD |
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| 21 Dec 2013 11:20 PM |
| XD i actually am i wrote this while listening to a random instrumentle i found on youtube. |
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| 24 Dec 2013 06:49 PM |
| I'm too lazy to read, but I guess it must be good. |
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| 24 Dec 2013 06:56 PM |
| Rac's comeing from you that means alot thanks merry christmas. |
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| 24 Dec 2013 07:02 PM |
not trying to be critical but
why do you capitalize more than half the words in sentences
it makes it nearly impossible to read
... And then I burst into treats. |
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| 24 Dec 2013 07:03 PM |
why do you capitalize more than half the words in sentences [2]
honestly it makes me die a little bit when i see people doing this, my god. |
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| 24 Dec 2013 07:05 PM |
| Idk i was on ipad and it had autocorrect to don't blame me. |
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| 24 Dec 2013 07:07 PM |
| Don't know about you but i found it easier to read. |
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| 24 Dec 2013 07:08 PM |
"it had autocorrect to don't blame me."
autocorrect doesn't make autistic grammar errors
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| 24 Dec 2013 07:49 PM |
| It's also how lyrics are suppose to be wrote. |
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| 24 Dec 2013 07:51 PM |
"It's also how lyrics are suppose to be wrote."
i have never seen lyrics written like this what're you talking about
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| 24 Dec 2013 08:03 PM |
| Gothic, there will always be a critic, especially one that dosen't care much for the message. |
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| 24 Dec 2013 08:37 PM |
Oh the message is nice I guess, you speaking about how much you love "the lawwd and saaaviouur!!" but we aren't haters.
We're just saying that it looks like it was written by an autistic eight-year old who spent too much time getting came on by the Priests at bible camp. |
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