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| 20 Dec 2013 04:07 PM |
| I'm from the snowy icy north that's why my rhymes are so cold people say i'm trippin i'm heavy from the gold im like a monster on the loose i'm uncontrolled boy mess with me it'sa suicide mission cuz your gonna get scolded unfolded my rhymes are like a gun click clack-reloaded my lines are time bombs and i believe they just exploded your's are eroded your ego is bloated your legacy aint even noted on the wall of fame your on the wall of shame your falling asunder and set aflame i guess when you decided to battle me you chose to hunt big game but the tables has turned the hunter became the hunted disclaimer-This aint no board game! |
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| 20 Dec 2013 06:42 PM |
| It's pretty basic, it seems like you threw in some metaphor/simile attempts but those were basic too. |
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| 20 Dec 2013 10:16 PM |
| That was only a freestyle off the top of my head this is my written song. http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=120711897 |
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| 20 Dec 2013 11:48 PM |
| There isn't much of a differece in skill. |
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| 20 Dec 2013 11:49 PM |
Difference*
I'm going to just get on my laptop so I have less typos. |
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