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Re: Happy? [A Poem]

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TheStormlsComing is not online. TheStormlsComing
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14 Dec 2013 02:07 PM
I slit my wrists
Every day
Because they call me 'emo'
and think it's okay

They say that only you
Can make yourself happy
But in this world of abuse
How can you make yourself that way?

These so-called 'friends'
Can only lie
Straight to my face
So I ask,
Why can't I die?

I'm writing this poem
For those who have
Abused me, lied to me
The ones who did this to me.

I ask, does it make you happy?
Happy to drive someone to give up their gift?
Their greatest one, known as life?
Because you're making it so my joy has left

I slip the noose
Around my neck
Ready to lose
Everything I've done

But one final question
Before I kick the chair down
So you know my emotional position
Are you happy, now?
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Thepopon8r is not online. Thepopon8r
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14 Dec 2013 02:10 PM
No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No.





Said the raven, "Nevermore."
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swiftattak7 is not online. swiftattak7
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14 Dec 2013 02:10 PM
The two last stanzas where perfect for a 1750's magician movie.
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capricutie is not online. capricutie
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14 Dec 2013 02:11 PM
There is so much meaning in this, it makes me want to cry.

Beautiful poem.
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swiftattak7 is not online. swiftattak7
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14 Dec 2013 02:11 PM
Also great poem by the way.
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TheStormlsComing is not online. TheStormlsComing
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14 Dec 2013 02:16 PM
Thank you for caring, everyone.

@the guy who said "no no no no no" - What?
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Thepopon8r is not online. Thepopon8r
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14 Dec 2013 02:17 PM
For one thing, I have a name.

And I don't like it for personal reasons.....




Said the raven, "Nevermore."
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swiftattak7 is not online. swiftattak7
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14 Dec 2013 02:20 PM
Capri, you should see his other poems.
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capricutie is not online. capricutie
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14 Dec 2013 02:21 PM
Would you be so kind to link me?



ill hug you.
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Thepopon8r is not online. Thepopon8r
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14 Dec 2013 02:22 PM
NUUU CAPRI.


I THOUGHT WE HAD SOMETHING SPECIAL.




Said the raven, "Nevermore."
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capricutie is not online. capricutie
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14 Dec 2013 02:23 PM
IM JUST HUGGING SOMEONE FOR A LINK CALM DOWN







ill buy you bubble tea.
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Thepopon8r is not online. Thepopon8r
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14 Dec 2013 02:25 PM
but............uh...



































bend over.





Said the raven, "Nevermore."
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Olama5 is not online. Olama5
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14 Dec 2013 02:25 PM
@Capricutie (First Post)
I just have my imagination wanting to cry, tears of rainbows.
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NilPirate is not online. NilPirate
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14 Dec 2013 02:25 PM
They call me emo,
so that I'll be.
The idea of self-image
is lost upon me.

It's all their fault
that I'm the way I am;
the world revolves around me.
Why don't they give a damn?

I wish I could be coddled,
let other care for my every need;
it's a harsh world for *me* alone,
so until I stop wanting to
I'll bleed
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TheStormlsComing is not online. TheStormlsComing
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14 Dec 2013 02:26 PM
@Nil

Nice!
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capricutie is not online. capricutie
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14 Dec 2013 02:28 PM
tHE FREAKING POEM GODS ARE COMING OUT
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NilPirate is not online. NilPirate
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14 Dec 2013 02:29 PM
And as I fall into oblivion, sarcasm is lost.

I don't like your poem. Mine was a parody of it.

Your poem falls into the trap of overt sadness. Life is depressing, yes, but it's the same for literally everyone ever, and when you share poetry that's all about you crying about how unfair it is you're just being childish. I go on these forums to not be lonely, but saying that I'm lonely is just exacerbating the problem, if you get my analogy.

I think that everyone should write poetry like this, to provide a fount for negative emotions to escape, but it's not something to spread to the four winds.
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legosareawesome616 is not online. legosareawesome616
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14 Dec 2013 03:16 PM
so many emo I cant even
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EliteKing10Pwner is not online. EliteKing10Pwner
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14 Dec 2013 03:56 PM
@lego Piss off, Quit calling people emo, THEY ARE WONDERFUL ARTISTS..
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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14 Dec 2013 04:08 PM
All I could see was

give me atetion plz1!
give me atetion plz1!
give me atetion plz1!
give me atetion plz1!

give me atetion plz1!
give me atetion plz1!
give me atetion plz1!
give me atetion plz1!
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JackTheOtakuNerd is not online. JackTheOtakuNerd
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14 Dec 2013 04:18 PM
agreed with mage,
good poetry skills,but the idea was dumb
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