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Re: Clearcook Industries: Prologue

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MisterMyers is not online. MisterMyers
Joined: 11 Dec 2013
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17 Dec 2013 11:38 AM
Mario froze, as the knife tore into his back. At first, I thought I had just startled him, until I saw Ultra, my ex-CEO, crouching behind him. He had a huge grin plastered on his face, and his eyes had a wild look in them. He twisted the knife, and Mario let out a weak croak. Blood dribbled from the corner of his mouth, and he gave me one last confused look, before he crumpled to his knees. He was dead before he hit the ground. Ultra began laughing hysterically, slapping his knees.

"See Chris? What did I tell you? You didn't think I would do it, did you? Haha! You should've seen the look on your face!"

I couldn't comprehend what I just saw. Ultra, my best friend, had just killed my CEO. And for what? To prove a point? Mario was one of the best men I had ever known. He had children, for gods sake. Ultra had just orphaned two nice, young kids. I had to try and reason with him. But how do you negotiate with a crazy person?

"Ultra...put the knife down, okay? You can have your job back. I'm sorry I fired you. I was angry, and I wasn't thinking straight. Just...settle down, okay?

He stared at me with cold, unblinking eyes.

"Calm down? You want me to...CALM DOWN?" He asked, with a grin on his face.

"You fired me, threatened me, and destroyed my life...and you expect me to just...calm down? I MADE YOU, CHRIS! IF IT WASN'T FOR ME, YOU WOULD BE SCOOPING DOG SH!T FOR A LIVING! I MADE YOU...AND NOW I'M GONNA DESTROY YOU!"

He walked towards me, slowly. The knife clenched in his hand. "I have a gun in my desk" I thought. "If I run, I can make it. But can I really bring myself to kill Ultra?"

I backed up slowly. I could see my desk, out of the corner of my eye. "Three...tw-"

He sprinted at me, with the knife raised above his head. It was the last thing I expected, and I froze.

"God damn, I've known Ultra for 20 years, and he's still surprising me! Haha!" I thought, grinning.

He tackled me to the ground, and brought the knife down hard on my leg. It burned, like fire. I had never been stabbed. I had been shot, but not stabbed. This was worse.

I clenched my hand in a fist, and swung at his jaw. I heard a crack, as my knuckles met with the bridge of his nose. I managed to get him off me, but he only looked angrier. Without hesitating, I tore the knife out of my leg. The pain was blinding. I closed my eyes, and clenched my teeth. When I opened my eyes, Ultra was gone. I turned my head left and right, but there was no sign of him. Then I heard a click, and something cold and hard pressed against the back of my head.

"You didn't think I remembered, didn't you? That you keep a gun in the third drawer, on the left side of your desk? I never forget, Chris. You should know that by now.

It was over. Ultra had me at gunpoint, and he was going to kill me. Unless somehow, I could whip around, and stab him. But he would surely blow my head off, before I could even grip the knife. But what do I have to lose?

I tightened my grip on the knife. I didn't think before I whipped around. It's easy for me to over-think things. I heard gunfire, and thought for sure he had shot me, but I felt no pain. I jammed the knife into his stomach, and heard a sick tearing noise. I twisted it, like he did with Mario.

"Doesn't feel so good, does it you crazy b@stard?" I screamed.

He pointed the pistol at me, and fired. Only one shot went off, before he ran out of ammo. The bullet hit my stomach, in the exact same spot as the knife hit him. We both just stared at eachother, with a pained look on our face. He stood up, legs shaking. Blood leaking out of his mouth. I did the same. I could taste copper.

I grinned.

"How poetic" I said.

He looked at me, then down at the knife in his stomach. He yanked it out, with a dazed look in his eyes. Then he began laughing. Louder and louder. Tears were coming out of his eyes, as he laughed hysterically. I could hear him wheezing. Louder, louder, and then he began sobbing. He buried his face into his hands, and sobbed.

"I'm sorry" he said, with tears in his eyes.

Then he fell to the ground. He was dead. I had killed my best friend. He gave me a career, and I thanked him by burying a knife in his gut. Everything started to blur, and I knew I was dying, too.

"See you in he11, my friend." I croaked, weakly.

And then I was gone.



There you go, guys. My attempt at writing. Sorry if it seems a little rushed. I wrote it in 2nd period.
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Ultracrash is not online. Ultracrash
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17 Dec 2013 11:41 AM
Frigging awesome.
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swiftattak7 is not online. swiftattak7
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17 Dec 2013 11:44 AM
See you all in hell.


Nice story.
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tahu157 is not online. tahu157
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17 Dec 2013 12:20 PM
Does this fit in the timeline of the ClearCook story by EquilateralSubject/are you EquilateralSubject using an alt?
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tahu157 is not online. tahu157
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17 Dec 2013 12:22 PM
Also, how does one fire his CEO?
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Castiol is not online. Castiol
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17 Dec 2013 01:29 PM
No this story is a whole other thing from the other timeline.


And this is the criminal industry, you can be a CEO one day and be a street seller the other.
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NilPirate is not online. NilPirate
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17 Dec 2013 02:07 PM
As the Clearcook lawyer, this is gonna be a hell of a cleanup job. Good lord.
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SUNSHlNE is not online. SUNSHlNE
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17 Dec 2013 02:40 PM
Wow this is amazing.
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JewishPiglet is not online. JewishPiglet
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17 Dec 2013 03:19 PM
I love it.

more pls
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LeslieVernon is not online. LeslieVernon
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17 Dec 2013 05:04 PM
im not in it ;-;

But good ye
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MisterMyers is not online. MisterMyers
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17 Dec 2013 05:11 PM
This is just the prologue, Leslie.
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Veronicafan1 is not online. Veronicafan1
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17 Dec 2013 06:37 PM
nice ;-;

especially since you did this in a rush. my goodness, that's amazing.
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Ultracrash is not online. Ultracrash
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17 Dec 2013 07:14 PM
inb4tim
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katienchip is not online. katienchip
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17 Dec 2013 08:31 PM
awesomeeee
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MisterMyers is not online. MisterMyers
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18 Dec 2013 12:49 PM
Okay, I'm just gonna put these in short stories, revolving around CCI. Post if you want to be in the next one.
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katienchip is not online. katienchip
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18 Dec 2013 01:19 PM
i'd like to be in one.

:3
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SUNSHlNE is not online. SUNSHlNE
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18 Dec 2013 01:26 PM
Sure I'd like to be in the next one, I'm XxThundagaxX's alt, which is the cook for Clearcook.
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MisterMyers is not online. MisterMyers
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18 Dec 2013 01:49 PM
Alright, you two can go do a deal that turns bad.
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JewishPiglet is not online. JewishPiglet
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18 Dec 2013 02:22 PM
I'd like to be in one too :3
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ps2player is not online. ps2player
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19 Dec 2013 01:53 PM
Need to bump this, so I can look back on it as I write my next one.
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HerbertGarrison1 is not online. HerbertGarrison1
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19 Dec 2013 02:31 PM
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