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| 19 Dec 2013 07:12 PM |
Over a problem in society Oh man how can you make soemthing like this into 3 pages? |
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:15 PM |
| I easily made a 4 page one over videogame violence. |
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:16 PM |
>I easily made a 4 page one over videogame violence.
oh man
that's definitely a "problem"
nope, nothing else more important |
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:17 PM |
| I was actually arguing that it has no adverse effects on those who play them. |
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:19 PM |
>I was actually arguing that it has no adverse effects on those who play them.
then how is that a problem in society if you're saying it isn't a problem at all...? |
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:19 PM |
| And according to the research I did, they had stress relief and pro social benefits, which veritably does the opposite of harm. |
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:21 PM |
Here are some problems:
Immigration Policy Alternative energy sources Hydraulic Fracking Capitol Punishment
muuuch much more. |
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:21 PM |
>And according to the research I did, they had stress relief and pro social benefits, which veritably does the opposite of harm.
yeah, i get what you're saying, but op was talking about problems in society.
you're talking about something that is not a problem in society |
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:22 PM |
well put some of your mind into it or get OT's advice. They have a complain list. |
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:22 PM |
how about suicide
if all your friends were named cliff would you jump off them? |
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:30 PM |
I don't have my final draft's intro on me but this is my first draft's intro
"A common claim that skeptics will make when objecting that violent video-games are not an issue is that they, in a sense result in “negative behavioral and attitude changes.” For everything this hollow remark leaves it's controversy and curiosity. But the reality is that video game violence doesn't cause these injurious changes, and they contradict this assumption because they veritably do the opposite. Video-games are not proven to cause violence, have stress-relieving/pro-social benefits, and there are already effective restrictions in place to prevent murderous/salacious material being candid to adolencents."
So do:
"A common claim that skeptics will make when objecting -YOUR CLAIM-, is -THEIR CLAIM-. For everything this hollow remark leaves it's controversy and curiosity. But the reality is that -STRONG OPINION-. -THESIS STATEMENT- |
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:34 PM |
| or you can take it to your personal point of view, op |
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:49 PM |
Then you have to use PEE for your body paragraphs
Point Example Explanation
Point- Take it from your thesis
Example- Quote, fact, statistic "For example, in the passage it states 'quote here'"
Explanation- Explain the significance of the example you used.
Repeat this 3 times
then write the conclusion |
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:50 PM |
I wrote an entire page on Godzilla
I didn't even barley know about it either
And I was supposed to be writing about role models
I got a 100 |
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:51 PM |
@Yo Wow That's nice. You should go be a LA teacher have a nice career
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:54 PM |
| Ew, I'm not gonna study for ~20 years in school just to back into one. |
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:55 PM |
I know I was going to say "Have a worthless career" But that is too harsh you get me? |
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| 19 Dec 2013 07:59 PM |
Anyways, I'm not that smart
I only scored a 1370 on my PSAT
The other people in my class could already head off to college if they wanted to with ther scores.
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| 19 Dec 2013 08:00 PM |
| I easily turned the story of the Exxon Valdez Oil Spill into a 4 page essay. I believe you can do it. |
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| 19 Dec 2013 08:07 PM |
PSAT? Well that's pretty good. You got a headstart bud. |
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