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| 17 Dec 2013 04:07 PM |
uh, yeah, uh huh yeah
i be spittin lines all ova u when im finished you wont know what hit you you aint notin but sunshine, but i sure will down on u like thunda im ice cream, but your sorbet yeah, notice how my raps dont rhyme thats cause im #bettathanu you may not like violet, but i dont like uuuuuuuuuuuu
u suck yes u suck come on admit dayum u suck
yeah innit word |
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StellaOwl
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| 17 Dec 2013 04:11 PM |
| Violet, do you have a British accent? |
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snazzell
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| 17 Dec 2013 04:12 PM |
| @stella, what do you mean, like a posh one or a chav one |
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| 17 Dec 2013 04:13 PM |
| Oh gosh! Rember when I use to rap like this (regret it all) There is no meaning behind your rap, not even catchy.....Work on your raps....alot |
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StellaOwl
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| 17 Dec 2013 04:13 PM |
| I Don't know just any kind, I mean I don't know anyone with a British accent so I was just wondering if you had. One |
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| 17 Dec 2013 04:13 PM |
>Oh gosh! Rember when I use to rap like this (regret it all) There is no meaning behind your rap, not even catchy.....Work on your raps....alot
OMFG DID YOU JUST TAKE THIS SERIOUSLY BWAHAHAHA |
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| 17 Dec 2013 04:15 PM |
| @stella, i have i guess, but not all posh just normal but you can see a bit of geordie in there, somewhere olol |
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darko29
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| 18 Dec 2013 02:46 PM |
FIRST PART WHERE YOU WENT WRONG "i be spittin lines all ova u when im finished you wont know what hit you"
You go from using "u" to using "you" and the last part of your rap didn't even rhyme(Dont say "Wasnt trying to rhyme" - I know what you were trying to do)
"i be" Don't care if you want to sound cool or were trying to be Lil Wayne but, that is improper English
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"you aint notin but sunshine, but i sure will down on u like thunda"
If your calling them sunshine, Would that be calling them joyful and happy? (Since that's what sunshine is sometimes associated with). Also, how can you down sunshine with "thunda"?
Clouds or Rain "down" sunshine not "Thunda"(Even though you "attempted to DISS "thunda")
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"u suck yes u suck come on admit dayum u suck"
At this point,I don't know if this is a rap, diss or just a guy calling out someone else. This wouldn't even qualify as a verbal assault, more like a verbal embarrassment
NEXT
"yeah innit word"
Just noooooooooooooooooooooo
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| 18 Dec 2013 02:51 PM |
| We made this badly on purpose lol... |
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| 18 Dec 2013 03:04 PM |
| omfg he actually analysed it wtf, THIS ISNT EVEN SERIOUS OMG lolololol |
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| 18 Dec 2013 03:49 PM |
>Oh gosh! Rember when I use to rap like this has 54 posts, you mean 5 days ago? |
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| 19 Dec 2013 03:35 PM |
YES ENOUGH OF YOU HAVE HAVE NOTICED.
Now that we are drawn away from this topic, What started the NTK Flame War(That comment was to draw attention(since you wouldn't listen to me otherwise) - Nice diss by the way lol) |
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| 19 Dec 2013 03:39 PM |
| Dont say.."SURE YOU DIDNT POST IT FOR-" OR "YEAH YEAH". Im aware I get alot of hate anyways for my raps and most of you dont like me so, stirring up this would draw attention |
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| 19 Dec 2013 03:46 PM |
| you realise everyones gonna ignore you now |
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| 19 Dec 2013 03:49 PM |
| I'm guessing all the Ntk stuff was before I started coming on here more. |
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