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| 20 Dec 2013 06:47 PM |
INFO:
The story follows Shadowfan and Phelps, two warriors under training by the ancient Fastlane250. Fastlane one day gets killed by the mysterious ATR. Many monsters and beasts await these two, which causes them to try and struggle for survival.
The pilot is being created.
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| 20 Dec 2013 06:47 PM |
if you're going to do something like this with ROBLOX characters you probably shouldn't use forums as major antagonists
WHAT'S UP WITH THAT? |
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drpece231
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| 20 Dec 2013 06:48 PM |
| Knowing fastlane,he wouldnt train you |
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| 20 Dec 2013 06:48 PM |
me when OP writes a crappy story http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MRy3wICXVXI |
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| 20 Dec 2013 06:51 PM |
@Drpece In my story, you are a drunk. You slur your words when you talk and drink. |
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MrPhelps
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| 20 Dec 2013 06:52 PM |
You got his from my fanfic, didn't you?
I'm honored to be in it!
I can't wait for the first chapter!
~The OT Snowman~ |
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| 20 Dec 2013 06:52 PM |
Like Sam Guevenne?
WHAT'S UP WITH THAT? |
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drpece231
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| 20 Dec 2013 06:53 PM |
@mr Its not really an honor More of a horror |
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MrPhelps
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| 20 Dec 2013 06:53 PM |
Just wait and see, Drpece.
My have turned out well, so far.
His probably will too!
~The OT Snowman~ |
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drpece231
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| 20 Dec 2013 06:55 PM |
@mr Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh but you havnt seen shadows work |
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MrPhelps
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| 20 Dec 2013 06:56 PM |
Is it really that bad?
~The OT Snowman~ |
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drpece231
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| 20 Dec 2013 06:57 PM |
@mr Ask any OTer who knows shadow |
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| 20 Dec 2013 06:57 PM |
Lemme guess, you will be the main character.
DIDNT SEE THAT COMING AMIRITE?!?!?!?!?!? |
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drpece231
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| 20 Dec 2013 06:58 PM |
EVEN FASTLANE THINKS SHADOWS BAD
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| 20 Dec 2013 06:59 PM |
this story is going to be terribad
it would be terribad enough to give me every known disease in the medical books |
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| 20 Dec 2013 07:01 PM |
The Shadow Chronicles: Intro The raindrops fell from the sky, going across the window. Cars go across and zig across long lines of traffic. Is there a meaning in life? The more I think of Fastlane dying, the more I think of being a weak person. I am Shadowfan, who lives with a brother named Phelps. We work a shop to pay debt. I work under Master Drpece. We sit down and have conversations over some wine. He drinks too much and gets drunk during our conversations.
“You know b-boy” He said, slurring on the word boy. “What?” I replied. “You’re not so perfect!” He then replied. He then passed out and I looked at him. “Are you okay?” I said. He just was lying there, asleep. A customer walked in. “Welcome to Doctor’s Orders! How may I help you?” Phelps said. “I would like some sour candy, a lot of it!” he yelled. I gave him it and calculated the money. “I want $9.99 for this item, please.” I reminded him. He gave me $10. “That’s it.” I said. He then gave me a dirty glare and walked out of the store. Drpece woke up and saw a customer. As then, the man got into his AT-Car. The things people from ATR drive. “What would he be doing in here anyway?” I said. As then, the man destroyed the propane tanks, we ran out of the store as quick as we could. “That was no Hank Hill.” Phelps said. “Indeed.” I replied. “OH NO, MY WINE!” Drpece said. I looked at the car. I then got out a sword and chased after it.
TO BE CONTINUED…
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MrPhelps
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| 20 Dec 2013 07:03 PM |
What...just...happened...
What...was...that...
Could you kill me off in the next chapter?
~The OT Snowman~ |
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MrPhelps
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| 20 Dec 2013 07:05 PM |
Ummm...
Of course I did!
I loved it.
~The OT Snowman~ |
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| 20 Dec 2013 07:05 PM |
i was right
that was just.. SO BAD |
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| 20 Dec 2013 07:05 PM |
| Something tells me you didn't. Obviously a troll would lie like that. |
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MrPhelps
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| 20 Dec 2013 07:07 PM |
Just bring on the next chapter.
~The OT Snowman~ |
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drpece231
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| 20 Dec 2013 07:08 PM |
"Master Drpece" WELL IM OUT GOODBYE EVERYONE |
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