Komnenos
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:21 PM |
It begins with the First Night.
That which gave the first species the genetic augmentations to handle lower gravity, extreme climate, and extended 0 gravity travel to allow any capable group of sentient species to colonize the galaxy.
That which gifted us with the technologies artificial gravity, Greek Fire, Plasmatic Forging, and the capabilities to harness the energy of Antimatter and the strength and endurance Dyselium, Ceramite, and other rare ores, allowing us to build great Progenitor space ships capable of harboring tens of thousands at once.
That which brought us out of tribal existence, and into the stars on the condition that we all know who brought us here, and not get decadent and greedy, thinking we did this ourselves.
It is omnipotent and everlasting. It is weakened in its current state due to it having to harbor the worst blows of the defeats that drove Prima Nox into Deep Space, 3000 years ago, but still present and still capable of empowering its militant with altered speed, intellect, strength, and endurance to overcome the Heathen that sits on our rightful throne as the sole moral authority in the galaxy.
The First Night watched as the first natural life began and evolved. It was joyful up to a certain point: this life did not have the means to expand beyond its home planetary bodies. Eventually, internal wars and class struggle wasting the planet's resources would take its toll and slowly, species after species would die out.
The First Night took pity upon the surviving species; they were surely doomed to fall and life would come to a permanent end. This could not be allowed.
The remaining species, in an ancient night known as the Awakening, had their bodies and genes altered so that they could harbor the strenuous tensions of extended 0 gravity, along with the harsh environments of other, unsettled planets.
The First Night, also on the Awakening, deposited information into these species' minds that would have never been known otherwise. The knowledge and expertise to harness the powers of previously unknown entities and metals along with how to forge them with Plasmatic energy to make them 10 times as strong, light, and durable as before.
The species were eternally grateful. The galaxy was colonized; life was saved. The First Night was happy. It was a peaceful and caring entity, watching over its faithful like a shepherd to a flock. This would not last forever. |
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Komnenos
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:44 PM |
| I'll be sure to save this in Myforums section tonight and I'll read it. |
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PaxOxio
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| 19 Dec 2013 08:21 PM |
| plots are nice. Coolstorybro |
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Komnenos
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| 19 Dec 2013 08:56 PM |
| Thanks, this took me around 20 minutes or so, will be doing the next 2 parts tomorrow. |
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solticex
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| 20 Dec 2013 08:11 PM |
There are a few grammatical errors here and there that I noticed, but this lore is otherwise very intriguing and well done. I can't wait until the other parts come out!
-Legoflame5000
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