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| 03 Aug 2013 02:20 PM |
By SongofSwords, Dzuheron, and EggFr00b
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OT was a lovely land full of wonders. The villagers greeted each other on a daily basis, the obedient pink pigs stayed in their houses, and the king always cared for his people. Well, let’s just say, that used to happen. Little did they know that the arrival of a certain being would change their lives forever. The first people to notice him were the knights, marching and policing the area. A black carriage came from the valley in an almost innocent manner and stopped in the village, the door swinging open. A slightly tall man stepped out of the cart, his almost comically large blue hat obscuring his face from view. His body was pitch black, expression hidden from under the hat. His gaze swept around the soon-to-be nightmare as he slowly strode toward a trembling young boy, who tried in vain to move away, paralyzed by fear. The man gently touched the boy's chin in an admiring manner. He plucked a flower from out of the ground and handed it to the child. The child's locked on the man's face, realizing that he had no eyes, no mouth, and no nose-just an endless void of an impossible black. The man held the flower closer to the boy in a manner that suggested for him to take it. The child's eyes widened as he saw the flower and somehow managed to start moving his legs again, fleeing from the scene. The man stood up and looked at the others who were trembling and paralyzed as well, turning his head in a slightly confused manner.
Two weeks after the first day of the mysterious man's arrival, desperation, fear, and anxiety hung over the village like a cloud.
On Tuesday of the third week, a soothing breeze blew across the valley as birds gently glided in the sky. A young, blonde boy with fresh, young skin and deep blue eyes strode toward the village. As he reached the top of the grassy slopes surrounding the valley, he paused to examine his surroundings. He titled his head, slightly baffled by the fact that the village was absolutely silent. Every building had its shutters drawn tightly and its doors locked. As he was about to turn around to find a different village to go to, he noticed a pitch black figure standing in the center of the village. Hesitantly, the boy strode toward the figure, slightly intimidated. "Um...umm...h-hello?" The boy stammered. "Why is everyone hiding?" The figure turned to face him, and the boy was jumped back, momentarily stunned. The man's face was virtually featureless; no eyes, no mouth, no nose, just pitch black nothingness. Do you want to be my friend? The boy blinked, although he kept his gaze on the figure. "W-who said that?" In front of you, sir. The boy's eyes widened as he realized that the man was the source of the sound. What is your name? The voice said as the man tilted his head to the right in a questioning gesture.
"Len... my name is Len Kagamine." |
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Dzuheron
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Dzuheron
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| 03 Aug 2013 02:30 PM |
WE ARE NINTENDO WE CHALLENGE ALL PLAYERS YOU CANNOT BEAT US |
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Aikai
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| 03 Aug 2013 02:30 PM |
tldr
~did i rustle your jimmies~ |
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| 08 Sep 2013 02:45 PM |
8/10 next chapter needs crishcrinkles pls |
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Dzuheron
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| 08 Sep 2013 02:47 PM |
| Why is this bumped? Who's messing with the timeline? YTENA!!! I NEED YOU HERE |
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| 15 Dec 2013 04:00 PM |
This is freaking amazing. Wow. If this were an anime, I would watch it with pleasure.
--I'd put it on my shopping list but SOMEBODY KIDNAPPED IT AND TOOK IT FOR RANSOM!-- |
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CurzonDax
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| 15 Dec 2013 04:00 PM |
"This is freaking amazing. Wow. If this were an anime, I would watch it with pleasure."
I'm planning to animate it in MMD when I get experienced with the program. |
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| 15 Dec 2013 04:16 PM |
"I'm planning to animate it in MMD when I get experienced with the program."
Wait, really?!
COOL!!!!! |
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Dzuheron
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| 15 Dec 2013 04:26 PM |
"Wait, really?!
COOL!!!!!"
I said this a long time ago... |
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| 15 Dec 2013 04:31 PM |
"I said this a long time ago..."
Oh.
Sorry. |
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Dzuheron
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| 15 Dec 2013 04:32 PM |
"Oh.
Sorry."
no I meant that I talk about it a lot |
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| 15 Dec 2013 04:33 PM |
"no I meant that I talk about it a lot"
Ok. |
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Dzuheron
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| 15 Dec 2013 04:35 PM |
| My problem is that I have absolutely no idea how to make the scenes. |
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| 28 Mar 2014 09:56 PM |
| I'm rereading this, and only now have I noticed, some 7 or 8 months later, that we misspelled "tilted" as "titled..." |
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| 29 Mar 2014 08:51 AM |
| Dzu, do you have a response to that? |
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YOHIOloid
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| 29 Mar 2014 08:53 AM |
noticed two months ago
too lazy to point out
other chapters have other funny errors like from the bedroom into the bedroom
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